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Chasm
11/12/23, 6:35 AM
Thanks so much for the update. I’m patient of course just wanting to know how the story ends. And then can’t wait for what you write next. Maybe in a different alternate story (after you’re done with this one) Travis takes a different set of pills and turns into a black stud like Jamal and Kingston with a BBC? Could be interesting 😏
11/12/23, 6:14 AM
Glad to see you back. I love your kind of story. Please update soon ❤️
11/12/23, 4:48 AM
Holy hell. That was so hot.
Anonymous
11/12/23, 4:15 AM
Every Saturday I've been hoping a new chapter comes out -- obviously you're providing people with awesome free content so no rush, but hoping more comes out soon. :pray:
11/12/23, 2:20 AM
My tip is to not use too many tags that are going to be used in future chapters. The tags set up expectations and finishing can make the chapter feel lacking.

11/12/23, 3:15 AM
@[Allan Weiss](/user/show/472888) Yeah, I realized that after. I guess I did that so you'd know what was coming, but I see that. I'll check that over next time.
11/12/23, 3:03 AM
Very fun. I wonder who’s gonna give in first.
11/12/23, 2:46 AM
I gotta say, you really sold me with the mindlessly repeating commands part. I really love your style and would love to see you continue
11/12/23, 2:40 AM
God I love the orgy. Hot af. I kinda miss Diego tbh.
11/12/23, 2:25 AM
This was super sweet and really lovely. A creative ending and a romantic story as well. Heart's desire and getting out of your own way. Thank you for writing and posting this. Beautiful.
11/12/23, 1:57 AM
Loving where this is going, hope he can feast on their feet as well~
11/12/23, 1:35 AM
I'd love to read a continuation of this story. I like the concept.

11/12/23, 1:44 AM
@[randy7869](/user/show/980242) Oh the next part is already written. People just keep telling me that my stories are too long and that they would like 4,000 to 6,000 word chapters. I thought I was going to be posting about that much, and it turned out that the scene broke at around the 9,000 word mark. So there's another roughly 6,000 words coming next weekend after you all have had the chance to read this one.
11/11/23, 9:50 PM
Cute and wholesome is not a term I usually use for stories on this site, but it feels like it fits the bill here. What a fun lore dump. Loved it!

11/12/23, 1:33 AM
@[Redan](/user/show/129598) Thanks! I hope you're looking forward to part two, which will be dropping next weekend.
TW
11/11/23, 10:22 PM
The plot continues to thicken! Looking forward to the next chapter - and hopefully more of Tri-Hard too ;)

11/11/23, 11:44 PM
@TW Thanks! And don't worry; **Tri-Hard** will be back soon, once he has prepared for his expanded army!
11/11/23, 11:30 PM
Another edit! This chapter really starts to bring things together on the Coin side of the narrative. The way the doctor locked the door suggests it's not unusual for new pets to try to do a runner or be apprehensive. There's a palpable disconnect between Rhys's excitement and normalcy in the process for his registering a new pet who he's excited to have, and Jasper's lack of options and going down that rabbit hole as a best-case for the situation. The world's eager pet culture and how it doesn't shy away from sexuality really fascinates me. That a doctor's visit could be so intimate, to the point of mapping bodies to make customised toys to fit. It's a natural implementation of their advanced technology and their hyper-sexual desires. Teasing a new pet mid-appointment. I enjoyed the calming of our dear Jasper to let him take in some of the 'culture' of it. Very sexy scene in the doctor's office. I really love the way you combine sex and sexiness with character development. Especially the little moments where Jasper and Rhys connect some more. Whether or not that's also a side effect of Aris's conditioning. Allowing Jasper a break and supporting him is really sweet. Looking forward to the re-post of chapter 4 in the (near?) future.
Nov 11, 2023
11/11/23, 9:11 PM
Very enjoyable

Wakeup
11/11/23, 9:43 PM
@[Masters toy](/user/show/10022805) Glad to hear it! 😌

11/11/23, 11:23 PM
@Wakeup Keep it going see where it brings u I have a rubber boot fetishism maybe change two guys into rubber wellington boots walking in muck
11/11/23, 11:17 PM
I love this story so much
11/11/23, 10:57 PM
Heartwarming story!
Nov 11, 2023
11/11/23, 10:21 PM
Great story! I'm glad they changed each other not just one of them.
Anonymous
11/11/23, 8:57 PM
When will you be releasing Part 9? This series is so good!!
Nov 11, 2023
11/11/23, 8:08 PM
I loved this story. It was sweet how they end up together and communicating and running changes by one another -- to a degree. It's not going to be long before they're going to need to change their stamina to keep up with that insatiable libido and constantly full balls needing to unload in their favourite place. Thank you for posting. I hope they're very happy together.
11/11/23, 8:06 PM
Hot story 👍
11/9/23, 6:17 PM
Nice stuff! Can't wait to see how the guys react to all this. Plus on how much shock Diego and the other guys who aren't in the team would assimilate with the orgy memories. Can't wait for the next update, hopefully we get to see how Rahim's cum affected Silo

11/11/23, 7:23 PM
@[FluffyBlkPanther](/user/show/907831) I can't wait to bring it to you all!
11/11/23, 7:07 PM
Don't leave us hanging...
Nov 11, 2023
11/11/23, 6:53 PM
This was adorable and had very good execution. I really like how the things that were already true stayed in the book; it was a good example of the theme of "perception vs reality".
11/11/23, 6:42 PM
some of the hottest incest story writing ever! cumming to this story again and again!
Art
11/11/23, 6:33 PM
I liked it and would like a little more back info on the shaman barely mentioned.
11/11/23, 6:07 PM
Awesome chapter, well written as all your stories. the one thing further for his full downfall as his role as boy jock slut is the permanent loss of all his body hair aside from his head.
11/11/23, 4:34 PM
Cool :hot_face:
11/11/23, 4:22 PM
Enjoy reading this series. Its so hot to read their transformation. I notice its mostly skinny and or younger men he is collecting. I wonder if there will be a muscled or a bear type of men added to his harem.
Anonymous
11/11/23, 4:20 PM
Did you give up on this gem? Just getting to the amazing parts