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10/18/23, 6:13 PM
Love the idea of a massage as a way to seduce a muscled stud into submission. Very hot story Jack Parker!
10/18/23, 12:04 PM
Yo, I love that you included hulklings and wiccan, I've never seen them on here before and they are my favorite

10/18/23, 1:18 PM
@[Joseph22](/user/show/10010520) Great taste! At some point early on my boyfriend and I each made up a list of Marvel characters we wanted to include, and Wiccan and Hulkling were on both of ours.

10/18/23, 1:39 PM
@[Manicorn](/user/show/10041123) Is it a good thing I hope something happens to them, lol

10/18/23, 2:42 PM
@[Joseph22](/user/show/10010520) Well they wouldn't be your "favorites" if you didn't kinda want to see them kinkily objectified and humiliated, would they? -;]

10/18/23, 2:50 PM
@[Manicorn](/user/show/10041123) True, plus it helps that there is so little in regards to fanfics about them, hahaha
10/18/23, 1:39 PM
I, too, loved the story. great to see John fucking his brat of a son. I can only imagine, what happens. I am sure Daniel will not be pleased, nor Daddy.
Ben
10/18/23, 1:29 PM
This is so hot. I hope there are more parts to come for this story.
10/18/23, 1:05 PM
I hope the author doesn’t abandon the story. And if he does, let him let someone finish it if no one minds. ​
10/17/23, 11:38 PM
There's probably something in this story that I didn't really develop. And it's my fault for not doing that. It's kind of hard to explain but I'll do my best. There are ideas in film, literature and art that suggests that there's a metaphorical hole in all men's hearts. That this hole can never be filled. And it seems to explain why we suffer from greed, cruelty, obsessions and pretty much everything that makes man bad. That man is constantly searching for something to fill this hole. Do you guys know what I'm talking about? Well, in my experience, it seems that man is only satisfied, is at that climax ... that amazing awesome moment of sexual gratification. But that moment can feel so fleeting. Just as soon as we reach it, we can't maintain it. So, my idea was: what if when we reached that moment, it was done so in such a way that we connected permanently with other men. And through that connection, it filled in that hole. And the more men that joined and bonded, the greater and stronger the connection become. This idea was hard to convey in the story. Simply because each chapter is told from the perspective of a character. And these characters have a limited understanding. And because they're sorta caught unaware by the situation, they don't really understand what's happening to them. They can only respond by the overwhelming desire to be joined and make that connection. Also, a friend asked me how I get ideas for my many stories. In the case of The Male Order, this whole story evolved out of a BVSTARD.AI's image. It's the image depicted in this chapter. I captioned it as Subject-9 (the man squatting down, with his hands fused into the ground). Sometimes, when I see something, my mind wants to explore what I'm seeing. In this case, I was so turned on by the image, I wanted to know who this man was. And more importantly, I wanted to be this man. For me, I saw a handsome man wearing a fabulous rubber suit. His hands were fused to the surface, so I assumed he had some kind of connection to the environment. His face is partially in shadow, given him a tranquil appearance. And his eyes are also in shadow, almost making it appear that he's "powered down" ... like he's in some kind of meditative state. My imagination immediately got the best of me, and created this story. So to answer this friend's question: I usually get my story ideas from the climax. I see the ending first. In this case, I saw a massive collection of men, squatting down on the haunches, being connected into a great community. So then, I had to work backwards. I had to fill in the gaps, explaining how all these men came to exist in this community. I had to explain how he (or we) would eventually end up in these rubberized bodies. And that's how I started writing Step 1. So when writing my stories, I usually know the destination. I just have to figure out the journey.

10/18/23, 1:01 PM
@[rubbrsome](/user/show/13662) I think I know what you are talking about the hole in men’s heart, and the only satisfied moment is climax. I believe I had heard these theories before.
10/18/23, 12:33 PM
Thanks for another great story, Jack. Deeply dark, but so much fun.
mic
10/18/23, 9:25 AM
so fucking hot, please skullfuck and dumb more guys down, even permanent, so hot, want too, a dream
Flamefox23
10/18/23, 8:52 AM
Hot, love it. Great story
10/18/23, 7:54 AM
I love reading Johnny gradually go from stud to bitch. Though I'm also about the side adventure Sammy went on with Devlin. Look forward to more!
10/18/23, 7:32 AM
An amazing addition to an amazing story! I liked how, just like Ari before him, Andrew saw the unintended consequences of the changes he made. However, I'm kind of worried about Ari calling him pathetic. I hope that Ari won't fall out of love or become exceedingly toxic (not that this situation is so benign). I admit that another reason is that I really like the idea of Ari being dominated by both his dad and Andrew (and maybe also Ryan?). Curious to see where it will go next :)
10/18/23, 6:37 AM
Please please need more
10/18/23, 4:23 AM
I really enjoyed this chapter. Turning the arrogant and heartless Joseph into a wimpering defeated person. Domenico is the anti-hero using his power to bring down the bigger evil.

10/18/23, 5:46 AM
@[DJeiKier](/user/show/10021357) I'm glad you enjoyed it! I'd say Domenico is more of an anti-villain, he is kinda going insane as the story progresses, with his grandiose attitude and his ever growing God complex affecting more and more how he uses his power, but in particular Joseph was such an awful person that Domenico didn't even bother to prey on his lust or desire for love and tormented him in a way that kinda mirrored how Joseph spent so much of his life tormenting other people, and I'll even go out on a limb and say it is not the last time Domenico uses his power to enact Justice on evil men.
10/18/23, 2:33 AM
So happy to see this chapter to be updated. I really love how chaotic this concept is. Cant wait to see if we will get an incestous cabin orgy with Ryan added to the mix.
10/15/23, 1:44 AM
Do you know if chapters are published in Chinese on the website once a month or not? I’m just reading your translation from there too)

Kuu
10/16/23, 1:24 AM
@[Zander](/user/show/10015044) idk, there are only like 6 chapters left. It's still supposed to be "ongoing" but I wouldn't keep my hope up for new chapters. At least by the latest chapter (posted in Chinese), both the brothers are hypnotized.

Anonymous
10/18/23, 12:02 AM
@[Kuu](/user/show/919038) I googled the story name and found 11 chapters here, not six, Now both brothers are hypnotised and he adding on another classmate https://www.cd-sco.com/info_tlyh/dir.html

Kuu
10/18/23, 1:09 AM
@Anonymous Yeah, thanks. I found that too, but the friend's story isn't done yet ( I think?). I read the description there, that's why I warned that the author may drop it at any time.
10/18/23, 12:29 AM
What a great take-down of the coach. Dexter getting the coach to beg was a fun twist. I will look forward to what happens to the coach next. Meanwhile, the statue-mode treatment of Cody was really well-done! I could practically feel the transformation happening.
10/18/23, 12:22 AM
Bravo. Of course it's a great story, as is all your work. Those of us who are your fans sort of know that black rubber is going to take over. But one of your wonderful attributes is that one never quite knows how is it going to happen. More importantly, this story has something different - that being assimilated into the rubber network is a good and glorious thing. And like your, this reader (and I assume others) want to join that glorious unity. Despite the hundreds of stories on this site, I find very few have a satisfying ending. What you have achieved in this story is the antidote to that: You acknowledge that your readers and you (as well as the readers among each other) achieve a "communion" with each other when we read your stories. So not everyone one of us may be in black rubber, but perhaps that you have been able to take us on your journey (which is your own form of mind control) might result in a more satisfying feeling. Again: Bravo!
10/16/23, 10:08 PM
Had to read this again while waiting on @absman420 next novels. What made the jock magical. Was it soaked in the coach's cum and sweat? As Goldy was flexing and Toby had his first taste of cock I really expected coach to slip his cock in Toby's ass. Let his magical cum work from both ends. As his balls absorbed the magic from the fabric his prostate could absorbe some from the source. Clearly the coach was the one wielding the power. I think we need a quicky where coach creates another magic jock strap and teaches a prospective catcher how to properly squat down. Or a wrestler that can't quite make the next weight class.

10/17/23, 9:50 AM
@[TexMuscle](/user/show/10002223) I have to tell you the honest truth — I’ve never given it any thought at all. The jockstrap was just a device. I’ve no idea it’s origin.

10/17/23, 2:18 PM
@[absman420](/user/show/162063) The coach in the story whispered in his ear as the jock was taking effect. Maybe a few magical words but mainly instructions on how Toby was to serve Goldy. I just wanted to throw that idea out there. Let it awaken an erotic thought in your balls as it bakes. Maybe we all get another story and an orgasm to say thank you. @[absman420](/user/show/162063) I was probably thinking of your other story "The Jocking Tale". The brothers wear Butch's jock and improves their athletic ability. Maybe this coach played at that college and was transformed. Smells like a cross over and little bit like old sex.
Anonymous
10/17/23, 10:13 PM
What happens to the men when connected to the hive-mind , can they contact each other and talk normally inside the hive-mind ?

10/17/23, 11:21 PM
@Anonymous You asked whether “they can contact each other and talk normally inside the hive-mind?” My answer is sorta no. The reason being is there’s not really any need to contact each other. This is because they are of one mind. They are each other. There is a constant, and never-ending flow of communication between any man that has been connected. I'm not sure if anyone noticed but once the men "connect" they no longer speak using sounds. I wanted to write a story in which there is no communication from the converted or assimilated. That way, there would be no monologuing on what the grand scheme was. In fact, I had the scientists go over several cliched possibilities. But we really don't know what their endgame is. But the title of this chapter is "Communion". Communion is defined as “the sharing or exchanging of intimate thoughts and feelings, especially when the exchange is on a mental or spiritual level.” So imagine if your mind and soul are constantly sharing. Everyone else’s mind and spirit is moving in and out of you … through you. So it’s not really contacting; they’re already forever part of you. And all of that is being broadcast out like a beacon, luring more and more men towards the tower. I hope that makes sense.
10/17/23, 9:47 PM
Great ending! I also loved the earlier scene with all the men pointing in the direction of the beacon when asked where "home" is--properly eerie!

10/17/23, 9:57 PM
@[Hypnothrill](/user/show/37386) Thanks, Hypnothrill. I really hoped that this would be a worthy ending. My idea is that the steps basically repeat at this point. As the area around the tower grows, the broadcast or the transmission also increases in range and potency. And more and more men begin the steps towards communion. And by communion, I meant both that men are unified in a community, and also a somewhat religious experience as they sorta worship the tower. It's weird though that you mention the pointing scene. I hadn't actually planned that scene. I was writing the scene with the doctor talking to the general, and just figured that he would present some kind of scientific experiment. And that just sorta fell out of my head. And as I wrote it, I thought: this is creepy! Men all pointing in a singular direction, and not really being aware or why they're pointing. I wonder if I subconsciously got it from Close Encounters of the Third Kind. I wasn't actively thinking of that movie, but I do remember the scene in which all the men point towards the sky. Maybe that's what inspired me ... it's hard to say. But I just typed it out without really planning it. Sorry if I'm going off on a tangent. But when I first wrote that scene, the men were in the cafeteria, and the women in the gymnasium. And after quickly writing it, and thinking about it, I reversed the locations. I thought it would be appropriate to place the men in the gymnasium. After all, the words origin is Greek for a place that men exercise in the nude. So I thought it would be better to place the men in the gym. So it just shows that I really didn't plan that scene out. And if a writer ever feels the muse, it's best to just write it out and see where your random thoughts take you.
TW
10/17/23, 8:49 PM
Hi! I’ve finally found the time indulge in this story and just wanted to share how fantastic (and devilishly enjoyable) it has been. The trope of a robbed lover is so seldom used, but so incredibly hot - especially with how you’ve executed it. That love and addiction are beyond lust or riches, and the way Tri-Hard used it, hijacking all that Nick instilled in our hero - umph, it just hit all those little quirks in the best of ways. Spying, using Nick’s voice, and then reprogramming him against his previous inclinations. Truth be told, I normally stick to stories with hypno mixed with leather and rubber so I thought it’d be a slow build but, damn, did those earlier chapters exceed my expectations. Thank you for writing this story; excited to see what is to come!

10/17/23, 9:55 PM
@TW Thank you very much! I always appreciate it when people share their personal impressions with me! I hope you enjoy what's still to come as well!
10/17/23, 4:55 PM
Awesome story! Looking forward for the next chapter

10/17/23, 9:40 PM
@[Rocky](/user/show/929617) Thank you! The next chapter is still in the works, but I hope it won't be too long now. :)
10/17/23, 8:53 PM
Very good
10/17/23, 8:33 PM
Very hot. Love to see the internal conflict and how Dr. Altman's power is working with it. Here's hoping Jayson finds a new life as an out and proud gay athlete.
10/17/23, 8:27 PM
Fun story, but one thing that trips me up is the bathroom question section. Servwnts are told them may ask to use the bathroom, and then are punished when doing so... maybe if wording was reworked it would make it seem more like a trap rather than confusing permissions. Regardless, a small detail in an otherwise great story so far
10/17/23, 6:29 PM
NEED more of this. So hot
10/17/23, 4:10 PM
Is this parody? Satire?
10/17/23, 2:52 PM
Can i order him😈😈😈🔥🔥
10/17/23, 1:48 PM
Damn hot story hope there comes more🔥🔥🔥😈🤤

10/17/23, 2:19 PM
@[Leatherjohn](/user/show/10043300) A few more are yet to come.
10/17/23, 1:36 PM
Holly fuck give me a bottel of that🔥😈😛