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Anonymous
9/6/20, 4:14 PM
So excited to see this in the feed! You’ve always been one of my favourite writers of superhero themed pieces and the original Puppet Master was such a hot piece. This follow-up definitely doesn’t disappoint :)
Jonanator
9/6/20, 4:06 PM
I loved this story, it was very hot. Can't wait for the next chapter.
9/6/20, 4:03 PM
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9/6/20, 3:47 PM
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Jay Sub
9/6/20, 3:42 PM
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Anonymous
9/6/20, 3:29 PM
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9/6/20, 3:25 PM
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davesub
9/6/20, 3:17 PM
just WOW!!!
9/6/20, 3:11 PM
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Bostonboy97
9/6/20, 3:04 PM
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Anonymous
9/6/20, 2:52 PM
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9/6/20, 2:47 PM
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9/6/20, 2:44 PM
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Anonymous
9/6/20, 2:18 PM
Spectacular!!
Anonymous
9/6/20, 2:11 PM
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40502010
9/6/20, 1:55 PM
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Tyler
9/6/20, 1:49 PM
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EJG
9/6/20, 1:48 PM
It's a shame FLYING back to Kansas wasn't an option for these big guys,unless you tweaked it from the original?
EJG
9/6/20, 1:46 PM
'Buckle your seatbelt,Dorothy,'coz Kansas is NOT going bub-bye'
9/6/20, 1:21 PM
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Anonymous
9/6/20, 1:07 PM
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9/6/20, 1:04 PM
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9/6/20, 1:01 PM
> Rereading it, I noticed just how short many of those scenes are. > And this chapter is the shortest in the whole series, too. > You’ve got a great way of giving us just enough tantalizing detail, then cutting away to get the reader imagine what’s happened (which can be even hotter than graphically depicting it). > That's old school horror movie technique -- if I don't show it to you, you have to imagine it yourself, which is ALWAYS infinitely greater/ worse than what would be shown. You're exactly right!
Juan
9/6/20, 12:56 PM
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9/6/20, 12:42 PM
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9/6/20, 12:40 PM
I had to re-read the first part, but damn that was hot! Great story!
Anonymous
9/6/20, 12:23 PM
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Anonymous
9/6/20, 12:18 PM
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9/6/20, 12:15 PM
This chapter has some of my favorite scenes (like Tony and his father, plus Snake and the middle-aged bikers). Rereading it, I noticed just how short many of those scenes are. You've got a great way of giving us just enough tantalizing detail, then cutting away to get the reader imagine what's happened (which can be even hotter than graphically depicting it).
9/6/20, 12:13 PM
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