Recent Comments

3/7/20, 2:05 AM
Very hot and sexy. Live the image of the big hairy ass.
Anonymous
3/7/20, 1:10 AM
excellent
Feb 28, 2020
Anonymous
3/7/20, 12:51 AM
"better safe than banned" This should be how everyone operates. love the story.
Mar 6, 2020
3/7/20, 12:16 AM
Welcome to the site; you're off to a very good start with this story. Like the other comments before mine, I have to request that you keep going with this story. You've done a wonderful job creating the bond between Michael and his latest slave; we've got to know what is going to happen to the slave and if there are others like him. So please keep doing what you're doing and give us more of this story.
Lussak
3/6/20, 11:59 PM
two thoughts: Imagine about seen Pine as the Grand Master of that frat. What if Pine isnt the only one human with that kind of powers?
3/6/20, 11:45 PM
Loving this story dude. I don't know exactly where James is headed, but I wanna follow him the whole way.
3/6/20, 9:26 PM
I like the plot development. Very cool. I also like how he has a bf while also having fun with others. Him taking over a frat is a hot next step.
Mar 6, 2020
Stage Show
3/6/20, 9:22 PM
Loved this story the start and can't wait for part 2, Loving the feel of Leather and the sinking to Obey Master
Anonymous
3/6/20, 8:36 PM
I'd agree with the previous comment. Super sexy stuff but the literal pussy is a bit of a turn off. Obviously this is your story though so write what turns you on.
Feb 9, 2020
Thom
3/6/20, 7:57 PM
Hello everyone. I apologize for not being on the site in a while. Thank you for your comments. I truly appreciate them and am very glad that you enjoy the story. I will try to work on furthering the Cop Boots story. I had not thought about it and wrote it a long time ago. I worked in prisons for about 13 years and the storyline came to me when I first started out. I also want to give a very special thank you to the person who found my other story called The Pill, which was also written around the same time as Cop Boots. I thought it was forever gone in the internet black hole and I had lost my own copy of it many years ago. The website I had submitted it to shut down and I didn't know that it was still out there somewhere. I had searched for it, but never found it again. I will work on having it uploaded here, but please give me some time to do so. Thank you.
Anonymous
3/6/20, 7:39 PM
Really intriguing start. I look forward to more of the story.
Mar 6, 2020
Anonymous
3/6/20, 7:18 PM
Wow! Would never have guessed this was your first time writing for the site. Must admit I was a little worried to begin with that the story was going to be one of those ones which focuses on the specific fetish (the gloves) to the detriment of everything else. But you quickly proved me wrong :) Great writing style. Fantastic job of portraying how the subject is thinking (or NOT thinking). And damn did that cliffhanger leave me wanting to come back for more PLEASE tell me a part two is on the way
Mar 6, 2020
3/6/20, 7:07 PM
Wonderful! And I'm not saying that because this is your first story. You so fully understand the text has to be as hypnotic as Adams himself. Dare we wish for a part 2? Again, wonderful!
3/6/20, 6:59 PM
Thank you anon! I'll hopefully have chapter 2 ready soon-ish
Anonymous
3/6/20, 6:37 PM
loving the setup. looks very promising!
LongtimeFan
3/6/20, 3:32 PM
This story just keeps getting better! :D I love the little hints sprinkled throughout of VIC's more sinister side (VICKI's line "You be sure to *obey* my brother now," for example). And as others have said, it's interesting to see a type of mind control that, instead of breaking the protagonist with pain, floods him with pleasure. Affection and praise can be drugs, too. Phenomenal! :D
3/6/20, 2:36 PM
You know what if reflex was real it'd definitely have me in the bag too
Anonymous
3/6/20, 1:16 PM
How James is submitting himself to the Relflex empire and losing himself is like an irony to consumerism...
Anonymous
3/6/20, 1:11 PM
i was really impressed to see this quality of sci-fi creepiness. It is expanding the boundary of mc stories!! I enjoyed seeing an AI is taking over human freedom so naturally. It's on par with writing quality of some sci-fi masterpieces with great mc twist ;) Thanks to VIC and VICKI!! I hope to see Cameron's interactions with his Reflex mentor in the future or an sequel, too.
Anonymous
3/6/20, 12:47 PM
10/10 yet again. Totally brilliant wordplay.
Anonymous
3/6/20, 12:38 PM
I think this is probably one the best conceived, written and "stimulating" pieces I have read on this or any site. My congratulations.
Martin
3/6/20, 6:57 AM
Comment section is open again (but the author can still close it if he wants to).
3/6/20, 4:43 AM
Thanks for that series. I've looked forward coming home each night from work this week to read another chapter. Hope to see a story again soon from you.
blankbot
3/6/20, 1:56 AM
You write well and are remarkably witty.
Jerry
3/6/20, 1:24 AM
hey edlam here is jerry! Thank you for u new story!
Anonymous
3/6/20, 12:42 AM
Fourth day trying to read It's really well written and the idea is interesting, but they got stuck in the hypnosis for soooo long, I got bored. Maybe I just don't have the patience
Anonymous
3/5/20, 11:29 PM
Best new series I've read on here for a while! Though I agree that it's a shame about the more literal boypussy...
Anonymous
3/5/20, 9:46 PM
i think the explanation is simpler than that : he never had anything to do with the project. He simply noticed that Ivan is willing to obey him. But i do agree with you that he'll exploit that knowledge.
Martin
3/5/20, 8:59 PM
I'm going to remove *all* comments about the age of the protagonist and the story being allegedly pedophilic. That also includes the replies and the ones defening the author and my decision. Anyone who want to continue the discussion can do that in the forum in [this thread](https://forum.gayspiralstories.com/t/discussion-about-rules-and-especially-the-underage-topic/1215/23). In case you want to save some of your comments from this section, just copy them manually and put them into a posting into that thread. The comment section of this story will remain locked for a couple of hours before I delete the comments.
Martin
3/5/20, 8:57 PM
I'm going to remove *all* comments about the age of the protagonist and the story being allegedly pedophilic. That also includes the replies and the ones defening the author and my decision. Anyone who wants to continue the discussion can do that in the forum in [this thread](https://forum.gayspiralstories.com/t/discussion-about-rules-and-especially-the-underage-topic/1215/23). In case you want to save some of your comments from this section, just copy them manually and put them into a posting into that thread. The comment section of this story will remain locked for a couple of hours before I delete the comments.