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As if I didn't already love the mind control on both factions and the ability to revert changes like bringing snake soldiers back, the possession at the end cemented it. I hope you never stop this storyline, I always wanted something like this. Sidenote: hope everything else in ya life is good. We only see you as the writer part you show us but hope ya day and week and stuff go well. Haha

it's like a gay Fight club. love the imaginative twists and imagery. excellent and enviable piece.

i wonder if steve will make any modifications to JOE's hair / facial hair/ body. a very very hot story!

Amazing! Can't wait to see more!!

This is a really awesome series and you're a great writer! Can't wait to read more.

Great beginning! Hope to see what happens next!

Hot!

The transformations involved really worked for me!

what a fantastically sexy little orgy! a true maestro... and sounds like web wonder is going to have a companion soon ;)

> This rivals Hypnothrill’s CycleOne Challenge story arc as among the most arousing pieces of erotic fiction that I’ve read > Isn't it funny how sometimes we can take someone else's concept and flesh it out so beautifully? Hypnothrill's take on my CYCLE ONE got me off more than once! He just nailed the psychological progression of masculine corruption, so I agree with your comparison completely!

> Wagnerian in concept > Wow... okay. To be honest, I was just trying to equal a good LEGION storyline. I don't think I used enough of the horn section to be truly Wagnerian. I'm a musician myself -- a pianist. I was lucky enough to have made my living as a performer for many years. Then, like most musicians, I taught -- myself, I taught little kids, an awesome experience, that taught me a lot about teaching music. It's funny how Wagner is the "go-to" when we think of over-the-top opera. (Throw on a helmet with horns and let the fat ladies sing!) But conceptually, I agree -- Rex 2 has all the elements of good opera. And what do you expect in an opera.... a happy ending? (paraphrasing Bugs Bunny)

love when a story continues like this one . any chance Nicky that you could continue this but bring in his dad , that would finish the story nicely

i agree with the inclusion of buzz and woody into the sexy times !! Using as them as dildos would be so hot

fuck great story. I couldn't help imaging it was me! Nicky always knows Im so hot for Colby. I kept picturing him to have a monster dong. fucking my face stuffing my butt treating me like dirty slut with a stuffed cum filled pussy butt fuck nicky

loving it so far!

This rivals Hypnothrill's CycleOne Challenge story arc as among the most arousing pieces of erotic fiction that I've read; engaging, lushly detailed and complete. Thank you!

Wagnerian in concept ("renounce love to get the Ring and absolute power"). Down to the Norn and Rhinemaiden ("immortal composers")...well, maybe not the incest (Siegfried, child of twins, fucks his aunt). Each of the separate universes could be a whole series if fleshed out, no pun intended. I'm just worried that like the Time Stalker, Rex is in danger of forgetting his love and lust, with so many worlds to conquer with his power. It might get boring... The beginning and the end being the same reminds me of musical techniques like Bach's Musical Offering and Hindemith's Ludus Tonalis. Bravo!

Loved it!!!

can i see the picture? nice history by the way, i love indian bears

This takes both enthusiasm, patience, dedication, and encouragement. Not that no one has these qualities today but part of it is because we owe so much of what's come before there's not as much need to invent things from scratch or learn what is or is not reliable. So if someone could pick up and continue from this "Cliffhanger" playing with absmans toys play with fantasy do toys I would be much obliged. But at the same time I know that's a tall order to replicate both the energy and the promise while leaving enough room for you to creatively fulfill yourself. that said this is one of the few muscle growth stories that I feel stops beyond the whole "and now I've become a muscle sex head" and actually sort of goes back home and take stock of what the transformation has actually wrought upon themselves and their lives especially as that's actually part of their goals. It gave it a sort of Unique Edge in events along with the diversity of the characters who have gone through the process and how much that they had changed. Small town transformed of course would be a theme that would be explored through other authors and tales such as musclelove, Texas and I'd say reoccurs through Wesley Bracken's stuff but I don't think anyone's quite hit the mixture that comes with the bud brothers having come home and having to distribute their stuff. The closest would be, in my opinion believe it or not a bunch of straight mc bodychange fiction from [The Works of Christina Prince and Charles Wallace.](https://muscle-growth.org/topic/8604-men-to-bulls-women-to-cows/) who tends take the idea of someone either lost in the midwest or the Midwest invades their local slice of Suburbia advancement and have it sort of become corrupted by an over-the-top breeding agenda. Most notably inspired by Calvin signs we get the interesting idea of an operation in the background spreading various body morphing then brainwashing products in order to cause the changes among the population . each favor a distinct but changing Viewpoint character who usually holds out towards the end. she often realizing too late changed by the events as they slowly fall into the indoctrination usually some archetype of an oversexed character to a domineering male or community role of sexual bliss for male apppetite. And again this stuff was primarily straight but unlike most straight stuff it doesn't feel as if it's either all the girls being sexy or all the guys being void suits that you can just sort of put on . in particular the Mounten and mayne feels like it is especially bi, sorta, spot with the corruption of the husband when the Viewpoint character is the wife. she finds he slowly starts changing into more of a bull man who finds himself more able and drawn to have sex outside the bounds of marriage with his once software engineer long-term roommate once his equal and now he becomes something of believer who suddenly gets to act more patriarchal and Powerful while his wife starts become more of an air-headed slit-in bimbo who absolutely aadors sexually pleasing him. And I know comparing the work of Christina Prince to absman420s doing a take off of fantasy dude seems completely out there but I would really honestly ask people give it a chance. there is a reason why a gay flip knock off or similar ideas have been taken by @hypnothrill another author with a pretty diverse profolio who plays with these ideas off and on. That is taking an MF story and then making it mm absman.in particular I like how Christina tends to show a descent into sexual Mania not unlike though obviously distinct from the masculine homoeroticism absman and others do. and by why of body change to role that takes over.

Great start! (For those of us who know Egyptology, 5,000 years is the upper limit of pyramids' existence; 3-4,000 years would be more true to history.)

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Ha ha, what a fun idea! :D Love Dr. Who, and this type of transformation. I know that it will be creepy, but an army of musclehead bros...mmmmm. Wouldn't mind having some fun with them.

Hot! Love the idea of toys having control of a cocky jock and his hot dad. Hope they really humiliate these 2. I'd love if the toys got more involved with the fucking too with buzz and woody being the dildos themselves, etc.

wonderful Thanks

Excellent work

The first line told me that I was going to like this story ("Copyright and all that jazz" 😊 ) Ha, ha, ha! oh, man, you made me laugh a lot! I never expected this! I'm not a fan of that movie series, but that's a sequel that I would love to see! I'm very intrigued to read the rest!

Its great! maybe you can bring a bit of transformation to the story. I would love to see that all people, who are altered or corrupted by Landon, will be free after there fall trip or at least that it is not permanent. It would ruin my image of Landon, that friendly cool guy who helps others. Can't wait to read the next parts!