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11/10/19, 4:16 PM
The warning in-story at the beginning is kind of annoying. Why and how would people know he has the info.
Anonymous
11/10/19, 3:12 PM
Loved it
Corinthian
11/10/19, 2:23 PM
Very hot story - thanks. And promising to get even better! Really looking forward to the next chapter.
11/10/19, 1:30 PM
I sent an edit, hasn't been published yet. My apologies.
11/10/19, 1:20 PM
> I hope for a happy ending for Max and Tucker > Me, too! No, seriously, I'm following my own rules on this one. When I put this up as a Community Story, I asked that at the end of each story arc, the status quo be maintained -- sort of like a sitcom (or a comic book): we always return to the default setting when the adventure is over. Max is truly one of my favorite characters. Even though he hasn't had much to do with the plot -- yet -- this story was designed for him. Have faith. I like him with Tucker, too. Truthfully, though, I was hoping readers would be pulling for McGrath...
11/10/19, 12:39 PM
Totally got into it. Especially loved the cousin on cousin action
Anonymous
11/10/19, 10:27 AM
This story was really hot and all. Seeing Mark succumb and ultimately become such an ass slut got my so hard. I loved that, and it looks like he's only going to fall deeper from here given all he let happen to him. As good as this story was, I do have one major question. How did Adam not become a faggot? He came without touching his dick as well after being fucked, so shouldn't he also be a faggot who likes taking it up the ass? It's a minor thing in such an amazingly erotic story, but I can't help but wonder.
Martin
11/10/19, 8:48 AM
Don't you want to change the stories title, now that it's finished?
Anonymous
11/10/19, 8:29 AM
Great idea, love this chapter and really looking forward to seeing how this progresses
llx_244@hotmail.com
11/10/19, 5:57 AM
Fuckin lovd it
llx_244@hotmail.com
11/10/19, 5:50 AM
Oink oink so hott
Magicker
11/10/19, 4:10 AM
Really good. I love when a stuck-up boss gets his comeuppance.
lucasthemighty@gmail.com
11/10/19, 2:09 AM
i would love to see peter parker next!!
Twisted
11/10/19, 1:39 AM
yet another great chapter i love love love the wedgies so hot. A I really loved how he was forced to say those humiliating things on the phone i love sph and him saying he needed a diaper priceless. i hope his contacts love the video i know i would. more please more
Anonymous
11/10/19, 1:36 AM
I will admit that I hope for a happy ending for Max and Tucker, but I am loving the series so far!!
11/10/19, 1:36 AM
incubus and overwhelm even Vics adapt
JockPupTraxxx
11/10/19, 1:16 AM
Very nice, can't wait to see where the book pops up next
Anonymous
11/10/19, 1:07 AM
Fantastic story!
Anonymous
11/10/19, 12:59 AM
so happy to read more of this story. I cant wait for the next chapter.
11/9/19, 11:10 PM
> You’ve got such a gift for blending interesting characterization with suspenseful plotting and hot sex scenes! > That's the trifecta, isn't it? I think we all strive for the perfect balance every time we sit down to write something. In this story, I'm trying to be... faster in my narrative and "get to it" a little more quickly. One of those writing rules about starting as deep into the action as possible, or something like that that I vaguely remember from grad school workshops... I again note that this story is coming out very quickly and has been flowing easily. Even the details I hadn't worked out solved themselves without any real effort on my part. I've been having a lot of fun writing it. Glad you're enjoying it!!!!! Maybe someday I'll figure that Parasite arc out...
Anonymous
11/9/19, 11:05 PM
this series is so hot and I love all your stories man!
11/9/19, 9:56 PM
@BobbyBlobfish: Thank you. I hope to live up to expectations and write good next chapters. In this case Leo is a boy with confidence, or so I imagine. :) I try to be neutral with Sam, although I am definitely inclined to the submissive side hahaha. Opinions? @Anon: Thank you very much :) Yes, there will definitely be more chapters on my part. In fact I already have much of the next written chapter. I still have to write the end, which I am not sure how to address it. In addition I have been sick these days so I had no strength or inspiration to write. But I will try to publish it as soon as possible :)
Jul 23, 2019
Bart
11/9/19, 8:59 PM
great story, hope you write some more of this kind
11/9/19, 8:26 PM
You've got such a gift for blending interesting characterization with suspenseful plotting and hot sex scenes! I'm loving this series, and I can't wait to see what happens next.
11/9/19, 7:33 PM
Interesting, I read this part out of order so I'm not sure what actually might be going on. But I had the thought it might be like Fight Club - the narrator is Rbbrfrk9 and has disassociated it. I mean, how hot is it to be dominated by your other personality instead of an outside agent?
Kerupt1
11/9/19, 7:27 PM
Please please PLEASE tell me there will be a part 2
Nov 8, 2019
degoetz@yahoo.com
11/9/19, 7:08 PM
This is way too much going on too fast, but it still got me off
Anonymous
11/9/19, 5:46 PM
damn this was 🔥
Nov 8, 2019
Anonymous
11/9/19, 5:37 PM
Lol it was hot but I got so lost in this. I have no idea what happened after you mentioned superheroes 😆
11/9/19, 5:27 PM
Hopefully Sven gets *fucked stupid*, he really deserves it.