Recent Comments

Kev
4/15/20, 5:11 AM
WOW!!! Damn Cyclops!!! I think you have been in my mind. This seems to be coming directly from all of my deepest desires all mashed up into one story. I can't wait to see what is next for Colin, but more importantly for Hawk and Eagle. Also, I would like to know what happened to Eagle's first partner, Falcon? As for changing the title, as long as it all ties in in the end, I would say only change it if you feel the need. It captured me and caused me to keep reading because I want to know what Hawk wished he had known. Maybe it ties into something we find out at the end when you reveal what happened to Falcon as it happens to another of the men-at-arms. (I could see someone getting so enthralled by the feeling of feeding the Rubber they are permanently enveloped in the Rubber behind the wall in a perpetual feeding frenzy.)
Apr 13, 2020
Anonymous
4/15/20, 4:20 AM
My my, this was a pleasant surprise! Thats some hot stuff you got here. Erotic and decently written
Anonymous
4/15/20, 4:18 AM
hell yes
Anonymous
4/15/20, 4:04 AM
so damn hot!
4/15/20, 3:44 AM
So great! I loved it! Thanks!
4/15/20, 3:23 AM
One of my fave series for sure. Hey sb, do you have an email i can reach you with by any chance? Either that or send me a message, I would like to chat with you!
4/15/20, 3:07 AM
more please
4/15/20, 3:03 AM
this theme was a little different from the diaper themed. it was nice. but if you returned to the diaper theme I would love it.
4/15/20, 2:31 AM
Also hope you return to the diaper theme. Not many stories on here, and yours was great!
Apr 13, 2020
Anonymous
4/15/20, 2:06 AM
Where can I get my own Red Lightning action figure? I want my own collection of hot men as well!
4/15/20, 1:33 AM
Keep going please
Hunter_C_Wolfe@Hotmail.Com
4/14/20, 11:27 PM
Sorry for second post, I'm not able to edit my previous one. Thinking about a chemical, what about chemical laced baby powder?
4/14/20, 11:24 PM
WOOF WOOF and WOOF
Apr 13, 2020
Anon Reader
4/14/20, 9:58 PM
Didn't think I would be in to that, but that it was pretty hot. That scene where the boys were fucking the frozen superhero made me cum so hard! Great job!
Anonymous
4/14/20, 9:04 PM
excellent story!
Apr 13, 2020
Anonymous
4/14/20, 7:36 PM
Exciting start so far. Haven't read a good statue story for a while. Can't wait to see where this goes. Keep up the great work!
Hunter_C_Wolfe@Hotmail.Com
4/14/20, 7:06 PM
I agree with some others, not enough diaper content. Mind control aspects involved are very nice indeed. One idea might be for special diapers to have a chemical that gets absorbed to enhance control over erections etc. In fairness to others, I will volunteer for this type of diaper to make sure it is safe.
Apr 13, 2020
Nile
4/14/20, 7:05 PM
So excited to read the next chapter Kyle! Fantastic job
Moby
4/14/20, 6:56 PM
This was fun~ But I really hope that you return to Ryder~ Seeing a rebel be turned into a obident diaper clad boy was awesome!
4/14/20, 6:42 PM
there really needs to be a part 2. there's so much untapped potential here
Tyl
4/14/20, 5:52 PM
No story has really ever compelled me to make an account, comment, or really rate how much I liked it, but this one is something special. A very hot story, and a great read to see from the PoV of the subject here. As for your English, it's almost impeccable, with a few typos here and there. Overall, I look forward to seeing more, please write quickly!
4/14/20, 5:35 PM
Can understand your nod to the non-diaper audience on Gay Spiral Stories with this chapter, BUT REALLY HOPE you return to the theme of the first chapter. Would love to see how much further Edwards regresses Ryder. Either way, thank you for the time and effort in this amazingly hot, well-written fantasy!
4/14/20, 5:32 PM
It definitely has a different feeling to the story without the diaper aspect. It's interesting that Edwards plays with Edmond using the father figure motif. I'm not too sure about the "Daddy" moniker; I'm sure it's keeping with the vibe you put out with the last chapter. But for me it seems a bit childish and a bit pimpish (pimps have their prostitutes call them daddy) at the same time; Dad or Father work a bit better. Dad would give the sense that Edwards has reworked the fatherly bond making himself Edmond's father and there's some love behind it; Father would give a sense of familial leader vibe, being specific and yet general at the same time. But definitely like the possibilities of where you could go with this leg of the story. Might we see Edmond beside other young men his age in a youth brigade? And might we see Luis cleaned up and sporting a new uniform in Edward's private army? I'll just put those out there for suggestions.
corinthian
4/14/20, 5:08 PM
Very cleverly written and a turn-on too! Thank you.
4/14/20, 4:50 PM
Another great chapter! I'm in awe of the way you've managed to write a mind control story that's so hot and yet so romantic at the same time.
Apr 13, 2020
4/14/20, 4:18 PM
Thanks for the encouraging comments everyone. Dont worry, Red Lightning and the other's perspective will be explored on the next chapter. As for the person above, I'm actually thinking of focusing on Wolfman and The Quaker next. It's goin to be a doozy so stay tuned!
Feb 24, 2020
captainjack114
4/14/20, 3:01 PM
Amazing!Just Amazing!
Apr 13, 2020
4/14/20, 2:20 PM
oof,I LOVE this kind of story. really well done. hope to read more of it soon
Anonymous
4/14/20, 1:59 PM
Fun! Loads of potential. I'm wondering how many readers have said "Eligorn pelagor ..." and their name
Bimarguycnj
4/14/20, 11:40 AM
and the plot thickens lol , cant wait ti read how it ends