Recent Comments

5/23/20, 1:43 AM
short and sweet. love a story that involves an arrogant guy getting his cumuppance.
5/23/20, 1:37 AM
fucking hot...got my pathetic, white collar dicklet so damn hard!
5/23/20, 1:21 AM
white collar humiliation!
5/23/20, 1:16 AM
white collar life ruination....how i crave this!
5/23/20, 1:13 AM
goddamn, i wish this would happen to me!
5/23/20, 1:11 AM
fucking brilliant story! i love transformation fiction and works like this drive me wild...
5/23/20, 12:58 AM
A major issue with section lines rendered this episode hard to read, for which I apologise. I have corrected this by adding headings for each part. As for the point about Rashid's parents - I might have got into serious trouble for following that story line...
5/23/20, 12:52 AM
please continue this!!!
5/23/20, 12:49 AM
made my tiny white collar dick shoot so hard, Sir!
Anonymous
5/23/20, 12:29 AM
Those five homophobic jocks aren't the only ones that made Rashid suicide, but Rashid's parents also have a hand in it. The jocks may bully him for sometimes but the parents would bully him for life for being gay, thus Rashid had felt so terrified being forced to come out. So Edmund had missing out on some more worthy targets for his revenge: the parents.
5/23/20, 12:26 AM
I really thought the story was awesome but I just want to say that the ending was very lackluster for me. I didn't get any satisfaction or excitement from it.
5/23/20, 12:07 AM
Pretty interesting story though I wish the protangainst was the one who hypnoed the students rather than being played with himself. (The moment he is all like 'he didn't hypnotize me' I was like 'I'm calling bullshit on that'. hehe) But yeah its a well written fun story.
5/22/20, 11:54 PM
Dude! This is fucking hot! Hope this one is a good ending story XP Would love to find out how the story proceeds with their relationship
Dec 7, 2019
Anonymous
5/22/20, 9:55 PM
Really love the result that Coach cums out the first sixteen years of his life, basically turning John into his past.
Sexdroid-013
5/22/20, 9:47 PM
Go on! Need more input!
5/22/20, 9:00 PM
well i have read it all wow that very good overview of the drones and a detailed features of T-Drones now we can understand better how they get selected for that purpose by the way i enjoy very much the interview with 107 hope we can see more interviews in the future as you have stated here then my first question is do you plan do this kind of chapter for each Drone type in the System plants?
5/22/20, 8:56 PM
I think this was a great chapter, the way Jeff struggles feel very real, and not only that we know that even Timmy got some problems without Peter around, The fact that let us know the effect caused by the sudden left of the water tist of the house it very interesting and relevant content that make the story feel more like novel than it already felt like
5/22/20, 8:39 PM
this is really awesome! You should totally continue this story!
May 22, 2020
5/22/20, 8:37 PM
@Willie Cici, my pleasure. Always look out for your work. Got to be one of the most prolific writers, I wish I had your flow, and stamina :-)
M
5/22/20, 7:42 PM
I'm SO looking forward to another baby focused chapter. the mind fuck involved that gets a grown man into a nappy to make his boom boom just ... god that's so intense!
5/22/20, 7:12 PM
cool story
5/22/20, 6:24 PM
For what its worth, the brief hypnosis moments were really hot. Seeing how Peters magic affects the guys even when hes not there to direct it. Totally understand the need for build up and backstory heavy chapters to make the truly erotic chapters even better. Cheers to your excellent writing skills.
May 22, 2020
Willie Cici
5/22/20, 2:25 PM
I am intrigued to read the rest of this series. Well-written and good foundation. (And I'm not saying this because of the shout-out, although you put a smile on a weary face!) Keep at it. I'll be reading!!!
5/22/20, 2:16 PM
This is a really great chapter. I feel like it develops Jeff more and is similar to one of The Influencers stories, where the effects of hypnosis/mind control are explored more realistically instead of just sex fantasies. While I was expecting a plain hypno sex fantasies, I surprisingly enjoyed seeing that Peter actually cares for Jeff and the rest of his ..harem? and it made the characters feel more real to me. Thank you for writing this and I can't wait to read the next chapter.
5/22/20, 2:09 PM
awesome work five ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
5/22/20, 12:25 PM
this was a really interesting chapter. really showed in depth how Jeff's mind is scrambled by Peter's absence and now that he's back I'm excited to see of Peter learned something and operates differently now or if it goes back to normal/the way it was before
May 22, 2020
5/22/20, 11:43 AM
@Onix, Glad that I did. You're one of the main reasons I started writing these stories in the first place. :-)
May 22, 2020
ONIX
5/22/20, 11:40 AM
thanks for the shout out 🏋️😎💪
J
5/22/20, 9:33 AM
A GREAT STORY, as usual! I love the way you made the characters feel alive and the development that Jeff had has been amazing. can't wait for the next chapter already!
M
5/22/20, 8:50 AM
Some of the more triggering segments I had to skim, but the overall chapter was breathtaking! We come full circle to Jeff and we can really see the depth of emotional investment Peter has for him. It's so awesome to have that nuance defined for the audience, his dedication to diagnosis, his insistence on treatment, his admission of fault, as well as his verbal planning for the contingency of if Jeff ever needed to leave Peter. I really needed to see that, it adds a depth to Peter that makes him a more rounded person, one with empathy and having a sense of responsibility. I'm extremely on board with the turn of the story, it really did need this aspect of Peter's arrest acknowledged, and I look forward to more of WoT as you see fit to grace us with it, or indeed any of your writings. Hats off to you sir.