Recent Comments

Willie Cici
9/6/19, 4:50 PM
I loved it. Sexy and though-provocative. I read it twice to make sure I caught all the nuance.
9/6/19, 3:57 PM
I too am hoping that Unit Dan finds a solution to this problem. It's really amazing how much character (and therefore empathy) has poor Dan been endowed with. Once nanobots have been introduced into a human body, I don't think there's a way to get rid of them since they've altered the structure. So the best that could be hoped for is a revised social structure, no more forced conversions, and Unit Dan will have to remain Unit Dan, unless jeep has a Deus ex machina in store for us...
9/6/19, 3:06 PM
Thanks! I'm glad you liked it~ I plan to publish some more stories themed around crossdressing, so stay tuned!
Anonymous
9/6/19, 3:03 PM
Fantastic development!! Can't wait to see were it goes. Congratulations :)
Anonymous
9/6/19, 8:56 AM
fantastic never enough cross-dressing on here
Xmale06
9/6/19, 8:55 AM
After almost four years I hope you'll soon be able to go on the story. The idea as well as the writing are awesome, and still as exciting as ever. You rock, man!
Anonymous
9/6/19, 7:45 AM
while it did not have to explain it in detail in this story, i wish to learn more about this FIT PHARM and their business model.
Anonymous
9/6/19, 7:34 AM
Is EVOLVE the name of one of their supplements? I really like those name and wish to have one for myself!! Great story !!
Demospam7@hotmail.nl
9/6/19, 5:59 AM
ooh. I like the ending! maybe have archer and web wonder unfrozen and give them eachother
Anonymous
9/6/19, 4:37 AM
Amazing cinematic development!!
9/6/19, 3:41 AM
Agreed, great concept. Good story telling. I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter.
9/6/19, 3:29 AM
It makes total sense for sure. But those unit Declans don't sound worthy of their high position, with so many other types of worthy unit in the great society. I look forward to unit Dan rectifying the situation. I'm sure he'll find a model of unit 1 that is truly worthy to administer the great society
jeep
9/6/19, 2:50 AM
Stormbound, doesn't it make sense that someone like Declan, with a God complex would want to cast unit 1's in his image (even though he doesn't resemble them any longer having "perfected" himself) Don't worry, unit Dan has a plan that should save the Great Society...
9/6/19, 2:14 AM
Boy, Unit Declans/1s sound really pathetic. To think they're supposed to be at the top of the great society? I hope unit Dan is victorious and able to save the great society. All of those hot sweaty musclebound unit 7's, those beastly cruel unit 6's, orderly and just unit 2's are all counting on him
Anonymous
9/6/19, 1:21 AM
Amazing! Can't wait for the next part!
Anonymous
9/6/19, 12:54 AM
Please sir I would like some more
JR
9/6/19, 12:35 AM
I liked this story but i think it would be hot to get it from the perspective of Peter and Sloan
Anonymous
9/5/19, 11:41 PM
really looking forward to the next chapter!
9/5/19, 10:53 PM
very interesting concept!
9/5/19, 10:45 PM
Gah! Brain melt. Sooooo sexy!! Love the slow conditioning. Love the needy hole. Love their growing need for each other. Peter not caring about cock size is an awww moment as well. Followed by ooh on its sexiness. The mental image thing is perfect, especially as he one day adds himself so they serve him. I hope scent gets added. the scent of male, each other, and one day their master. I also look forward to the time when the other guys become effected too. I also like him coming up with issues then writing programs to get what he wants. like the ass thing, thats soo cool. Maybe he can use the nanobots to aid in health enhancement. Healthier bodies after all mean longer more vigorous sex. Seriously this is a super sexy fantastic story. ps. Its not really two chapters, its just a longer regular chapter. hehe
Bulk
9/5/19, 9:35 PM
The writing in this was superb!
Anonymous
9/5/19, 8:33 PM
Great story, thanks for sharing!
Anonymous
9/5/19, 4:40 PM
I meant part 8
Anonymous
9/5/19, 2:27 PM
will we see part 3 soon?
Anonymous
9/5/19, 2:12 PM
keep going, please
Slave Abdamelek
9/5/19, 12:35 PM
I am hard at work on the next chapter, where you will see the Pharaoh's Empire in all its glory, and how it all began.
Bimarguycnj
9/5/19, 11:32 AM
ive always love stories about being turned into someone elses cock , good story
malskin
9/5/19, 9:03 AM
a great new chapter added - the cloth is learning and growing
Anonymous
9/5/19, 8:38 AM
Looking forward to where this goes! Loves exhibitionism and embarrassment.
Anonymous
9/5/19, 8:10 AM
Thank you so much!! I guess John did not remember what Jonny said to John but they were deeply implanted to him. I wish we could have a chance to know what they were talking...