Recent Comments

6/1/20, 7:25 PM
A very intriguing chapter; we get to learn more about Dave and his father. Only makes the reader want to learn more about the father and what will happen to Nate and Dave.
6/1/20, 7:03 PM
Yessss I've been looking forward to this story for ages. Glad to see it make a comeback and hope to see more soon
6/1/20, 6:56 PM
I hope we get a sequel!
Anonymous
6/1/20, 6:24 PM
The idea and the execution were wonderful! I really liked the putting up a fight theme. It's rare in these parts but very welcomed
Jun 1, 2020
6/1/20, 6:22 PM
Hot story! The end was a bit of a surprise and I loved it!
6/1/20, 6:05 PM
Thanks guys. I agree that the story could have gone on longer, but as my anonymous friend above says, it has to end somehow. Jonas' last piece of dialog is the last piece of tension resolving, and everything past that would have just been stepping through a dance we all know the moves to. I honestly considered just ending it there, but I wanted to give a hint of the direction that Chip's life took once Jonas had him in his grasp. Glad everyone seems to be enjoying this one so much. I honestly had no idea which way the story would go, it grew out of an idea I had on Saturday and my fingers just wouldn't stop typing until it was all out.
Anonymous
6/1/20, 3:21 PM
the story has to end somehow. How much more exposition did the author have to go through? It was hot. I enjoyed.
6/1/20, 2:48 PM
curious to hear about Adam's soul mate. maybe some old orders art still running in him...
6/1/20, 1:44 PM
I'm sad this story doesn't have more comments. It seems to have gotten lost in the flood of stories posted this weekend. It's one of the hottest stories I've read in some time, so anyone who likes my stories should check it out!
Zai
6/1/20, 1:20 PM
Connor is lucky that Jason didn't ram a huge 12+ inch dildo up his virgin asshole... fag, indeed! 🤔😲🙃
May 31, 2020
6/1/20, 1:12 PM
This is a really great and interesting idea, but i find the pacing really, really fast. I would have liked to have seen this slow down a bit -- add more description of the individual scenes.
Chad
6/1/20, 1:06 PM
Ahh makes sense!! I do love a avatar! It sounds really interesting, the story line with jet was good so would definitely love to see what you would do with a similar story!
Zai
6/1/20, 12:59 PM
Your young straight jock turned into a bottom, cum craving, cock whore bitch was 'Sin'tillatingly hot! I hope you write more Speedo clad studs tales. Thanks for the steamy read! 👅🔥
6/1/20, 12:47 PM
I really enjoyed this story, I hope to see future installments.
6/1/20, 12:09 PM
Is there more of the story? I hope so!
Ken
6/1/20, 11:46 AM
Amazing idea. LOVE IT!!!
6/1/20, 10:59 AM
i am loving your work... MORE!
Ng5hvlo4
6/1/20, 10:52 AM
And have no fear; the conversion of the world begins in the next few chapters
6/1/20, 10:04 AM
A nice little interlude, although I'm eager to see how the program will spread and society will change.
Anonymous
6/1/20, 8:45 AM
excellent
May 30, 2020
6/1/20, 8:34 AM
very hot, has me rock hard. definitely would like to see more. agree with the other commenter, try dragging the transformation out a lil more.
6/1/20, 7:43 AM
Agreed that the pace speeds up a LOT at the end, with multiple twists quickly piling up. But I still thought this was a great story, and I loved the slow build.
6/1/20, 7:23 AM
I liked this! You do a really good job of world-building, which can be a challenge when you have such a deeply mind-controlled narrator.
6/1/20, 7:14 AM
Continue please....need the whole week!
6/1/20, 6:53 AM
This story was published a long time ago and will probably not be continued ... but I would like to know how it continues
6/1/20, 6:26 AM
Please more!
May 31, 2020
6/1/20, 6:11 AM
Short and sweet! I enjoyed this and it'd be great to see a follow up with more magical sex curses.
Anonymous
6/1/20, 5:40 AM
I. Came. **E v e r y w h e r e **