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5/24/20, 2:30 PM
i loved this, greetings from an austrian.
5/24/20, 2:27 PM
Sad perhaps that he's not going to have fond memories of his vacation from his usual self.
5/24/20, 1:41 PM
An excellent start to this story. Your work is always so well-written. I'm excited to see where this piece goes!
5/24/20, 1:23 PM
Thanks for starting a new story! I'm sure I always compliment you on your imaginative and masterful use of language in sentences like: "...the hen night began innocently enough in the bride’s flat with a few glasses of sparkling white wine and a lingerie saleswoman who showed off her wares to the giggling titillation of those present," and even a small turn of the phrase like "boa constrictor hug." They make your stories so enjoyable to read. :)
5/24/20, 12:11 PM
Yaaaaay, it's back. Can't wait to see how this ends
5/24/20, 11:32 AM
@boi98229 thanks for such a lovely, detailed comment! Really interesting insights about trust for this type of exploration! It's definitely true that in my real-life exploration of hypnosis, the person that I let into my head is someone that I have the utmost trust in! In the meantime, I hope these chapters help you imagine yourself in that position a little!
5/24/20, 10:44 AM
oh,this will probably a in the best way disgusting story and I'm all here for it. great first chapter
MakeMeAWolf2
5/24/20, 9:59 AM
LOVE THIS SO MUCH!!!
Anonymous
5/24/20, 8:20 AM
terrific
Anonymous
5/24/20, 7:29 AM
damn... this was so hot
5/24/20, 6:12 AM
I'm just glad that you still post stories for us! I will admit, i get worried that you will abandon us forever. This was an awesome story, although I still prefer your more hardcore stories like Re-educator and the Jerry chronicles. Anyways, keep on writing please! PS: Is that you on your profile pic? Handsome and a kinky mind, you just have the entire package, my friend!
5/24/20, 6:03 AM
Damned hit! Love that all he found wrong at the end was his pussy was empty. Know that feeling — not just the emptiness, but that I have a pussy to be fucked by a man.
5/24/20, 6:01 AM
i have also wondered about mind control processing that uses a variety of techniques in conjunction with one another to create a synergy more powerful than any of the individual techniques on its own. i had not however imagined anything at all like this type of machine! i would really really like to try something like this. Unfortunately for me, one really needs a Dom/Master with long history of experience together and the ensuing trust and respect to make any real use of something like this. Otherwise it's like learning to read without having access to any reading material, or learning a spoken language with no one to talk to. It's technically possible perhaps, but not very rewarding. Still i would really like to have the experience. Maybe it would be like going into space in a simulator, without the possibility of ever going into space, but the experience itself would be rewarding and so interesting. Thanks for your very intriguing first chapter! i'm off to chapter 2.
5/24/20, 5:57 AM
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5/24/20, 4:49 AM
very nice will have dreams about being transformed into a rubber mindless dog tonight thanks. pant pant
Anonymous
5/24/20, 4:36 AM
I like this story and hope that it will be continued.
5/24/20, 4:13 AM
This is some really hardcore stuff; keep it up.
5/24/20, 4:06 AM
Very nice job; looking forward to the next part.
5/24/20, 3:55 AM
M, I have 2 native languages and 3 others I have been learning for some time now. Thanks for the review, I have revised it, thou I don't believe there was too many grammatical errors there were enough so I have edited it. I hope this new version is better.
Anonymous
5/24/20, 3:14 AM
Great story! Loved it!!!
Anonymous
5/24/20, 3:13 AM
Thoroughly entertaining! Even with all the German.
Anonymous
5/24/20, 3:12 AM
I like! A lot, too!!!!
Anonymous
5/24/20, 2:23 AM
Hot!p
5/24/20, 2:08 AM
Oh my. Well it's to be expected from one of the most experienced authors on this site. I love how portray Hugh's confusion by asking all these questions, trying to understand what's happening. When that by itself is incredibly hot.....well, that's an author who's a master at his craft.
5/24/20, 1:21 AM
loved it! wish there was more! i guess that means time for a part 2
5/24/20, 12:38 AM
Nice premise but it feels a tad rushed (a problem i have with my works so don't worry). It might be better to see Seb see the guy's kinks, desires and fears to make his changes more ironic. I'd also like to see why Seb does all this, is there a backstory or is he made of evil? Carry on the good work!
5/24/20, 12:10 AM
Ha ha, EJG speaks very well! I scanned this story and will admit that it is not for me, if only because I know there are people in this world who actually think like the jock students in this tale and believe the garbage they spout. :( But people are free to write what they wish, so I commend you on a story well-written! :D
M
5/23/20, 11:50 PM
this was a fascinating read. it seems like English isnt your only language and I noticed some word mis-uses that made it difficult to read on the first try. giving your work to an editor is something that no one should be ashamed of, and it will encourage a stronger reader response. please dont give up writing, as i said before this was a hot read, i would have liked to see more of the programing that Bryan experienced. like what commands did Thomas program into the white noise?
5/23/20, 11:43 PM
It begins. Liked this better than the last chapter. Positive reinforcement is the way to go. Maybe Hector should think about training Ivan for protection too. Put those muscles to use...aside from the ways he's already planned of course.
5/23/20, 11:39 PM
Sorry, this is late. I was on edge the whole time. Glad he got control back. Can't say I approve of the corporal punishment though. They say positive reinforcement is best for training pets.