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10/30/20, 1:40 AM
Fucking spectacular, one of the best stories I’ve read on this site, the lead up was just perfect.
Lusty Stallion
10/30/20, 1:05 AM
Thanks man. What a great story. Can't wait for the next part
Anonymous
10/30/20, 12:46 AM
An interesting and well written piece, but the lack of line breaks makes for a wall of text that can be an awkward read when there’s a lot of dialogue going on. Some extra spacing would go a long way to improve the readability of the work :)
Jun 28, 2016
10/29/20, 11:59 PM
I just wanna jump in and share the bath! This story is pretty close to my hottest fantasy
Hunter_C_Wolfe@Hotmail.Com
10/29/20, 11:58 PM
I would pay to converse with such a stranger
10/29/20, 11:52 PM
That was a great story. I enjoyed the transformation from cocky predator to subservient son. It was also a great invention of having Eric forget the transformation and accept the new reality.
10/29/20, 11:10 PM
Seems like this one has been around before.
10/29/20, 9:17 PM
You do a good job is building the setup and hooking the lawyer in. It was an enjoyable read.
10/29/20, 8:57 PM
Very hot story. Really into Dominant Bottoms and submissive tops scenes. I'm very curious about the other dumb jock victims.
Dec 2, 2017
10/29/20, 7:13 PM
Great hot muscle transformation story, from one of the best writers on
Jonanator
10/29/20, 5:29 PM
hope he continues to manipulate his big brother. It's hot
10/29/20, 5:13 PM
I really enjoyed this, especially having Tommy crave being used sexually by his brother without losing his real sexual identity. I hope you'll continue.
revenge
10/29/20, 4:15 PM
LOVE this
10/29/20, 2:53 PM
Gave the World of Erotus a read. Uh... I wish our day to day could be that sexual!! hahaha! I know I really sex things up, but that story was sex'd up. I love the concept of the alpha male top just counting his days, and purposely teasing constantly like that. Its over the top, but in a fun comical way. Seriously, would be a better world if we have sexual shenanigans that openly.
Hunter_C_Wolfe@Hotmail.Com
10/29/20, 2:24 PM
I would love to be in a position to be manipulated like that, maybe one day
10/29/20, 2:05 PM
as long as just the one who isolated him are punished, and the inoccent are left unharmed, I'm okay with that
Drake Nightstrom
10/29/20, 1:49 PM
Thank you for all the encouragement! I wouldn't worry too much about Josh and Martin or anyone else that was part of isolating Mortimer. I think the next chapter may be pleasing in some ways, maybe frustrating in others.
Anonymous
10/29/20, 1:25 PM
an old favorite... such a hot story...
10/29/20, 12:52 PM
Thanks all!
10/29/20, 12:33 PM
Love the changes in Koby. Looking forward to Mortimer's next wish. Great work!
10/29/20, 10:04 AM
I do think that at least Josh and Martin should became gay too, I mean, if the rest of the guy in school haven't done anything wrong, I think they should leave unsceved
10/29/20, 9:35 AM
Oh you have to continue this! I want to see Coby get more huge and gay!
10/29/20, 9:19 AM
I'm curious to see what path Koby will take in the end. Fingers crossed he becomes a better guy, but knowing demonic intervention I expect some kind of twist. Awesome writing, looking forward to the next!
10/29/20, 8:08 AM
personally, I care most about Benji and the other lollipop boys. love the concept of daddy enrolling them and picking them up from school. the role of it being a school feels less impactful for other stories like drones and butlers. Would be curious to hear more about benjis adventures in the real world after all of this or another boy from lollipop if its not too repetitive. Cheers!
10/29/20, 7:37 AM
I like this. Looking forward to chapter 2 and more.
10/29/20, 7:19 AM
Amazing chapter! I'm excited to see how Jake will take things further with David. Maybe give the captain an extreme leather/cigar fetish (I honestly have a huge thing for big, beefy, bearded, leather clad, cigar men). I love the submissive masculine daddy harem that he's built. Honestly, your stories are unique in the way you describe and portray each scene, sexual or not. You're a great writer and story teller, but please, take it easy. I know you have a very eager audience, but considering your situation, just don't overdo it. We all waited this long for another chapter, we're not going anywhere, so take as long as you need.
10/29/20, 6:45 AM
Amazing story!!!! πŸ’™πŸ’™πŸ’™ please continue, it really was one of the best stories I read in a long time!
HunksLover
10/29/20, 6:45 AM
This is Great! i Hope that the next chapter gets some more slutty slaves next!
Aug 7, 2018
magicboy2005@aol.com
10/29/20, 6:41 AM
I have read this story before, finally got around to rating it. I love the idea of the fat gained from the food moving around the body to be placed at other body parts, and really hot descriptions! I would love to read more from you and read a continuation of how the other frat guys transform
10/29/20, 4:20 AM
Wow dude, I love the outline you have here for the future of the story. And yeah, I agree with you that Jese should still be bratty and a little resistant to the full slutty mode on Star World. This will give us a nice build up in the story and make everything sweeter. I wanted to use this opportunity to actually refer you to my stories, if possible. One of them is called World of Erotus and is actually a D&D-esque erotic story set in a fantasy world, so I think you might like that! I have also published the Slutty Naughty Jock series and just posted yesterday a new story called Dumb Jock Roommate. I'm actually thinking of posting them here on the site as well, I think maybe they will be a good fit. Anyway, give them a read if you want, I hope you like them, and I would love to hear your thoughts! https://www.nifty.org/nifty/gay/sf-fantasy/world-of-erotus/ https://www.nifty.org/nifty/gay/college/dumb-jock-roommate https://www.nifty.org/nifty/gay/incest/slutty-naughty-jock/