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Apr 24, 2024
4/24/24, 2:38 AM
Is this AI-assisted? If so it needs to be tagged as such.

4/24/24, 1:12 PM
@[time.to.occur](/user/show/1662851) sorry...
Apr 24, 2024
4/24/24, 1:11 PM
genial....
4/24/24, 12:22 PM
Please continue the story is very good.
slavethruhypno@yahoo.com
4/21/24, 12:35 AM
Damned hot! The masculinization and feminization and the age regression got me harder than hell. I had no way to stop from jacking myself through it all. Not to mention the role re4versal with the son becoming the Daddy and the stepfather becoming the "baby boy" slut.

4/24/24, 11:17 AM
@slavethruhypno@yahoo.com Glad you liked it!
4/24/24, 5:55 AM
Great story!

4/24/24, 11:12 AM
@[GiveInToTheMusk](/user/show/909380) Thanks!
4/24/24, 3:14 AM
Cool gradual transformation.
Anonymous
4/23/24, 2:05 AM
Keep going. Can't wait for the next installment!

4/23/24, 9:52 PM
@Anonymous Might make one idk yet. Thanks for reading tho

Anonymous
4/24/24, 2:17 AM
@[erotichypnostories](/user/show/10007285) Dude! You gotta keep this going. It's too good just for one chapter. Let your imagination go to crazy ass places. It'll be fun, therapeutic, dare I say.

4/24/24, 2:20 AM
@Anonymous Maybe! Don't really have the desire to continue it rn but who knows lol
Anonymous
4/24/24, 2:16 AM
Great start! Can't wait to see where this goes.
4/23/24, 9:06 PM
Charlie, congrats on your best story ever. This is truly amazing stuff!

4/23/24, 10:18 PM
@[Corin](/user/show/125990) Best story ever??? WOW, thank you! :D
4/23/24, 1:29 PM
Awesome first chapter thank you~

4/23/24, 9:52 PM
@[hairyartist](/user/show/10013526) Thanks for reading! We'll see if I get around to another chapter lol
Anonymous
4/22/24, 10:07 PM
This is so fucking hot I'd love to see a part 2!!

4/23/24, 9:51 PM
@Anonymous Maybe! Thanks for reading
Anonymous
4/23/24, 8:30 PM
Very hot story. I think it would’ve been cool to see Banjos downfall. He doesn’t seem to get affected much, which is a shame. Glad you’re still writing though. I think I’ve read and enjoyed just about every single story you’ve uploaded on here. Thank you
4/23/24, 8:30 PM
I thoroughly enjoyed this story. I'm a sucker for bad endings though, and I do wish this ending was worse for Brad. I thought this was perfect up to right after the mindlessly sucking part (Kal redirecting Brad by making him suck his cock like this was a genius idea that I quite liked). I like to see protagonists become total bottom sluts with no autonomy, so I'm not doing backflips over how Kal uses Brad's dick sometimes and that there is some genuine level of care between the two, even if it is a bit off and on. I like leaving more tension in resolution. For instance, Brad seems fully satisfied by satisfying his master, and by doing so all his needs are me. I like to see an actual sacrifice being made, like Brad's needs genuinely being neglected, but Brad ultimately deciding that his contentedness is not and should not be a priority. But these are all me problems. Oh boy do I need therapy lol. I think your writing is great and you wrapped it up just how you saw fit.
Anonymous
4/23/24, 5:12 PM
This is my new favorite series. Unlike some of the other commenters, I’m hoping to see Duncan get out of his cum-lock punishment and back to belonging with the rest of the team but in any case, I can’t wait to see what happens next. Hope to read a new chapter soon!
4/23/24, 4:31 PM
MMMMmm, hot. Love a pup play tf.
4/23/24, 4:13 PM
Gosh, man, I had gotten to be OK with stories not being finished. Not just yours but anyone's. In the end what I enjoy is the journey, so where it finally ends can be just complementary. But then you write this, and I remember the ending for "I think..." and I'm not sure of anything anymore. It's not easy to finish a story, especially when it comes to erotica. Moat of the time people visit this place for a fap, so it's not even necessary to provide closure. Yet, there are authors like yourself that when they do it they flip the table and steal all the attention from the rivaling hot steamy sex displayed. The story needed this epilogue. It's the missing piece to Yusuf's ulterior motivation. With the rest of the series I undertood that he wanted to get a family of his own and on his own terms (with his "DNA" and a devoting sexual and incestual love towards him), but what I had assumed was who this Yusuf was. It's now easy to see that it was a slightly flawed vision since everything had actually been explained through Ed's POV. Now that you let Yusuf explain a little bit, this small action he insinuates he's done helps see why he's the Yusuf we've gotten to see in action.. Now, the problem is I'm afraid I'll be wanting everyone to not only finish their series but also providing this level of mindblowing experience to them :wink: Thanks for that!
4/23/24, 7:46 AM
Please continue and tell us what happens when John walks into Boots.

4/23/24, 11:52 AM
@[Yorksbiker08](/user/show/1049586) Hehe, I will!
4/23/24, 5:10 AM
John sounds like he'd look good on his knees in a harness and in one of those backward leather baseball caps.

4/23/24, 11:52 AM
@[GiveInToTheMusk](/user/show/909380) You’ll have to read the next chapter to find out! Working on it right now :)
4/23/24, 1:43 AM
Love it man! Nothing hotter then a guy becoming a leather stud! Hope to see the next part of his leather journey with John!

4/23/24, 11:51 AM
@[Leatherjaye](/user/show/1814961) Thanks man! ❤️
4/22/24, 9:27 PM
Great story! I hope John becomes a leatherman and partner/lover/BF/Husband to the new Nick. It flowed well and was very descriptive.

4/23/24, 11:50 AM
@[Cutlerfan](/user/show/14171) Thank you! A next chapter is on its way :)
4/22/24, 3:25 AM
I wasnt sure if it was the Priest storh, since i cant remember his name. But i guess its not him. So now im confuse, is Aziel alive or not? Oh and Daniels story and Adams story somewhat parallels each other, huh.

4/23/24, 11:00 AM
@[DJeiKier](/user/show/10021357) This IS "Father" Daniel's backstory. A little dive into his past. Whose experiences will be meaningful for the events to come.
4/23/24, 8:42 AM
When will this wonderful story continue?
4/23/24, 8:32 AM
Will there be a new chapter coming out soon? Or where else can I read your stories?
4/23/24, 7:58 AM
Hot! Hope we get to see what happens with Kieran and Eric... and soon!
Maximus
4/23/24, 6:42 AM
It's not bad.
4/23/24, 6:19 AM
So glad you’re back!
4/23/24, 2:38 AM
Congrats on finishing the series! Apologies if my comment on your previous chapter sounded harsh. Either way though I'm very satisfied with this ending and it left me with quite the hard on. like i said before 10/10. Eddie is one of the best written protagonists i've had the pleasure of reading in a while. I like how this ending puts everything in a full circle and kind of completes a character journey satisfyingly.

4/23/24, 3:14 AM
@[BlackJaxus](/user/show/10012672) No apologies necessary! I didn't take anything as an insult to my writing or storytelling, merely speaks to what you wish would happen! That's pretty standard fair. I'm just glad so many people find enjoyment out of my crazy-ass stories. Very happy to hear you feel like it's full circle for Eddie. Honestly, when it comes to Yufus, that's best he could have hoped for...I figure Yusuf didn't necessarily want to torment Eddie for the rest of his life; merely put someone he deemed 'ideal' in the eyes of normal society into a reality in which that 'ideal' is actually the 'weird, pervert'. Eddie just happened to be the guy Yusuf chose to do it too. Proximity, maybe...but also cuz he had hot sons that Yusuf wanted for himself :P

4/23/24, 3:49 AM
@[EdIam](/user/show/17145) And i get that! Yusuf is an understandable antagonist for this story and I'd do most of the things he'd do in his shoes... Though unlike Yusuf, I'm a bit more greedy and would own Eddie Berger myself, maybe make him have all his memories alongside his new fabricated ones and make him both delighted and disgusted to serve me. but that's my personal opinion i guess. In terms of the last chapter, i thought the last paragraphs was hinting mind erasure as Eddie's fate, or something similar, instead of the outcome shown in this epilogue, and Mind erasure is something i don't like for a story written like this. So it's me and my expectations being wrong so. I find Fred's fate very entertaining, I love buff, "alpha male" men that's worth nothing and are treated like absolute garbage. I also like that you took inspiration from Wesley Bracken's story too, i read it, and i had fun with it, but its so weird i barely made the connection that this story was directly inspired by it.

4/23/24, 3:56 AM
@[BlackJaxus](/user/show/10012672) I'm glad that it stands on it's own merits and isn't derivative of his amazing work. The last thing I wanna do is rip someone off...I'd even sent him an e-mail requesting permission to write a story inspired by his but never heard back, unfortunately. Knowing that it's not just his chapter on steroids is a relief, but definitely still wanna give him credit where it's due. This story started as the idea of the epilogue, then realized the inspiration I'd had from Wesley Bracken could work well with that...throw in the gloves as a 'Mad Scientist' invention, it just seemed like it was the right time to get this idea down on paper!

4/23/24, 4:46 AM
@[EdIam](/user/show/17145) Well good job! It really does stand on it's own merits and i enjoy the story very much.
4/23/24, 4:15 AM
I really loved the "trick the chip by offering a false dichotomy idea" especially!
DWK
4/23/24, 12:35 AM
Nothing here for me. Big disappointment.

4/23/24, 3:46 AM
@[DWK](/user/show/950736) Still got ya to comment so I’ll take that as a win 🥰
4/23/24, 3:35 AM
Edlam, another great story! I really love the corruption and manipulations in your stories. I love how you have both a mixture of deprave perversion, but at the same time, everyone gets what they wants/needs/deserves. There is also a level of hopefulness at the end that I enjoy. Even after everything, Yusuf still seems to have a soft spot of Eddie, even leaving an opportunity to corrupt him and make him part of the family by implying he keeps on erasing his memories waiting for him to change his own morals and give in. I look forward to reading more stories from you soon.