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1/9/24, 1:45 AM
This was really hot! Thank you so much for sharing this with us <3

1/9/24, 5:45 AM
@[timpu713](/user/show/10045954) Thanks. It was fun to write. And sharing is fun.
1/9/24, 3:59 AM
Thank you for one of the best and hottest stories I’ve ever read on this site or anywhere else! I have a few stray, not particularly organized thoughts that address the other comments more than the story itself. I hope you’re not feeling deflated by any of the comments regarding the way it ends. I personally enjoyed it quite a lot. And I hope you’ll note that not one of them criticizes your writing in the least, which remains thoroughly impeccable. Perhaps it would be a bit more palatable to the detractors if viewed through the lens of an epilogue rather than a last chapter. If one accepts the presuppositions of the story (that this type of profound behavior-changing hypnosis is real, that someone like Alex might actually exist, etc.) then this conclusion is the logical outcome of the story. Alex suddenly developing true romantic feelings towards Tommy and freeing him from his mental control isn’t the real Alex, it’s a new character instead. Tommy being released from his hypnosis and embracing a “new Tommy” that’s a natural pussyboy negates the premise of hypnotic control. And on and on. In a sense the reactions of people who wanted a “good” ending reminds me of the mentality of all the flakes that pervade sites like Recon. They sit around masturbating to chats about being a “slave” or TPE but as soon as the discussion starts veering towards serious consequences of those arrangements (unconditional relocation, fianancial transfers, occupational changes, various social isolations, on and on) — poof! Suddenly the masturbators are gone, never to be heard from again. Deep down they just want the fantasy, not the reality which might have genuinely unpleasant consequences. Ok, I’ll wrap up this rant. I hope no one feels overly attacked reading this, this is just my personal perspective on the way the story ended. Fantastic story from A to Z bud. Truly an all-time great.
1/9/24, 2:16 AM
that was a very satisfying read, i couldn't last the whole way through it hit me so hard
1/9/24, 12:50 AM
Really enjoyed this. Would like to have had more details on their sexual activity on the cruise. Hope you write more.
1/8/24, 11:18 PM
While reworked, the truth remains as Daymion pointed out. There is so much eroticism and depth to the world and the characters. The chapters pull me in whether it's actual Coins using their pets in some fashion, or with hints at how the society works and the undertones that go along with such a hypersexual culture. The build up and tease of Jasper falling into accepting that pet status -- nudged along certainly -- to be wanting it and seeing his mixed feelings about that feels really solid and I'm always eager for more of this world. Great job on the re-work. Like the chapters before, you're elevating an already great story into a tight, focused narrative for plot points and characters alike.
1/8/24, 8:24 PM
Short and sweet. I’m having a good time reading through your stories!

Wakeup
1/8/24, 11:12 PM
@[Derek Williams](/user/show/175661) Nice to hear people still enjoy some of my older stories!
1/8/24, 9:22 PM
I was hoping theres actual intercourse or sex scenes included in the chapter or what actual happened during the cruise but thats alright. Its still a good read.
1/8/24, 8:34 PM
Oh man, this chapter is so great and so hot. And that switcheroo at the end, Felix being sex drunk instead of Evan. Looking forward for the next chapter.
1/8/24, 7:15 PM
This is *fascinating*. I love seeing deconstructions like this, and I'm definitely looking forward to more.

1/8/24, 7:37 PM
@[Soren Fitz](/user/show/10011670) Thank you! I'll try my best to update regularly :)
1/8/24, 1:17 AM
Why is this not also on Cupid? Love it.

Martin
1/8/24, 5:44 AM
@[Beaner](/user/show/2654278) Agreed. Stories like this should be cross-posted to Cupid as well. That server always needs more love :)

1/8/24, 6:26 PM
@[Martin](/user/show/125990) After I started writing, this story has taken quite a different direction than I anticipated - I've updated to publish it to Cupid as well.

Martin
1/8/24, 7:11 PM
@[Amero](/user/show/10014920) :thumbsup:
1/8/24, 6:51 PM
Love where this is going. I really enjoy the normal postings on gss, but this lends a lovely little sparkle to a wonderful "room"
1/8/24, 4:22 PM
I totally enjoyed this chapter. It is equally hot and hilarious. It is nice to read Father learning to be at least good at sex. And that final scene is just so good.
1/8/24, 2:43 PM
a lovely story :) looking for the next chapter
1/8/24, 11:30 AM
Rereading it I just noticed Rugby Boy.

1/8/24, 12:30 PM
@[TexMuscle](/user/show/10002223) I'd forgotten about this cameo. I thought I was creating a shared universe with book 3 "The Centaur's Journey", where Wolf Murdock from POLLINATION: The Series plays a significant role. As a matter of fact, the end of events in PHOLUS 3 begin Wolf's journey in POLLINATION
1/7/24, 8:56 PM
Toll, wann geht es weiter?

Martin
1/8/24, 5:46 AM
@[Pup Vince](/user/show/10023016) Arcturus has actually published a huge number of chapters all at once. I'm going to approve them over the course of the next couple of days.

1/8/24, 5:54 AM
@[Martin](/user/show/125990) as in the discussion mentioned, about a planned publish Date, it is okay not to proof all chapters at one day. BR Arcturus

1/8/24, 10:27 AM
@[Martin](/user/show/125990) I know. And can't wait to submit the 12 chapters of our co-work (the 2nd Season... you know)

1/8/24, 12:09 PM
@[Pup Vince](/user/show/10023016) Ich freue mich auch schon 😍
1/8/24, 7:12 AM
What an excellent first story. Hits so many notes for me. Very excited for more!

1/8/24, 10:50 AM
@[GiveInToTheMusk](/user/show/909380) Thank you! I'll try hitting (maybe even smashing) those notes some more ;)
1/8/24, 2:51 AM
Great first story! I’m more into the coach and loveeee scent / musk play! So I did enjoy the jockstrap and scent scenes. Coach seducing the dad of our jock and himself using his musk, and even players worshipping coach’s pits would be the hottest!

1/8/24, 10:48 AM
@[Obedient Beast](/user/show/901908) Hi! Glad you liked it! And if you liked coach and the scent play, you'll love what happens next. And oh ho ho, do I have plans for our step-dad. Admittedly, the way i currently outlined the story, we'll get there by chapter 8...but i'll make the wait good for you, don't worry :smirk:
1/8/24, 1:18 AM
Great story so far, very hot and overall well written! I like the side you've taken with the coach being sort of a softer dom type. Also think the classmate being someone he ends up with could be nice--maybe a similar dynamic where he's sort of an assertive daddy type energy in bed, but remains a cute goofball when doing other stuff? Hope you continue with this!

1/8/24, 10:41 AM
@[Botbot](/user/show/10010276) Thanks! Very glad you like the coach, I have a lot of plans for him. Some things i missed a bit in the stories i read is after getting dommed, also being praised and cuddled and just have a bit of aftercare ya know. So there's definetly gonna be that as well. As for Dane, we'll see ;) Still not decided what exactly I want him to be like in the bed, but will try to keep it a bit different than it is with coach. Of course, writing chapter 2 right now.
1/8/24, 10:08 AM
A great return from my favourite series!
1/8/24, 7:19 AM
Excellent stuff.
12/28/23, 9:16 PM
Joined the other day and enjoying the play so far. GH ID 1292865

1/8/24, 7:04 AM
@[AarrowOM](/user/show/13926) A bit late to the party, but never too late! I've just assigned you rewards! :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:

1/8/24, 7:19 AM
@[Gay Harem](/user/show/10032681) Thank you!
1/4/24, 8:05 PM
Hey, is there a January post coming soon? I'm excited for the new year and the new events!

1/8/24, 7:03 AM
@[eveningwill](/user/show/958518) There will be one, yes! :blush: Thank you very much for anticipating it! :heart_eyes:
1/8/24, 6:23 AM
Adding castration and body modification to the story in this chapter was a big surprise. Even though that didn't actually happen in the chapter, it's definitely going to happen later. Personally I would just not read a story with those two tags, so I did not enjoy this last part. (Edit: Sorry apparently I accidentally left this on part three instead of part four.)
Martin
1/8/24, 5:43 AM
@MeisterSklave Just for info: I've tried multiple times to reach you by mail, even before I restored your old series, and again to answer your mail to me. It seems my emails don't reach you for some reason. Please contact me on the site's forum, which seems to be more reliant than emails in this case.
1/8/24, 5:08 AM
Great work - looking forward to Sunday Practice. ;)
1/8/24, 4:47 AM
Great chapter. Very interested in knowing the continuation with the story of daddy Bruce (with the participation of his handsome eldest son), Coach Jenkins and Cody (I really hope that Cody's father appears, a handsome redhead daddy is a great addition). Rich is a case aside: If Rich's family doesn't get together even at Christmas to be controlled, I don't know how Dexter will be able to gain access to his three brothers and his multimillionaire father. And I think this family deserves it's own chapter.
Jx
1/7/24, 10:45 AM
Great Chapter! can’t wait to see where it goes! So will the Christmas special be focused solely on Jimmy, Chad and Josh or will the other slaves be added to the queue?

1/7/24, 12:06 PM
@Jx That's a secret. :wink:

Jx
1/8/24, 4:37 AM
@[avionneX](/user/show/1683719) So when’s the next chapter of the holiday special?😉
Anonymous
1/7/24, 11:12 PM
This was great! I really loved the way things came full circle for boy. Your previous story was great, too! Thank you for writing and sharing.

1/8/24, 4:34 AM
@Anonymous Glad you liked 'em! :heart:
Anonymous
1/8/24, 3:53 AM
Loving this story!!
1/8/24, 3:16 AM
Fun story! I did not see the alien invasion twist coming at all.

Willie Cici
1/8/24, 3:52 AM
@[Hypnothrill](/user/show/37386) I'm glad you like it. The upcoming chapters chronicle Adam's cross-country trek.