Recent Comments

11/6/20, 11:09 PM
Well played, sir, well played!! A very enjoyable story; I enjoyed the surprise of Sygg to learn that the bard hadn't been vetted. That set the stage for everything to come.
Lusty Stallion
11/6/20, 10:59 PM
Well I didnt see Koby becoming a bottom or the demons explanation coming. Thanks man for a great story
11/6/20, 7:55 PM
I wish him luck in resolving his issues and hope he is able to join us soon!
11/6/20, 6:59 PM
Very hot and original story! Though I thought till the end that the bard would turn against the bandits and play some more. Hope the story continues! The few paragraphs describing Sygg's induction were especially well-written, hope there's more like that if you give this a follow-up!
11/6/20, 6:47 PM
What a sweet romance! I look forward to the next chapter.
11/6/20, 6:31 PM
> I’m a Rubbrsome fan, Absman. The more twisted and trippy, the better! > Funny you should mention Rubbrsome! I'm happy to say I got an email from him this morning, because he'd heard we were talking about him in the Forum. He's healthy and well, though he's dealing with some life stuff, and he'll come back to us when he can. I'm even happier to say he's reading this series -- and he likes it!
11/6/20, 6:20 PM
> Believe me when I say the next three chapters are a roller-coaster ride and none of it – I hope – what you expect. Personally, I'm satisfied that I managed to guess the big twists regarding the Deputy, Lane and Snake, and Rugby Boy based on your foreshadowing and some very generous hints from you. I'm still waiting for the other shoe to drop with my theory about Rugby Boy, but I'm confident that will play out at least mostly as predicted- though of course, I welcome an unforeseen twist. Balancing the twin needs to satisfy an audience by meeting their expectations to create enjoyment and satisfaction while also subverting their expectations to create interest and emotional investment is difficult, even for people who tell stories for a living. > Everything we know and have been comfortable with has been thrown for a loop and we’re off in a different direction than we’d been set up for. I'm a Rubbrsome fan, Absman. The more twisted and trippy, the better!
11/6/20, 6:02 PM
Such a hot story! I loved the image of a tavern full of enslaved men with dripping hard cocks!
11/6/20, 5:55 PM
> someone with a mind control kink would probably be perfectly fine with an alien invasion story ending in the symbiosis and mental enslavement of humanity > This series -- all the way back to the Original Tale -- has always been a Horror Story. An erotic horror story -- however weird that seems -- but horror nonetheless. We are at the moment of divergence with this chapter. Everything we know and have been comfortable with has been thrown for a loop and we're off in a different direction than we'd been set up for. Believe me when I say the next three chapters are a roller-coaster ride and none of it -- I hope -- what you expect.
11/6/20, 5:55 PM
This story is great. I agree with the previous comment, I like how Sygg began to take the story as his own and asume he's a donkey. I like his name, Sygg sounds good (and being renamed Ass is good too, I love renames). The only thing is that I would have loved to see more of those about "trying to accomplish what he thought were noble quests while ultimately making an ass of himself to everyone around him." Would had been fun to explore how he see some humiliating things as part of his quests, and mess more with his former self. But anyway, it is pretty cool, as all your stories