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10/27/23, 3:19 AM
There were moments here where my breath literally hitched, and in places I wouldn't have expected. Normally the thing I love about the average GSS story is the removal of agency, the making real of kinks I wouldn't in a billion years want to be subjected to in real life. But military brainwashing without the military, but with the ... accoutrements, for want of a better term, and with a real actual military man doing it? Jesus. Didn't even know I had that kink. And playing it out in a more realistic scenario _really_ works here. All of which is to say, so far, this has been an amazing read.
10/26/23, 1:15 PM
Nice beginning. i’m looking forward to seeing how you answer the questions you raise.

10/27/23, 2:47 AM
@[Kyle Cicero](/user/show/10023983) Thanks! Hope it won't disappoint. Have a lot of ideas, but while writing realized that need to begin with something simple. In second chapter plan to go a lot further. Guess we'll see how it'll turn out soon.
Anonymous
10/26/23, 10:45 AM
Continue! Let's Danny feel how otherworldly the thermos is.

10/27/23, 2:41 AM
@Anonymous He will. And not just thermos ;) Thanks for reading!
10/26/23, 12:43 AM
I lowkey want a minor confrontation between dash and Danny about the thermos. Dash doesn't want to admit that he's attracted to Phantom but then notices that Danny is hard.

10/27/23, 2:40 AM
@[Allan Weiss](/user/show/472888) Will definitely work it into the story. But because Danny can't reveal how he knows what Dash did with it and Dash wouldn't tell that either it'll be awkward for both. Thanks for suggesting!
10/27/23, 1:53 AM
This was really lovely and intriguing -- I'm wondering, has it not been continued yet, or can I find the continuation elsewhere? I'm always delighted when I stumble upon a new story from you that I somehow missed when I obsessively went through your story list the first time.
10/27/23, 12:45 AM
Oh, Jack. I hope there is much more to come and cum.
10/27/23, 12:32 AM
I have been obsessed with the L Dimension. Checking in monthly for the next release for a year now XD It was worth it. You have a distinct creativity to bring these fetishes on the table, I love it. Amazing story.
mic
10/26/23, 9:35 PM
so hot, please more, more adventures there, film it, let him work model in the shop
10/26/23, 9:19 PM
Great work, fun read. Fantastic with how they can't help but to enjoy it as their bodies debauch themselves.
mic
10/26/23, 7:48 PM
so hot, please more, add his funds to yours, use him with your friends a lot, cage him,trick him more, so hot
Anonymous
10/26/23, 7:28 PM
easily one of the best stories / series on this website
mic
10/26/23, 7:27 PM
fucking hot story, please more, great work ideas, please more keeping wallets and packing in your back pocket, please more of your suggestions for their brain, great work
mic
10/26/23, 6:59 PM
fucking hot story, one of the best,love it- the tricking gaining the first time for everything, the debt working off and increasing, trick more dumb guys, please more, love your ideas writing style etc. so hot,enlarge his nipples, trample his balls to dust...
Ab3
10/26/23, 5:44 PM
Damn this one is awesome.... Need more parts.. it's hot and erotic...
10/24/23, 2:19 AM
I really appreciate how the dad's fate is not yet set in stone. Though the reversed roles is a great twist of irony. I suspect he will no longer be 'useful' after he completes his mission and will become Hank's rubber pup. And the revelation from Tri-Hard as he sees Freedom break like that. He realizes this is better than what he planned. Its such a lightbulb moment. I can understand how he felt cheated. He got outdone by his own 'soldier.' Yet reading how all those soldiers are in proper rubber was fitting. It where they belong. Is the rubber permanent? And I suspect that dad is going to have an easy time catching the two boys. They get some quite time to recoup and they just fall down the rabbit hole instead. They are making their capture too easy now that Henry is stuck as a doll. I hope Freedom takes Nick too. It would be so simple. Expect for the inhibitor he has. Does it just work on Henry or can he use it against Freedom too? And if Nick is captured too, what would he be? What kind of training would he get from Hank? How will Hank train Freedom to be a rubber pup if that is still the outcome? Or Henry? He seems to have the other three soldiers in hand doing something. And he has the authority and dominance to control Nick too. I'm already wanting the next chapter. Though if I may be both greedy and a bit critical, I would hope that more detail went into the rubber suiting parts. This moment of their submission and transformation is such a pivotal moment. It has felt a bit flat and rushed in past parts. Maybe greater depth in how they feel? How the rubber gradually seals them in; instead of feet to waist to neck. To really draw out the experience of it. And how they react to it then and how it effects them afterward.

10/24/23, 1:44 PM
@[Marik29](/user/show/10021139) So many questions! I'll answer the one that I can without going into the contents of the next chapter,... The rubber on the soldiers is _mostly_ permanent. They're sealed inside with no way to remove the suits without tearing them. That said, the suits are also intended to be easily replaceable thanks to **Tri-Hard's** machines. The boys can be stripped, shaved and cleaned when needed. As for your criticism; it is fair and I'll take it on board. I do agree and it had crossed my mind, but I'll think about it more. Thanks again!

10/25/23, 7:24 PM
@[Blazargus](/user/show/10012784) I forgot to mention that I really liked the null bulges in the suits. All they need now is a padlock on them just to make it clear. Keeping them trapped and eager and very horny. And thanks for the consideration.

10/26/23, 5:42 PM
@[Marik29](/user/show/10021139) No problem! Hope you like the next chapter when it's done!
10/26/23, 5:40 PM
Original and well written :heart: The first half felt very realistic, with the main character's anxiety, doubts, low self-esteem, and low influx of intrusive thoughts. It's easy to believe he's pushing himself out of his comfort zone to make an relevant change in his life. Then we get to the second part and the real MC fantasy begins. I loved how you described the main character's suspicions being put down by his fear of rejection and naiveté. Also, I found the induction to be well narrated, both with the parallelisms between the characters in and out of the screen, and Jackson seductively whispering sweet things into the virgin's ear. I read people thought this was cute... I must say I see it differently :stuck_out_tongue_closed_eyes: The main character is cute, yes, but Jackson? He just wants good sex, and to feel high in power for transforming nervous wrecks into a sex-machines. And there's nothing wrong with that! But that's not cute. Sexy maybe? He's definitely not a bad guy, but he's certainly not cute or romantic ;)
10/26/23, 5:26 PM
One of the things I love most about both of you is the escalation of the sexual frenzies and romps. Just a stroll through slight horniness at first, but by the end it's no holds barred (no holes barred?), frantic sexcapades, and I'm there for it each and every time. This was no exception!
Oct 26, 2023
10/26/23, 4:51 PM
Super hot! I love fairy tale fiction. And I love your writing! Bravo
mic
10/26/23, 3:17 PM
wow hot ideas, please more,transform more guys like that, more
10/26/23, 1:10 PM
Any more to this story?
Anonymous
10/26/23, 9:14 AM
Love the idea of hypnosis and hair cutting/shampooing. Wish I had a barber like that. Hope to see more stories that involve barbers and shampooing
10/26/23, 9:04 AM
Very hot story
10/25/23, 10:35 PM
please continue!. I can't wait to read the next chapter

Nova
10/26/23, 5:33 AM
@[arteagafg](/user/show/10031869) I’ll get back to doing a part 3 later. Rn I’m trying to see if I can do a Halloween themed story for the challenge going on. I don’t think it’ll be as smutty tho… hopefully you still like it. Wish me luck.🔩⚡️🩺
10/26/23, 4:15 AM
I would love this to be a long-running series. Good start, but it definitely needs more
10/26/23, 12:52 AM
I agree with the first commenter. It felt super rushed and could use som pacing
10/26/23, 12:25 AM
This deserves more love than it seems to have gotten! Cuckolding is very much not my kink, but you made it highly erotic here, man.
10/26/23, 12:18 AM
Chinese fan here. Just can't describe my surprise to see you here! lol
Anonymous
10/25/23, 11:54 PM
אחי חייב להמשיך את זה
10/25/23, 11:42 PM
An intriguing start, let's see what happens next)