Recent Comments

6/15/20, 12:42 AM
Another excellent chapter. Loved seeing Jack dominate and humiliate Chris.
6/14/20, 10:46 PM
Fuuuuuucccckkkkkk that's so hot and so nasty, i love it! i can't for new tenants to move in and use all that horny furniture and get enslaved themselves!
6/14/20, 10:10 PM
will we see part 5 son?
6/14/20, 10:09 PM
will we see part 7 soon?
6/14/20, 8:59 PM
Really enjoying this and looking forward to finding where it goes.
Anonymous
6/14/20, 8:40 PM
you should definitely have him sing at a straight club and turn it into a gay orgy
stwidd
6/14/20, 8:38 PM
This story is so wholesome. I hope it stays that way for Ace's sake. He deserves this win.
Anonymous
6/14/20, 8:28 PM
Great story cannot wait for future installments
Anonymous
6/14/20, 8:17 PM
very hot continuation! you switched tenses and from I to you a couple times, just keep an eye out for that. I'm loving the transformations and rewriting of poor Tommy's life, though!
Jun 14, 2020
6/14/20, 7:44 PM
Very hot. More please
6/14/20, 7:07 PM
this is getting much better! thanks so much for posting. i've pretty much logged in to this site just to read more and more chapters from you. thank you, and please keep up the good work!
6/14/20, 4:09 PM
Really creative story from what we've seen so far, and everything is so nice!!! One of my favorite!
6/14/20, 4:05 PM
Great second chapter! I love the slow progression. I can really identify with Atlas's (Ace's?) feelings of loneliness and fear of rejection. If only I had met some guys like this when I was in college! Keep up the good work!
Anonymous
6/14/20, 3:44 PM
I really hope you keep going with this series! So F'ing HOT!!
6/14/20, 3:19 PM
Your phrasology is wonderful. The one sentence: "I In an experience completely novel to him, Atlas let go of all preconceived notions and worries and just… existed, buoyed comfortably by a feeling of connection to the guys around him". is a wonderful summation of his conflict and resolution. wonderful!
Feb 11, 2019
6/14/20, 3:14 PM
Very well written. It is refreshing to have a more literary writer on this site. The person who made the thesaurus comment should work to improve his vocabulary. I don't see any words that are uncommon or inappropriately used in this story.
6/14/20, 3:06 PM
What an exceptional story. Selfishly saying, It could be a bit longer. The complexity of feelings on both parts could make for a chapter of it's own. And I love the first line. If ever there were an Ayn Rand sequel, it should be named "Atlas Sighed".
Jun 14, 2020
Anonymous
6/14/20, 3:03 PM
Really hot, loved the pictures for all of them Keep up the great work! <3
6/14/20, 2:38 PM
Love how the story is progressing. Can't wait to see where you'll take this next.
6/14/20, 12:30 PM
This is very wholesome. I love wholesome cx
6/14/20, 12:09 PM
Oh, thats going to be a factor :)
Anonymous
6/14/20, 11:59 AM
I wonder how big Fareed's balls are going to get if Jai has been helping him out retroactively with his new equipment since they first met.
Anonymous
6/14/20, 9:16 AM
Hope the next part comes soon!
6/14/20, 6:00 AM
I can't wait to see how this story unravels. 😋
6/14/20, 5:52 AM
so hot! please keep continuing the story
6/14/20, 5:31 AM
Welcome back, Giftr is one of my all time favorite stories. I cannot wait to read more from you.
Anonymous
6/14/20, 4:10 AM
Great story!!! Loved it!!!
6/14/20, 3:42 AM
VERY good... I need to comment on your brilliant foreshadowing of what big bro is doing here. It was clear from the beginning he was hypnotizing his... brother... but what is really going on here?? Excellent writing.
6/14/20, 1:22 AM
I'm really sorry if this comes across as 'dick-ish' but I paid money for it and wish someone would've commented a warning before I had. This story is incredibly disappointing. Yes, it's hot, but it's basically a tease scene and then the final couple sentences are "Oh, and yea, they actually have a bunch of sex after this." .. I'm not even exaggerating, paraphrasing yes, but not exaggerating. I bought it hoping to actually read the "sex after this" part.
6/14/20, 1:18 AM
love the twist with Micheal would not mind acutally seeing what he does to Kent when he is in control of him. can not wait for the next part