Recent Comments

3/9/20, 8:25 PM
Very hot! I can't wait to see Danny (not Daniel!) living life and acting, not just looking, like a greaser!
3/9/20, 8:23 PM
Very interesting, vey fun. Nice setup. I like what happened. That said I thought the two would get together. Hehe
3/9/20, 8:17 PM
Thanks for the comments. I did consider adding more to this story, but it's taken me several months to just get this far, so I just wanted to get it posted. I may add a second part, with some follow up if I get some time.
3/9/20, 7:50 PM
Que ha pasado con DAVID?...
Phil
3/9/20, 7:20 PM
I loved this! You are amazing! I can't wait for your next story
3/9/20, 7:07 PM
Not that hot sexually, but I love the story development & can't wait to see where this goes.
Anonymous
3/9/20, 6:58 PM
Amazing! I loved this!
3/9/20, 4:25 PM
Good start ! Can't wait to read more ;)
3/9/20, 4:25 PM
great story i would have liked to see him leave wearing a pair of reveiling speedos
Mar 6, 2020
3/9/20, 4:20 PM
Hope to read soon a deep and complete transformation of Matt (more leather please).
3/9/20, 4:16 PM
So surprised that Nick could resist the mind control
3/9/20, 4:09 PM
This is amazing man, I hope you write more soon.
Anonymous
3/9/20, 3:54 PM
This story is an absolute delight. Gets me hard every time!
Anonymous
3/9/20, 3:50 PM
Can't wait to see where it goes.
3/9/20, 2:29 PM
I'm glad that this series got a new chapter! Its great that we get to learn more rules about Ad's magic cum. The guy's resistance was so hot, I really love orgasm denial stories. Keep them cumming!
3/9/20, 1:11 PM
so hot! love gaining
Phil
3/9/20, 12:24 PM
This was so hot! I'd really love to see more of this
3/9/20, 10:22 AM
Absolutely, bloody brilliant. This has been hands down the best series on this entire site. It's fantastic, sad to see its been such a long time since your last post but these stories have been tremendous. Thanks for writing.
3/9/20, 10:03 AM
blessings and indeed "prayers" answered it would seem. thanks Gymuscle
Anonymous
3/9/20, 9:25 AM
nice introduction!! it was a great set up ;)
3/9/20, 5:18 AM
solid writing and super hot to read. thanks Gymuscle for all the work you put into this series. eagerly waiting for the next chapter. if this was an e-book. I'd buy it.
Anonymous
3/9/20, 3:11 AM
Hot!!!! Loved it!!!
Anonymous
3/9/20, 3:09 AM
So friggin' hot!! Loved it!!!
Anonymous
3/9/20, 1:49 AM
i would like to echo the comments above... do you write on other sites?
3/9/20, 12:48 AM
Another great chapter. Love this series.
Anonymous
3/9/20, 12:45 AM
great to see it's back online!!
3/9/20, 12:31 AM
I can't believe I really liked this and found it very arousing! Rationally I keep thinking the dialogue is "Beverly Hillbillies" but I got into it. It's amazing all the different metaphors authors on this site have for penis and scrotum. I like your "meat and potatoes" - brings a wide grin to my face. :) Well done!
Anonymous
3/8/20, 11:54 PM
This was sexy! Love a boytoy tf!
3/8/20, 11:14 PM
Really enjoying this story especially without the constraints of the game. Looking forward to more kinky TF and incest. :D
Plague
3/8/20, 10:31 PM
Hello Josmith! I saw the site got taken down for a little while and want to make sure you have your stories backed-up somewhere and would like to know if you upload your fiction to other sites.