Recent Comments

6/18/20, 9:32 PM
You write well and I like the pacing and the general wholesome feel. It'll be interesting to see where you're going with this.
Anonymous
6/18/20, 9:26 PM
This is great, it's been one of my favorites for a long time -- but is it fair to submit an old (2012?) story for a new story contest?
Jun 16, 2020
6/18/20, 9:01 PM
Woo MTG content, yeah! Haha the subject matter is not to my taste, (scat, diapers, etc.) but I still think this is awesome!
6/18/20, 8:05 PM
Wow--erotic writing at its best. Thanks for this.
6/18/20, 7:44 PM
nice i hope you make a series out of this
6/18/20, 7:32 PM
I'm excited to read more. i didn't think I'd get so invested in a non sexual story on this site. keep up the good work and i hope things turn out well for these boys
6/18/20, 7:32 PM
Oh wow. The final section brought tears to my eyes. This is the kind of story I like - where the protagonist really struggles with what's going on. It's all the more better because he knows exactly what's going on. Thank you for a wonderful rewarding story! P.S. I wonder, if in the final section, where you say "the mans lover appears" - would it be better to say "the man's husband appears" ?
6/18/20, 7:20 PM
WOW, this story is so hot! I love that they have hairy asses. I can't wait to read the other installments. Great job!
Anonymous
6/18/20, 7:03 PM
I loved this! Please make more
Anonymous
6/18/20, 6:46 PM
Spectacular
Aquarius
6/18/20, 4:47 PM
Wow your writing always amazes me! So happy you’re continuing this story. I can’t wait to see what Roger does with his 2 muscular slaves. I agree with the previous comments please no cross dressing! Hope you add some foot fetish and some pup play. Daddy needs to keep his son satisfied.
6/18/20, 4:00 PM
why the fuck would you shave his body hair?! so disappointed
6/18/20, 3:25 PM
I really like the concept of this story and where its going right now. The arc about Nate getting to know Dave's teammates is a much needed one for Nate's character development. In my opinion, the best romance stories are the ones where BOTH people involved becomes a better person from the relationship. For the past few chapters it felt like Dave was the only one who was going through a journey so its nice to see that Nate is now being affected by this experience too. Keep up the great work!
Hunter_C_Wolfe@Hotmail.Com
6/18/20, 2:48 PM
Wish somebody would make into a dog like that, no questions or limits.
Anonymous
6/18/20, 2:34 PM
amazing. nice chapter.
Anonymous
6/18/20, 2:32 PM
That was such a cool story, I loved it. Perhaps not as sex focused at others, but it doesn't have to be in my opinion. I *really* enjoyed it. The story is really cool, with a great atmosphere. The druid was also more than she appeared to be at the start and the ending was great.
Jun 16, 2020
6/18/20, 2:10 PM
I just LOVE the detailed narrations. The characters,the places, everything 😍
Anonymous
6/18/20, 12:34 PM
Love the series.Great job!!!
6/18/20, 12:16 PM
you are doing an amazing job, thank you! I love it man.
6/18/20, 10:55 AM
YES! Daddy finally surrendered. I cant wait for Andrew to claim own him
Anonymous
6/18/20, 10:34 AM
Excellent work! Certainly one of the better stories here, I look forward to the rest
6/18/20, 9:38 AM
Maybe the strangest piece of Bracken writing out there, and that's saying a lot.
6/18/20, 8:25 AM
I never know what to expect with the direction of this series but I love it every single time
Kovu
6/18/20, 7:45 AM
woof! definitely needs a sequel
Anonymous
6/18/20, 7:26 AM
it was definitely a creative and well thought out story with a lot of originality involved. I would have loved to see a more detailed or perhaps werewolf, sex scene though. Great work overall! These challenges are quite cool.
6/18/20, 7:17 AM
I absolutely love this series! it makes me so happy and is completely wholesome! One of the only few stories I enjoy with slow progressing plot, can't wait for Nate to say, "I love you too" back!
Jonanator
6/18/20, 6:16 AM
it was a hot story. you should totally do a sequel. I loved it.
Anonymous
6/18/20, 5:18 AM
Well-crafted and superbly written! Thank you!
6/18/20, 5:00 AM
I almost didn't read this one, because the title and description made me think it would all be about dehumanization and fisting. But I ended up really loving this. I think the political humor works well, and the brainwashing scenes are hot. I'd love to read a spinoff to see how the more resistant boys, Pete and Reggie, ultimately get with the program.