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Jamkh
1/31/20, 5:06 AM
yes, more please!
Willie Cici
1/31/20, 5:05 AM
Thoughts on sequel are welcome. I was thinking of something happening at the bar. Suggestions?
Mercy Main
1/31/20, 4:59 AM
its ok, but all the links with all the bad pictures are really annoying. just let people use their imaginations
1/31/20, 3:57 AM
i love the combination of leather, mind control, domination, and erotic enslavement. For me this set of story elements is hot beyond words. My problem with the story so far is that without magic as an element, the conversation during which Tim lost all control and apparently his memory is way too short and has almost no real elements of hypnosis or any other mind control technique. There is clear indication that the Dominant's voice is mesmerizing and somehow causing Tim to feel a strong sense of pleasure. Granted Tim is apparently not happy with his having to work, or the work he is doing, which takes up so much of his time and energy. That might provide some rationale for Tim wanting to make a major change in his life. But for those readers (certainly including me) who enjoy the process of seduction, an insidiously increasing degree of mind control, a slow shift in power from the submissive to the Dominant, this part of the story is way too short. It was kind of a wham bam, thank you Ma'am kind of experience. What you did write was fine; it was what wasn't there that made the story less interesting for me than it could have been. I will say that I do have a strong pre-existing bias towards stories that provide context and character for what comes next. Others who read erotic stories just want to get to the sex without a lot of preamble. Neither preference is wrong.
Anonymous
1/31/20, 3:28 AM
Luv male musk. Hopefully this story can continue
LongtimeFan
1/31/20, 3:01 AM
Well helllOOOOOO. Amazing story, amazing mental transformation (I love it when they get stupid!), and best of all, amazing photos. That hunk in the orange...hoooooo boy. Always a pleasure!
slavethruhypno@yahoo.com
1/31/20, 1:38 AM
One of my biggest fantasies is to be pimped out by a Superior Man to serve Superior Men.
Bign54@gmail.com
1/31/20, 1:22 AM
so fucking good! thanks!****
Anonymous
1/31/20, 1:15 AM
wonderful
Anonymous
1/30/20, 10:15 PM
Awesome
1/30/20, 8:53 PM
Fun twist! I was just reading chapter three again last night, so glad to see it finished.
1/30/20, 8:44 PM
@JRZTT: CTF means cock transformation :) @Juan Bondjuvi: Yeah, I think that was I was aiming for, haha. It was late when I wrote the teaser, as it's always the last thing I do. Thanks. :D And thanks everyone. I'm glad you like it!
Anonymous
1/30/20, 7:45 PM
will we see more?
Anonymous
1/30/20, 6:51 PM
excellent work
Anonymous
1/30/20, 6:40 PM
Sounds like a great place. Can we get an address please?
Corinthian
1/30/20, 6:34 PM
Thank you so much! This was well worth the wait :)
lloyd311@aol.com
1/30/20, 6:33 PM
Fascinating : ) Can't wait to see where this goes. Thanks!
Boston Satyr
1/30/20, 5:20 PM
I agree. i am very eager to see more.
Anonymous
1/30/20, 12:54 PM
finally! we got a new chapter!!!
Anonymous
1/30/20, 11:25 AM
Love it. I hope he gets clothes he will hate.
BankStreet
1/30/20, 11:14 AM
This chapter was frustrating in its brevity, tantalizing in its potential.
Xmale06
1/30/20, 9:07 AM
Fuck this is just great! I hope someone can tell us about Bray's encounter with his teammates, in the locker room or the showers....
Juan Bondjuvi
1/30/20, 7:42 AM
"life on their own?" Hmmm. How about a mind of their own?
1/30/20, 7:31 AM
what ctf mean?
Anonymous
1/30/20, 4:31 AM
We understand JoSmith, take your time. We would rather wait for a chapter that is well written than a chapter that was rushed and sloppy. I’m looking forward to seeing more of “Stacy’s Dad”. I’m also excited for “Personal Toy”. I’ve missed that story so much! Thank you for all the outstanding content you give us :)
Anonymous
1/30/20, 4:00 AM
FUCK! MORE PLEASE!!!!!!
1/30/20, 3:52 AM
Anyone, in any direction they like. By all means have fun with it.
Kyle Chu
1/30/20, 3:27 AM
So anyone can continue this? I have to admit, I am sold on the concept.
Anonymous
1/30/20, 3:09 AM
fuuuck I really hope someone feels inspired to give us a sequel from Bray's dimwitted SLUTTY perspective, the dozens of cocks he happens across in a day and how he acts like a dumb slut in order to get them
Anonymous
1/30/20, 3:05 AM
awesome!!