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12/6/23, 11:27 PM
The hypnosis is very subtle, but it’s implied. I can’t help but wonder what’s being said in all of those couch conversations!
John
12/6/23, 10:54 PM
"Hmm, something off about the hunk people in this city." Said a private detective.
12/6/23, 9:56 PM
... how you casually explain that he will be keeping the load.... and allowing the fart to ease the cramp... but in the end .... holding the load. Hot hot hot.
12/6/23, 9:41 PM
I've not read a second chapter then desperately looked for the first. I'm so impressed by these results. I can feel the beta and love the feeling. Its hot. The alpha is somewhat outside of the story from our perspective. You successfully made the reader a comfortable beta laying on our tummies even if we might usually jackhammer our prey. Hot.
12/6/23, 9:23 PM
The story is unique in many ways. We don't necessarily have a sci-fi element, hypnosis, nor coercion. Instead, we have a submissive beta who learns much later that he is actually one. While degrading, he only gets hotter in the moment. You have the alpha sort of on the sideline coming into the story at times but always overriding. The alpha leaving the keys on the counter caught me as so simple but utterly hot. The fully clothed man ripping the clothes off his rightfully contained boy-pussie is hot... then against the wall. Thanks.
12/6/23, 3:42 PM
A bit dark, but awesome!:smiling_face_with_three_hearts:

12/6/23, 9:22 PM
@[BobbyBlobfish](/user/show/700733) And this one chapter was only the setting... I have to take some time to build the character in the mindset I wanted before all... and at some point will be a bit darker and sad for one of this guys... tbh not sure how that happened 😅
12/6/23, 8:41 PM
An incredible story! I'm glad they loved the changes!
12/6/23, 7:07 PM
more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
12/6/23, 5:45 PM
Fuck me that’s a hot chapter. Definitely keep adding to this story. My dripping cock really enjoyed it.
12/6/23, 4:10 PM
I wonder if the Wolf will be turned too

12/6/23, 4:51 PM
@[darkblade2814](/user/show/243317) Stay tuned! I can confirm that he will feature again ...

12/6/23, 4:58 PM
@[Ciriii](/user/show/10002839) Thank you, also, I am enjoying the series so far
12/6/23, 4:56 PM
SO FREAKING HOT!!! What a fantastic progression! 😍😍😍
12/6/23, 9:14 AM
How do you manage to make the AI make such accurate images? I tried and it just makes monstrosities.

12/6/23, 12:33 PM
@[Leoscurse](/user/show/1219438) Agreed. I spent too much time trying to play about with descriptions and scenarios and didn't get anything usable out of it. Certainly nothing gay anyways. The AI seemed to always want to give men fairly realistic looking vaginas or boobs and really struggled to conjure up an accurate penis.

12/6/23, 3:11 PM
@[Loxley](/user/show/75942) @[Leoscurse](/user/show/1219438) I use this AI image generator: https://perchance.org/ai-text-to-image-generator It's free and doesn't need you to sign up or anything. It has a drop down menu "art style" and I use Furry-cinematic to create the furries. I also struggled with getting vaginas which seems to be the default image- however there is a text box called "Anti-Description". I write "female, vagina" in this box and very rarely do I get an image with one (Thank god!). You can type anything you don't wanna see in there. You can choose to generate 3,6,9 or 12 images. Regarding the desriptions; keep it simple. There is alot trial and error but to be honest I enjoy that, it's kinda horny to see what's gonna get generated! If you want something to be given more importance by the AI then you can put it in brackets/parentheses, the more it has the more weight the generator gives it. I admit though, you can still get some monsters haha So, I just made the below image to show you guys. I typed: Rhino, muscular, anal sex, ((big erect penis)), ripped army uniform, dog tags, orgy, (different ages). Jungle. I used landscape setting. You can also play around a bit with the camera angke etc. The below are 3 out of 6 that were ok. The rest just had scarily large dicks so I excluded them LOL (Sorry, links again!): https://ibb.co/BqGrtPH https://ibb.co/VWmztqQ https://ibb.co/NymGStG

12/6/23, 4:41 PM
@[Ciriii](/user/show/10002839) Wow! I wonder if certain art styles are better at generating dicks, or used more advanced AI, because on my first attempt with 'Furry - Cinematic' I generated 12 pics and they were all better than any other attempt with ordinary 'Cinematic' or 'Casual Photo'. I know what i'm doing with the rest of my evening!
12/6/23, 1:33 PM
A joy to read as always. Your dedication to melding erotica and narrative is wonderful, and I'm hoping Bertrand finds a way to save humanity from the Bad Fucky TF through introduction of a Good Fucky TF. Also, satyrs, a personal favourite - why thank you.

12/6/23, 3:57 PM
@[Faun](/user/show/464694) I'm glad you enjoyed this part. It feels weird to break the story up into so many small chunks but it's just an experiment I'm doing with this one. I think you'll enjoy the final couple parts because there will be more satyr action.
12/6/23, 3:21 PM
Actually guys, just had an idea. If when clicking on a link you are taken to another page that you have to come back from then I can see how annoying that would be. If possible, for your enjoyment ;) , please right-click the link and press "open link in new window" that way you can easily just open the story tab again without losing your place and either keep the picture tab open if you're enjoying it...or close it if not and keep reading. Hope that works ;)
12/6/23, 2:39 PM
Still looking for the piss drinkers
Anonymous
12/6/23, 2:29 PM
This is a really fun and hot series! I love the multiple scenarios with characters and the before/after images for some of them. I do really love having visual aids with the story, it really brings your vision to life. Great job!
12/6/23, 12:31 PM
Another hot installment. Again, the descriptions were brilliantly vivid in all the right ways and places. The way you describe big dicks bursting out of unzipped trousers just works for me. I would though also agree with other comments about images. I found going away from the story to look at them broke up the rhythm and it would have been better for me if they had been on the page with the text. I hope you keep these stories coming. The series is a real Christmas treat for me.

12/6/23, 2:26 PM
@[Loxley](/user/show/75942) Thank you I'm really pleased you enjoy it. The images are a problem I agree...I am torn because I love to include images and in a way they direct my story a bit. Do you know of another way to get them acessible. Unfortunately the storage on here isn't enough for the amount I like to include haha
12/6/23, 12:39 PM
Too bad Noone started any WS
12/6/23, 11:45 AM
I’ve went back and added some paragraph breaks, copying and pasting it removed them. Thanks for your comments everyone!
12/6/23, 9:43 AM
Can't wait to read another chapter
12/6/23, 8:20 AM
Same thoughts as the first commenter! Another fun story but I definitely prefer the images being embedded in the story itself. Also, if it’s possible, I’d work on the formatting of the text itself as well. You’ve got some very long paragraphs that don’t always read well on mobile especially. I’d be more than happen to beta-read for you and make suggestions before you post. But no worries if not! It’s a great series so far!

12/6/23, 8:28 AM
@[Kibble The Satyr](/user/show/10010407) I understand totally but I'll quickly run out of storage if I include them in the text. I enjoy adding the pictures to spice up the story but also they inspire me in the direction of the story. I was also thinking that not everyone wants to see an image so this way they have the option not to click. Thanks for the offer :) the paragraphs didn't look so long on a laptop haha I'll see what I can do next time.
12/5/23, 9:44 PM
I am glad you enjoyed this segment! Hoping you will enjoy the rest that is to come.

12/6/23, 7:39 AM
@[Drone NG5](/user/show/681310) Thank you! This unit finds immense joy in seeing the men of Drone World lose more and more of their humanity on their way to becoming Master Jake's drones, and it is curiously awaiting the fate of the two specialists in particular.
12/6/23, 3:29 AM
Just read through the entire series and oh my god do you have a wonderful story here, love the progression throughout and happy to see skippy really beginning to get into his new role~ Looking forward to see how the rest of the story plays out!
12/6/23, 3:27 AM
It was a sweet story and I like the premise but for two editing issues. Paragraphs are important not only to make it easier to read but also identify the speaker. There were times I had to re-read a sentence to see who was talking and who was replying. I would also love to know more about the founders, how they found the magic, how they accumulated the wealth and passed both on and why. And more details about the graduating class and how they chose the pledge class. It's a well written story and you've left yourself openings for a prequel and sequel. Just work on the formatting. Otherwise. Nice characters, good description of their emotional evolution and in general, a gentle and nice story!!
Anonymous
12/6/23, 3:25 AM
Hottest chapter yet 🔥🔥🔥🔥
12/6/23, 1:38 AM
I needed some bald fic badly for months, bless you for this. My favorite part honestly, is them going back and embracing it voluntarily. They've discovered their true selves~
pmk
12/5/23, 10:37 PM
Will you continue this? I'd love to read more.

12/5/23, 11:19 PM
@[pmk](/user/show/976276) I will! I haven't made much time for writing this year because of some personal setbacks, but I do have a scaffold for some further plot and sex here!
12/5/23, 9:27 PM
It's a clever idea! I love it!
12/5/23, 8:18 PM
An awesome start! I look forward to more fun.
Will
12/5/23, 6:19 PM
The end of chapter 8 gets me off every time. Hunky Tony - exposed - watching himself on webcam, in just his jockstrap. The dialog is hot here, Tony babbling incoherently in total heat while slowly getting impaled by a cock. Panting, moaning, and hard as a fuckin rock. The fact Tony’s captors make keep his jockstrap on, and cum into the stretched pouch at the end… it’s just icing on the cake - er in this case jock. Hot hot hot!