Recent Comments

Anonymous
9/17/19, 4:02 AM
Great story!! Loved it!!!!
Anonymous
9/17/19, 4:01 AM
I liked this story!! It had sex and social commentary. Well done!!!
9/17/19, 2:45 AM
A pure work of erotic art. Bravo.
Sep 16, 2019
Anonymous
9/17/19, 1:48 AM
wish to see smart students in the dorms infected, muscled and turned into smelly dumb jock.
Anonymous
9/17/19, 12:47 AM
Great! Please keep going!!!!!
Taylor
9/17/19, 12:16 AM
Fuck yeah, no vanilla here thank God....lets trash boy's trailer in a proper meet and greet with the crew!!
9/17/19, 12:09 AM
So much to compliment you on with this story. But instead of writing so much, I'll leave one word: PERFECT!
Sep 16, 2019
Anonymous
9/16/19, 11:39 PM
It does not need a sequel. Great and hot. Love to see a hive of jock. Thanks a lot!! I was, however, wondering the dorm management had been aware of it.
Sep 16, 2019
9/16/19, 11:03 PM
One of the best stories ever, I loved it!
joaopomilio@hotmail.com
9/16/19, 10:50 PM
is this the final part?
9/16/19, 10:29 PM
I'm gonna wait till tge otger chaspters are out as I'm not sure where things are going, lol. But that said straight to gay is hot and an all gay society is spectacular.
Billy Coupe
9/16/19, 10:04 PM
Please continue. Straight to gay stories are the best.
Sep 16, 2019
Anonymous
9/16/19, 9:51 PM
I love this alot. the musk and sweat aspect is so appealing. I love a sweaty pig jock. I could see maybe the creator of the DVDs comes to collect his boys. Maybe a daddy bear.
Anonymous
9/16/19, 9:04 PM
what episode of black mirror is this?
transformheaven
9/16/19, 8:50 PM
Curious to see how this continues :)
Sep 16, 2019
transformheaven
9/16/19, 8:43 PM
I agree woth Hypnothrill, good job!
Anonymous
9/16/19, 8:43 PM
its ok when it happens to straights apparently
Sep 16, 2019
9/16/19, 8:27 PM
What a hot story! Definitely one of your finest works, in my opinion.
M
9/16/19, 8:26 PM
Really cool story! I can't wait to read the next chapter!
Martin
9/16/19, 7:35 PM
Ufff... I'm afraid that this is going to be about reversed conversion therapy... 😟
Anonymous
9/16/19, 5:32 PM
ngl this was kinda sad. like, up until the end, i thought it was going to be all Jerry, and Jax would be left destitute of happiness (even if *he* was, his *story* wasn't), and that kinda set a cloud on the whole thing. although the end was fuckin hooooooooot
Mdlftr
9/16/19, 4:43 PM
WHoa! Centaur transformation~! Cool!
9/16/19, 4:20 PM
Great story!
Anonymous
9/16/19, 11:44 AM
Please do more. I read this story on mcstories a few years ago and always looked for a continuation but never found it.
staritman 1
9/16/19, 11:43 AM
Hypnothrill per your suggestion cleaned up the grammar and added quotation marks to set the dialogue apart, to make it easier to read. I get to caught up in my own stories
StarryEye
9/16/19, 10:11 AM
this is my fav
Anonymous
9/16/19, 9:58 AM
Thanks man! You are a fantastic writer and you know how to magnify the masculinity and describe transformation! Many thanks!
Anonymous
9/16/19, 6:13 AM
Great story, for sure! Though wish the dumbing and slutting aspects were drawn out a sliiiiight bit more. But for a short story, definitely fits the bill. Would love to see more in this particular setting, if such a mood ever arises for ya.
Sep 11, 2019
slavethruhypno@aol.com
9/16/19, 1:25 AM
Great start!