Recent Comments

Anonymous
2/1/20, 4:53 PM
really wish for another part to this
Anonymous
2/1/20, 4:28 PM
i love the idea, but i somehow hope that this alex guy eventually ends up loving to be public naked and turns his life around for naked man with the guy he is playing against
TranformFan
2/1/20, 3:38 PM
Maybe the guys at the gym could meet the boys from the Extra! salon for some even more amazing transformation?
lloyd311@aol.com
2/1/20, 1:36 PM
Thanks, JR. This is just great!
joaopomilio@hotmail.com
2/1/20, 1:15 PM
I hope to see the governor's trip too, and his son turning into 5 different flavors of gay youth
Anonymous
2/1/20, 11:03 AM
Excellent - get some local scallys into the woods
2/1/20, 9:56 AM
I have a similar idea in my files, involving weather reporters. On this one you beat me to it. Hot story!
Martin
2/1/20, 8:25 AM
Hi, Could you please split up that first huge paragraph? It's way too long which makes it very hard to read. If you've changed this, please republish and I'll approve your story.
2/1/20, 5:24 AM
Revenge is sweet sweet ass, pounded and broken. So, when are we getting the new chapter? His revenge it's only beginning
2/1/20, 5:23 AM
No better way to teach some kids how to respect people.
2/1/20, 5:22 AM
The second chapter is better than the first but it still lacks on the same, the lyrics and the explanations take so long you almost lose the mood. The idea is amazing, I'm constantly going back to this story, just... again, skipping on the lyrics and all
2/1/20, 5:20 AM
The idea is very good, but the reading is so slow it gets literally boring and annoying to keep on reading, on most chapters I just skip the "lyrics" and the odd side "prequel" scenarios. They don't add anything significant to the story or the sexual arousal, so, why have them?. I think I would enjoy it more if the time used on the lyrics was cute short and the prequel almost completely eliminated. But I do re-read it.... just again, skipping all that
2/1/20, 5:17 AM
I wish this had been worked more... I know it's connected to the House Guest series and that makes it thousand times more interesting, there is so much ground that could be abuse, molested and fucked that I'm really annoyed there hasn't been any changes or new uploads yet.
2/1/20, 5:15 AM
The character of "Mother" is rather odd, at moments a little annoying but I think is understandable since it's a creepy powerful evolution of a depressed and devastated woman, thou I believe there was some divine/alien work in between that unfortunately was not explained, just barely slightly kinda hinted on. BUT, I love the chapter and the next one even more.
2/1/20, 5:12 AM
This is my favorite chapter of the House guest series, I hope to read more of these
Anonymous
2/1/20, 3:04 AM
very interested to see where this goes ! hope the next chapter comes soon !
Centuria
2/1/20, 2:45 AM
nice work, look forward to the next chapter.
Anonymous
2/1/20, 2:36 AM
Excellent. Your work gets me off every time.
2/1/20, 1:44 AM
Wow! I loved this story, love the concept. Keep it up.
2/1/20, 1:24 AM
It's a hard read because there are so many grammatical errors such as sentence fragments, etc. within the sentences. I'm happy that you continued the story, but you need to edit the work before you submit so readers can make it through your work without so much effort.
Anonymous
1/31/20, 11:01 PM
I really hope there's a backup of his mind stored somewhere. alternatively, having Alec find a note explaining everything when it's too late would make this feel like a kinky episode of the Twilight Zone or possibly Black Mirror.
firesix
1/31/20, 10:49 PM
Fuuuuuck. This is incredible. Your writing style and word choice is absolutely perfect. I couldn't write this well if I wrote for the next million years, and I'm a native speaker, so that's saying something. I really really hope for more, and I love this concept, this idea, and am so excited to see it continue. You're the best.
1/31/20, 10:28 PM
Martin, I really enjoyed this! Great job! That people feel something at the end is a credit to you as a writer. Can't wait to see where this goes.
1/31/20, 9:39 PM
really good story. Id love to collaborate with you on a story blufman1 on here email blufdude@aol.com
Anonymous
1/31/20, 9:14 PM
dude this is some of the hottest shit I've seen on here. the allure of nature. we're all animals
Martin
1/31/20, 8:44 PM
> As one who just found out they have colon cancer, a story like this becomes personal to me. I'm sorry to hear that. I really hope your cancer can be cured and you get well again! Writing about a terminal illness is always troublesome because there's always somebody who's affected somehow. But it was a pivotal point of the story I want to tell. --- > Unexpectedly sad conclusion :( I'm happy that this came across. It's a bit of a hard thing to do, to convey emotion, if the protagonist from which perspective you tell the story from, is just a himbo. But there are going to be more chapters and I hope you'll find the actual conclusion a bit more satisfying! --- Thank you all for commenting! Keep 'em coming please!
Anonymous
1/31/20, 8:37 PM
Unexpectedly sad conclusion :(
Anonymous
1/31/20, 8:19 PM
wish this was continued
Chicago Gay
1/31/20, 7:18 PM
Omg “Personal Toy” is coming back?! I love that story! I miss the obedient coach, and you were just getting started with the sexy officer. I’m so hyped for both series!!