Recent Comments

rodready
3/14/20, 8:57 PM
Respect Mr Williams, always a pleasure
3/14/20, 7:07 PM
Thank you for all the support; I have to send a big thanks out to Nacho, who's been a sounding board and a good person overall for getting me to the point to put the story up. @Rubberboy229: I liked what Hypnocigarboy wrote and I'm glad that you like my ideas for far. I hadn't really planned on taking over the school, but it could be a side story that some of the non-military characters brought in could go down. I'll definitely keep that in mind as I proceed. @Lexorius: That's definitely on the way, so keep looking out for that. @VenomControl: I'll try to do my best, but life is busy. @Anonymous: Adding the Defenders or other non-major heroic characters is an interesting angle; I'll definitely have to think about that. Since Theo (our protagonist; his name will appear in the next chapter) is mainly focused on military and police, I'm not too sure how I would work sexual types into the story. He's not considering who people sleep with; he sees everyone being bonded with the symbiote as his task, with his focus on military and police as his main goal. (There are some scenes that will make that clear coming up.)
3/14/20, 6:15 PM
cant wait for the next challenges. and for Pine's dominant side
rkgks
3/14/20, 5:22 PM
Love the muscle growth. Like others, not biggest fan of baby talk. I loved the description of his new hero costume, and the dumbing down/obliviousness. Looking forward to another chapter. :-)
Anonymous
3/14/20, 4:58 PM
moooooooooooooore
Anonymous
3/14/20, 4:53 PM
Really glad you continued this! Honestly it would be great to hear about the night from Blake's perspective too.
Anonymous
3/14/20, 4:01 PM
Part 1 was from Jeff's perspective.
Anonymous
3/14/20, 3:51 PM
Try adding freelance heroes like Punisher or Luke Cage. To other normies like Homophobic body builders, to handsome yet closet gays. Slowly climb it on top.
3/14/20, 3:22 PM
looking forward to this story!! please update soon!!
3/14/20, 3:10 PM
Awesome retelling! As hot as the first one. I would love to read the story from Jeff’s perspective.
3/14/20, 2:56 PM
Great follow-up! I like it even better than the first part.
Anonymous
3/14/20, 2:54 PM
awesome
3/14/20, 2:50 PM
i looking forward to see more man brainwashed in symbiotic uniform... ;))
Anonymous
3/14/20, 2:49 PM
Awesome! I want to be converted. I want to masturbate!
3/14/20, 12:23 PM
great addiction to the symbionte universe. keep it up i'm curious for! will be there a part where we see what happen to the other students in school ? :)
3/14/20, 11:06 AM
I assume we will see Blake's point of view as well?
3/14/20, 7:23 AM
Liked the story and its a good setting for new chapters - for me i am not into the muscle thing but i can see others will be, i would prefered Red Bolt, becoming a supervillian embracing his inner evil side
The_Supernatural_D
3/14/20, 7:11 AM
Sure hope you write more! Not a big fan of the whole "baby talking" thing so hopefully that's temporary. The forced chastity was pretty interesting.
3/14/20, 6:39 AM
by the gods that was hot!! Ben needs to slip into his new training uniform... and then get Nick back into his and fuck him till he has no cum left... Blessed be Lord Hephaestus!!
3/14/20, 6:30 AM
i loved how the stallion didn't even realize he was being turned into a good little faggot. wonder what the skin aliens look like... and if i could become one..
3/14/20, 6:01 AM
more plsssssssssss
KP
3/14/20, 6:00 AM
Wow! I love your AD stories! Some of my all time favorites! This one was great! More please!
Anonymous
3/14/20, 3:58 AM
a really adorable and fun deconstruction of how goofy and dumb the various hypno/tf tropes actually are.
Elm
3/14/20, 3:41 AM
Loved it! the hero is so cute now! cant wait to see what you do with him!
LongtimeFan
3/14/20, 3:05 AM
Cool story! Love the muscle growth descriptions. I do have one note and one guess. The note: I understand that the difficulty in saying "Master" is meant to represent Red Bolt's swelled tongue, but at least in the U.S., the phrase "Masta" is associated with poorly-written/racist depictions of slaves in nineteenth-century literature, so perhaps another choice would be wiser. And my guess: a new gay supervillain comes to town JUST when Megan's brother Carlos, also gay, shows up? I sense a connection! :p Again, great job!
Anonymous
3/14/20, 3:02 AM
Loved it! Can't wait to see how this turns out.
3/14/20, 2:48 AM
nice work
Anonymous
3/14/20, 1:06 AM
Oh, man you have got to work on this some more. Very hot story and my dick is ready to explode
3/13/20, 11:44 PM
Idea, what about a switch that makes two copies of himself, one dominant & one submissive?
3/13/20, 11:00 PM
Really great story! It was a fun