Recent Comments

Anonymous
9/2/19, 3:35 PM
really looking forward to how this goes!
Anonymous
9/2/19, 3:16 PM
continue, please
lloyd311@aol.com
9/2/19, 2:16 PM
Great start! Please keep it coming...
Anonymous
9/2/19, 1:45 PM
Love this series!
Anonymous
9/2/19, 1:21 PM
more please!
jeep4191@gmail.com
9/2/19, 1:04 PM
Fantastic beginning! Can't wait to see where it goes!
Anonymous
9/2/19, 10:51 AM
good start. would be interesting to see where this story goes :)
Jan 18, 2017
Anonymous
9/2/19, 12:59 AM
Yes! Please continue! Haha!
Oct 3, 2016
Anonymous
9/1/19, 9:13 PM
nice rubber story..
Anonymous
9/1/19, 4:16 PM
I hope too
Anonymous
9/1/19, 3:35 PM
will we see part 3 soon?
Ng5hvlo4
9/1/19, 12:52 PM
So amazing and hot! The induction method of electricity + gas + colors + white noise = so hot to me. Is there a part 3?
9/1/19, 6:31 AM
Quite adorable, really. I liked it! For a moment I was expecting the narrator and Phil to be attached to the same person since they liked cuddling so much.
nerdysuitedbaby
9/1/19, 4:07 AM
Hope chapter 4 is coming soon
9/1/19, 3:51 AM
"I AM DEATH" That took me back. I did not expect it. I liked how Unit 7 sensed it as it happened. Bringing death is an intriguing detail, not much seen in our stories. Very interested to see where it will go.
Anonymous
9/1/19, 3:27 AM
I don't know where you're going, but I'm enjoying it so far.
Anonymous
9/1/19, 1:42 AM
great story!
jeep4191@gmail.com
8/31/19, 11:25 PM
PLEASE expand this story! ABSOLUTELY AWESOME!
jeep4191@gmail.com
8/31/19, 11:22 PM
yoga, anyone???
Anonymous
8/31/19, 11:18 PM
Is this going to continue?
Anonymous
8/31/19, 10:49 PM
I hope to see part 3 soon
Anonymous
8/31/19, 10:37 PM
would be great to get a third chapter
Anonymous
8/31/19, 10:10 PM
Really great story, well done. Absolutely loved it.
8/31/19, 9:58 PM
Another excellent hot chapter! Interesting to find that Unit Dan has partly caused all this to happen. Can't wait to see what comes next!
jeep4191@gmail.com
8/31/19, 9:34 PM
Malskin, I think you will be pleased where unit Dan ends up at the end of this little story... thanks for continuing yo read! Bulk, glad you liked it! Hope you keep reading!
Anonymous
8/31/19, 9:16 PM
aww! that's really sweet ❤️
blankbot
8/31/19, 9:11 PM
Short, sweet, and highly erotic. Nicely done.
Bulk
8/31/19, 9:08 PM
OMG Classic Sci-Fi plot twist!! YES
malskin
8/31/19, 8:38 PM
I for one hopes that GREAT LEADER, BLESSED BE, find out about a misfuntioning Unit 2 and sends an earlier that expected download to that unit and totally corrects its programing, in facts makes it the lead and head of all unit 2's ye again have to say great writing
Aug 31, 2019
jeep4191@gmail.com
8/31/19, 7:51 PM
GREAT short story! Nice, quick story arc!