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3/16/20, 2:41 AM
Extremely hot, especially the mental and personality changes that got tied to the different cock sizes. Great to see more from you!
Apr 25, 2018
Elm
3/16/20, 2:32 AM
Take your time but dont forget haha
Anonymous
3/16/20, 2:16 AM
Thank you for the feedback. Yes, I needed to change the name. Long story...
3/16/20, 2:07 AM
I love the fact that they are really happy as gay men and that Blake ended up with Tucker! Such a fun transformation. I wonder what would happen to me if I went there? I've only been to one gay bar in my life despite being gay.
3/16/20, 1:49 AM
Chad could end up a huge assed fuck boy.
3/16/20, 1:33 AM
Definitely enjoyed it and am looking forward to seeing the origin story. Thanks for explaining that the story is happening in this way.
Willie Cici
3/16/20, 1:26 AM
So hot!!! I loved this!!!
Anonymous
3/16/20, 1:08 AM
yeah... I know this is a fiction story but I don't think it's believable. idk I just might be naive. if I was Todd Mark will have HELL TO PAY. I like the first half but hated the last. not reading anymore of this. sorry
Anonymous
3/16/20, 12:04 AM
corona virus smut?? topical lmao
3/15/20, 11:35 PM
New Guy in Town, I actually have an origin story for this, but wanted people to just get a snapshot POV from the machine without explanation, I thought it was hotter than writing this in typical A causes B leading to C fashion of most stories... I hope you enjoyed it, and will enjoy the origin story in a few days!
3/15/20, 11:26 PM
An interesting take on the nanobot conversion; it just leaves the questions of what is making all the men into these hive controlled body builders and why unanswered. Any chance you go on and expand the story out to get into that?
3/15/20, 8:50 PM
Neds to continue, Hot!
3/15/20, 8:45 PM
Really sexy twists of fate all throughout this series, and I love seeing how Blake's empathy evaporated as his mindset changed. Great work as usual.
Anonymous
3/15/20, 7:43 PM
Oh man this is beautiful. I can't wait to see how it progresses when he gets more military and cops under his control it's gonna be amazing!
3/15/20, 6:56 PM
Hector is evidence that even really smart people overlook really simple things. Lots of new sessions with the overmind, but none of them so far ever explicitly mentioning Hector. Ivan is learning very well how to serve "a master". My money is on Hector getting "better dealed" either in part 7 or soon after, very likely by Marcus, since Ivan now has explicit permission to see him again.
Scott
3/15/20, 6:47 PM
Agreed, I'd love for him to end up like a small dicked humiliated twink
Anonymous
3/15/20, 6:46 PM
terrific
Mdlftr
3/15/20, 5:30 PM
douchebroness - my new favorite word! Well done humorous social commentary on the dating scene!
3/15/20, 5:29 PM
If the entire point is sex change them he could become a semi twinky femboi, fully male but with some feminine features. I like the idea of both becoming good boys for Rick who stays in charge and as a dom top.
Mdlftr
3/15/20, 5:22 PM
Terrific writing, Derek! This passage really summed it up from Blake's perspective: More than anything, I wanted to go and live a little bit of the life I saw on the internet. It seemed like the whole world was full of gay dudes heading out to bars, dancing their sparkling asses off, hooking up, fucking like wild men, and doing it all again the next night. I knew I could look like those guys if I wanted to. I’m a total gym rat, one of the many ways I’ve figured out to focus on something other than my dick. And sure, the gym is full of muscled up guys who I’d kill to have a shot with, but I just throw on a ball cap and look angry. Everyone stays out of my way. Then I go home and jerk off til my dick hurts. It’s a system that’s been working for me. I didn’t want to be scared anymore though.
3/15/20, 5:12 PM
I am interested in exploring Chad's TF but admittedly don't have a really good idea yet. Just a huger guy? I kind of hope days of self isolation give me a more twisted idea. Suggestions?
Anonymous
3/15/20, 5:04 PM
While this was well written, and I was glad to see Tucker get muscles and self confidence, I HATE it when characters become stupid. What does being gay and enjoying dancing and having fun have to do with being dumb? It seems to me you'd have to be more intelligent and socially aware to survive in the gay and straight worlds. Zap the Drag Queen with some of his/her own "make your own choices" magic - See how he likes having to deal with tampons and monthly emotional roller coasters and being weaker and constantly being fearful of being physically dominated and humiliated or hurt. Not fun. Pretty misogynistic view of femininity. It would be good to have the bridal party turned lesbians teach the drag queen a lesson: "Hey, are you a real woman?" "Don't you cry all the time? And obsess about your weight? and your looks? and your body? Don't you feel like you're at the mercy of every a--hat out there with a dick?" Make your choices, "Honey". Wave that wand. Turnabout on the magic drag queen would be a unique story.
Anonymous
3/15/20, 4:52 PM
will we get to see what happened to chad?
Mdlftr
3/15/20, 4:44 PM
Well written description of progressive mental changes and associated physical tweaks. I'll admit that I find some of the gay stereotypes tedious - the bleached platinum hair, the affected speech, the short, tight, slutty clothes -- but since this story was at least partly making fun of gay stereotypes and how (apparently) straight "bros" only know gay guys as stereotypes, the bar patrons playing on the stereotypes helped to carry out this story's satire on "how gay men act/are." Having noted that, since the narrator KNOWS what his gay friend Blake is really like, and Blake is NOTHING like the stereotypes, it was pretty obvious that the narrator's responses to the questions he got was due to the mind control taking place. Well executed story.
Anonymous
3/15/20, 4:38 PM
I agree with firesix that this story is sad. That witch queen needs a taste of their own medicine.
JonMuscle
3/15/20, 2:17 PM
Right? that didnt take long! great story too! I identify as 100% gay but female to MAN stories get me rock hard!
3/15/20, 1:35 PM
more please...it is a real hot story!
Anonymous
3/15/20, 11:37 AM
Love the direction this is going in! Can't wait for the next chapter
Anonymous
3/15/20, 10:21 AM
i love that the protagonist's friend was affected and tried assimilating the protagonist. i don't see where it goes from here but a nice set-up making me interested to the next chapter. thank!!
3/15/20, 8:04 AM
Fantastic series! incredibly hot!