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12/31/20, 9:54 PM
Very hot story! But I wanted to know more about what happened to Darren. We get such a tight focus on the relationship between John and the Leader that we don't get to see the rest of the cult very much.
4luvofurbottom
12/31/20, 9:21 PM
Yes! I'm do happy this series is continuing. i love your writing, love the descriptions and inner focus of changes. But i especially love that you focus on changing a guy into a hot thicc otter. Can't wait til the narrator realizes his dick is useless.
12/31/20, 8:18 PM
is Gearfetish.com still a thing?
Dec 31, 2020
Anonymous
12/31/20, 7:36 PM
excellent work!!
Anonymous
12/31/20, 7:35 PM
[@Hypnothrill](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/37386) - If I wrote a sequel, I don't think that's the direction I'd take it. Thought I'll admit, I did almost have the story end with another knock on the door and a giftwrapped gumball machine waiting for the himbos. So far as Ben goes, I thought he'd end up differently too, but he jumped right off the page while I was writing him, so this is who he is. [@Plymouth58](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/1353762) - Thanks man! To be honest, I don't really like Ben as a person either, but I think it's a better story with him there. He's the foil to Mark and Kenny. I meant to write him as more of a fun daddy type, but sometimes a character tells me who they are and I just have to go with it. [@Island Jock](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/918465) - That'd be totally sick, right? But, so far as I know, nobody has invented it yet. You'll just have to do the same thing I do - listen to your cock and do whatever it wants. @Wow - Thanks bro! I've been doing a lot of more experimental stuff this year, and I decided to end it off by returning to my roots and writing a good ol' himbo story. [@welan](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/114561) - Super glad to hear that. I was trying to keep it shorter, but the sex scenes just kept coming. Stoked to hear it wasn't too long. [@TexMuscle](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/10002223) - Thanks man. I dunno about his IQ, but there's definitely something that happens to cement the personality change when a new himbo swallows the gum. A good himbo loves to swallow after all. @anon - Thanks bro! :)
12/31/20, 7:10 PM
can I suggest a prompt? what about a conservative party gathering that is turned into a gay pride rally and orgy after the sound equipment I hijacked?
Anonymous
12/31/20, 5:31 PM
The worldbuilding in this story is so succinct and sharp, and I love the religious swear expressions. My favourite part is the trial, it's so surreal and delightful. The sexy parts are also so well-written, and the little details in the scenes are really well-chosen. So good!
12/31/20, 4:58 PM
Damn! Okay I see how his goes now. Def have someone in mine to Dibbs. *evil smirk*
12/31/20, 4:56 PM
Love this. So hot!
12/31/20, 4:16 PM
Hope they 69 in the next chapter! 🤤
Dec 31, 2020
12/31/20, 4:14 PM
What a fun concept - the Restaurant at the End of the Multiverse, as it were. Had me thirsting for graphic details, particularly of what went down on the dance floor. Also, what a chill, competent waiter. 10/10 would tip big.
12/31/20, 4:05 PM
I *loved* this! Thanks so much for writing it, Noam!
12/31/20, 4:03 PM
Hot!!!
Anonymous
12/31/20, 3:52 PM
excellent work thanks
12/31/20, 3:43 PM
Very hot. Liked how the landlord ended up taking control. Guess his IQ was high enough he could stand to loose some points. The muscle gain doubling from swallowing the gum was interesting. Just shows how important it is to swallow. Thanks for banging out another great story so we could bang one out too.
Dec 31, 2020
12/31/20, 3:35 PM
I'm so glad you like it, [Noam](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/1403470)! Thanks for giving me such a good prompt to develop!
Dec 31, 2020
12/31/20, 3:34 PM
Kudos to [Kuro](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/10001473), who inspired this story! Happy New Year!
Dec 31, 2020
12/31/20, 3:34 PM
Kudos to [Nutiper](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/25270), who inspired this story! Happy New Year, man!
12/31/20, 3:05 PM
things are getting better, let see how the night ends
12/31/20, 2:44 PM
How about a slave whose body self-replicates bondage and gear? Like any time he gets a boner his body produces chastity gear. Self-stretching his hole by plugging itself up, restraining its own hands, piercing itself, etc
Dec 31, 2020
12/31/20, 1:59 PM
Great combination of sweet and sexy! You did the whole "this is totally how normal bros interact with each other perfectly normally" thing very nicely, and you make me think that my own physiotherapist is not providing me all the service he reasonably could. Nicely done!
Dec 31, 2020
12/31/20, 1:57 PM
Loved this! The ethereal/Christmas/magic aura, and adorable way Noel is like "Yeah, I guess my arm-sized cock is kinda big, I guess. Do... do you not wanna get fucked by it? That's totally cool, but you'd probably enjoy it, totally up to you..." vibe was great. And your description of what Tom felt like getting railed by it? *Chef's kiss* You're a very talented writer, Mr. Dace.
12/31/20, 1:40 PM
Hmmm...wished I met Mika too now
12/31/20, 1:40 PM
Nice for sweet and fast jerk off.
12/31/20, 12:53 PM
This is a super hot story and so well-written and characterized. What I especially love is the hubris and refusal to learn from their first mistake. I also like the moments where you play against the tropes for both characters, in moments as "small" -- er, minor? -- as dick size to personality choices as they get into each other because of the spray.
Wow, super hot dumbing down story. Loved the changes!
12/31/20, 12:41 PM
****
12/31/20, 12:38 PM
Very hot story! Short, yet well written. Great job!
12/31/20, 12:07 PM
is a very hot story... i hope i receive that gum too...want to be a dumb himbo slut only thinking about sex
12/31/20, 11:13 AM
Well done! This was a fun read!
Lusty Stallion
12/31/20, 11:03 AM
@OsoDulce I love that idea. Something to play with in the future I think