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9/27/20, 2:39 PM
Brilliant writing!
9/27/20, 1:20 PM
I wonder if the Bystanders will evolve ... I wonder if Callicrates will have tasks for them in the future ... I searched for the name, 'Callicrates' and found an interesting historical counterpart, 'Καλλικράτης' This reference will provide additional context for the historical Callicrates (Καλλικράτης) Engineering in the Ancient World https://www.amazon.com/exec/obidos/ASIN/0520227824/
9/27/20, 1:12 PM
I'm so glad you continued that path! So many ways the story can go with all those new elements!!! But what do you mean by "Making my sex"?
9/27/20, 1:01 PM
arghhh... Are Travis and the master working together? This story drive me mad with anticipation!!!! So goooood!!!
Anonymous
9/27/20, 12:33 PM
great story put Superman in his place
Anonymous
9/27/20, 12:11 PM
i realised how Superman was defeated. i love the hair loss and humiliated state. a fine example of gay pride
9/27/20, 11:47 AM
I do like the story. A little bit disappointed that Harry is turning into an asshole toward Tommy, but then again I guess it makes sense given how/why the curse started
9/27/20, 11:23 AM
I hope you'll continue to write, because this story was full of great ideas and images. I feel like it was a little incoherent, in that the rules of your fictional universe seemed to shift a lot from chapter to chapter. (Where did all those other Brutes come from? Why didn't we ever see them before?) But I'm sure you'll get better at this as you keep writing!
9/27/20, 10:50 AM
> I was jerking off this morning thinking of a wrestling team getting their symbiotes... I started to chuckle thinking, “damn that absman. I’m now finding men turned to plants exciting!!” > hahahaha! When you get down to it, I wrote one series where men turn into plants, and another where men grow muscle breasts and get milked like cows, otherwise magic steroids and super powers -- it's just a mechanism, right? I try not to think about it -- the absurdity of it, I mean -- and just try to keep making it work. ALL THAT MATTERS is that your experience is a good one -- does it get you off? Does it make you think? Does it cause you to imagine? Your comment is the highest praise a writer could get. Thank you!
9/27/20, 9:25 AM
Thanks for the feedback. Did some editing. Don't think we will be seeing William again, waking up as walking bit of graffiti with a bottle in his arse might have scared him off for good. But who knows?
9/27/20, 9:09 AM
Thanks for the feedback. Finally managed to get some editing time in.
9/27/20, 7:43 AM
I like it! the fact that the relationship seems more equal that what's usually on the site really interest me. I wonder what happen next. Kudos
9/27/20, 7:23 AM
very interesting POV! I am very interested to see where this is going, especially with coach and where this story takes him. thank you
Sep 20, 2018
Anonymous
9/27/20, 7:23 AM
please continue writing. nub boys is one of the hottest stories on the site would love to see more from you!
Anonymous
9/27/20, 7:18 AM
so hot! love the transformation. cant wait to finally see hairy get his dick where it truly belongs. ;)
9/27/20, 6:10 AM
Just found this story! Super hot, hope to see more of it
9/27/20, 5:51 AM
Love coming back and reading this story. Rereading about the abuse and torture that Brody goes through gets me going each time
Anonymous
9/27/20, 5:41 AM
This was a really hot story! Id like to see a continuation of it just to see their new life... I'm imaging they were sold to to one (or maybe two or three friends or brothers) mexican(s) who wanted them as aware slave to humillate them(calling them papi and brothers and acting as a family for fun altough they hate it) all while ordering them to do humillating stuffs and breeding them of course
giveintothemusk
9/27/20, 4:34 AM
This is fantastic. Really hope Tommy spend some time in Harrys pits .
9/27/20, 4:08 AM
Loving the continued slow transformation of both characters. Very hot chapter!
9/27/20, 3:34 AM
Thank you posting this story. it was very hot.
9/27/20, 3:12 AM
Enjoyed your story. I can't get enough of milking vampires.
Anonymous
9/27/20, 2:59 AM
Loving it!! Keep going!!
9/26/20, 11:42 PM
Can't wait to find out what happens in the next chapter!
the cat
9/26/20, 11:36 PM
Excellent story- really pulls you in and gets you hard
9/26/20, 11:22 PM
Not related to this story (although superb as always) In anticipation of reading these story parts this evening, I was jerking off this morning thinking of a wrestling team getting their symbiotes. Erotic imagination took its powerful course and before I knew it all the men on the team and opposing team had been turned into plants...and I shot a good load at that thought. While licking my fingers and hand clean of cum, I started to chuckle thinking, "damn that absman. I'm now finding men turned to plants exciting!!"
Muj
9/26/20, 11:19 PM
Great story
9/26/20, 10:59 PM
> I read the first chapter on AOO and really enjoyed it, so im happy to see the continuation here! Thanks for finishing it! looking forward to the continuation of Breaking boys Just so you know, the whole thing is now posted on both sites.
9/26/20, 9:54 PM
excellent writing and characters i loved how much personality dustin had
9/26/20, 8:29 PM
I wonder if the chief will and Jake will get caught too