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8/19/19, 10:13 PM
Minus the hair, which I can easily ignore, this was spectacularly hot. Loved how he got two for the price of one. Hehe
Cigarman
8/19/19, 9:24 PM
Horny! made this top SO hard - and envious of Jet. Well written too, which adds to it.
8/19/19, 8:38 PM
Hi Stormbound I was partly inspired by Frankenstein and his monster, and wanted to tell the same story from a M/S mind control and gruesome transformation perspective. Thanks for liking the story.
Anonymous
8/19/19, 7:28 PM
I absolutely adore the fact that the "popped collar" is what finalizes the transformation. Wish we could see more of that!
Anonymous
8/19/19, 6:49 PM
very cruel..
8/19/19, 6:27 PM
Very hot story overall. The only thing that I really didn't like was the cock changes involving the vein tubes and splitting open, that personally grosses me out but I understand that's my preference. Love that the final result was bear like, I was expecting a dog TF given your username, but the bear theme was perfect
8/19/19, 6:07 PM
Wh-where does the concept need to be?
degoetz@yahoo.com
8/19/19, 4:09 PM
This was incredibly hot! We need more kinky transformation like this in our mind control stories
8/19/19, 2:54 PM
Flattop, Sir, Will this wonderful story continue? ...
Bimarguy
8/19/19, 11:19 AM
WOW ! what an original concept , i dont intend or mean to insult cocktrice , but Martin this concept should be brought ti rubbersome's attention . he with his kinky mind can get this concept where it needs to be
Slavethruhypno@yahoo.com
8/19/19, 6:28 AM
i understand the story makes him hate sucking other men on command, but the reality is that it is so damned satisfying having a Man order you to suck whomever he chooses!
Anonymous
8/19/19, 6:06 AM
damn good, thanks for the 2 new releases!
Anonymous
8/19/19, 4:35 AM
Fantastic work!!! I love that you kept Justin somewhat aware of his actions throughout. Can't wait to see what happens to Casey and Simon!
Anonymous
8/19/19, 3:26 AM
Keep it going!!!
hypnojockpup1234@gmail.com
8/19/19, 2:24 AM
I want to find this bar. OMG very hot
GermanSlut
8/19/19, 2:16 AM
Just... Perfect.
CalculatedSpace
8/19/19, 2:12 AM
Thank you guys for the feedback! @ForgottenCradle I'm looking to add more to this story eventually, but I might work on a different story first before getting back to this @Bluedude Thank you very much! I'm starting to work on another one! @david Thank you! I really appreciate the feedback. I try to keep the induction pretty authentic because it's my favorite part with regards to hypnosis. I've written this story as a one-of but also open ended so I might continue it as well eventually. I'm working on other stories for now and will post them when I can!
8/19/19, 1:18 AM
Loved it. Ethan in his new frat role and Griffen being transformed into a beast. Well done. Can't wait to read on
Tom
8/19/19, 1:13 AM
loved this story so much! PLEASE write more soon.
8/19/19, 1:02 AM
Wow! Thank you all for your kind words. I'm glad that my kinky and perverted mind is able to entertain you. I hope you all enjoyed it!
8/19/19, 12:23 AM
Very hot. Though its tok bsd horward is beimg changed himself. But yes very very hot. And yes, butthole is delicious.
Aug 17, 2019
leonardo
8/18/19, 11:21 PM
original and it sends mind and cock at work. The theme is worth it to expand on the story.
Anonymous
8/18/19, 7:37 PM
Great story! Would be great to find that bar. Being a rubber pup 24/7 has been a dream of mine for a long time.
Anonymous
8/18/19, 6:33 PM
this is so hot ! can't believe I've never read this before. loved the induction part the most. I love how he was oblivious and serious during the whole scene. I was hoping he'd "work" in that office for a bit. Thinking he was doing office work but really he is sucking of/riding Frederick and his twins. all the debasing stuff but oblivious to them. Anyway. was very hot ! thank you for your amazing writing.
Anonymous
8/18/19, 6:24 PM
Sign me up for one of those suits in black with long sleeves. If only one could have a suit like that.
Anonymous
8/18/19, 6:10 PM
This story is amazing. Its intensely hot and I cant wait for each chapter. Please don't make us wait too long! I'm especially looking forward to the corruption of The Sun God and Peren!
8/18/19, 5:19 PM
I like the idea of playing with the epilogue/prologue dichotomy as a way of creating a full circle-style narrative; well crafted,overall.
8/18/19, 3:57 PM
awesome!
Mike Hammond
8/18/19, 2:52 PM
In real life Jeff is a cruel man because he is notorious top on screen. :) One of my favourite sex fantasies is big-dicked guys as bottom, like Jeff and other porn stars like Ken Ryker, Ryan Chandler, Rick Donovan, Lito Cruz, Rocco Steele and many others.