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6/23/20, 10:04 PM
That was a lot of fun.
6/23/20, 9:55 PM
Why did you switch from past to present tense midway through?
6/23/20, 9:47 PM
Really reminiscent of my first time with a live tist. He had me tightly bound to his bed frame in my hockey uniform, held his skate shoe to my face (I always get pretty focused on sweat, doesn't mean anything), said some trigger I don't remember now (it's been years!) and I roared and broke his bed apart getting loose. But of course I was just playing along the whole time. No one ever told me how rare it is to actually "feel like you're in a trance" until you get a lot of practice going under.
6/23/20, 9:19 PM
great story!!
6/23/20, 8:27 PM
Oooh nice! Very very nice. What an interesting look at religion. Hehe Love the rimming. :) Well really I loved it all.
6/23/20, 8:15 PM
loved it
6/23/20, 8:00 PM
this one was awesome! really creative to see that scenario from the subject's perspective. LOVED it
Anonymous
6/23/20, 7:45 PM
Bro this is so good
6/23/20, 7:27 PM
loved it back then,love it still. when it comes to cop stories,this one is far up the top
6/23/20, 7:27 PM
Really nicely done all around. I love how deeply we get into his head as he's experiencing everything.
Plymouth58
6/23/20, 6:49 PM
I don't know how you make it, but every chapter hit the bull's eye of my fantasies of humiliation and dominion, both in the side of Officer Humpme and Punk Kid. I never heard the words "coochie" nor "meter maid", but I love how debasing they sound applied to a former good manly cop. Is good to see how mind fucked Humpme already is and how low he would be in the ending. Will be great to see chief Angelo in action! I don't want to bore you mentioning all the things I like and how much I enjoy the story (practically everything!), but a detail that I like is that you're not explaining the source of Punk Kid's powers. Some things don't need to be explained, and I like it that way.
6/23/20, 6:46 PM
Best chapter yet!! Just WOW!!
6/23/20, 6:45 PM
OKAY! that did take a different turn from what I expected,but it's SO HOT. I really wanna see how it continues. (and who's at the door)
6/23/20, 5:55 PM
another beautiful chapter. I love it when the unaware cops really enjoy what they are made to do. and YES,the chief is coming. I can hardly contain myself
6/23/20, 5:46 PM
I wonder what will be the chief's new name?
Anonymous
6/23/20, 5:42 PM
it's great
6/23/20, 4:44 PM
Very hot, would love to see more dumbing stuff
6/23/20, 4:32 PM
Literally my first story of yours that I'd read, Robin. An absolute classic that had me falling in love with your style. Definitely one that inspired me to start writing!
6/23/20, 4:31 PM
OMG I am LOVING this!!! GREAT work!!
Anonymous
6/23/20, 4:13 PM
meh
Anonymous
6/23/20, 3:39 PM
Amazing! Please bring a sequel
Anonymous
6/23/20, 3:30 PM
@Delicious1papaya: Sorry to tell ya this, kid, but high school romances tend to fall apart after they graduate. Its just the way of the world. They meet new people and ultimately move on with their lives. Its the logical ending to their story.
Hunter_C_Wolfe@Hotmail.Com
6/23/20, 2:50 PM
I really love dumbing down down, especially in a jock. Was kind of hoping he would be acquiring a football uniform, maybe made too stupid to remove it, go out in public, etc.
6/23/20, 2:12 PM
Impressive job! The descriptions, the details, the slow build-up.... it has it all. Do you plan on carrying on from it? I'd love to see Torg putting his new body to good use, and Eddy (or whatever is left from him) shifting his attitude to get used to it.
Anonymous
6/23/20, 2:08 PM
This is such a hot story! I can not wait for the next one.
6/23/20, 2:04 PM
fucking excellent story Mal
6/23/20, 2:02 PM
this story is an old one but is still amazing. I love how the police is mind-fucked and play with the watermelon. Very original haha
6/23/20, 1:37 PM
Sometimes I wonder what Nacho senpai's profession is. :3
6/23/20, 1:35 PM
I always loved this story. Thanks for making it readily available.
Roger
6/23/20, 1:25 PM
Brilliant story......Many Thanks,i could feel myself licking the Boots also,more Rubber please especially Raincoats!!!