Recent Comments

1/25/21, 10:21 AM
interesting story. that would be a fantasy of mine,too great start. can't wait to read more
Jan 25, 2021
1/25/21, 9:42 AM
as my username suggests, id love a sequel - or someone else who uses the same potion but repeatedly, to gain more mass as he assimilates into different, larger men
Jan 25, 2021
1/25/21, 7:24 AM
Very fun story! Well written, and both cute and creepy at the same time. Also, very good you set boundaries with the writing at the end there. If you don't want to write sex scenes, then don't do it :) Good attitude to have
1/25/21, 6:45 AM
you rock dude I.J.S.
1/25/21, 6:37 AM
I reiterate my previous comments- hot work dude I.J.S.
1/25/21, 5:34 AM
careful with the edit dude I.J.S.
1/25/21, 5:13 AM
this is the real deal man! I am a fan now, and will check out more of your work- peace out I.J.S.
1/25/21, 5:13 AM
Started rereading this so it would be fresh when the 4th Cycle One came out. It wasn't committed to memory because I hadn't read it 20 times like all your other stories. I had forgotten the details of the last chapter where Rex no longer had Captain Thunder's power. But I expect that the cum of the god Alpha Man would have some muscular horny effects on the men lucky enough to take his cock. Thanks for a great story. Now on to Cycle One. I'm still dreaming of Rex meeting Venom and Eddie Brock losing what is most dear to him when he receives the two cocks of his unknown fantasy. His new and improved and Rex's now symbiote covered penetrating him.
1/25/21, 4:50 AM
need..more....*drools*
Moby
1/25/21, 4:32 AM
This was lots of fun! Though everytime I read one of these uber hot himbo/twink transformations from you, I kinda wish the transformation is contagious and everyone they fuck turns into another twink/himbo
1/25/21, 4:28 AM
dude, you rock! the capture ( so well written ) the corruption ( keeping them first person aware straight was SO HOT ) cannot wait for more ...sir I.J.S.
Anonymous
1/25/21, 4:09 AM
Great story!! Loved it!!!
giveintothemusk
1/25/21, 4:05 AM
Great story so far!
1/25/21, 3:34 AM
this was the BEST story i have ever read on this site. it was so hot and I'm sad to see it end. but you did such an amazing job at it, out of the probably 100 stories I've read on the site, this one is by far the best one. thank you for the wonderful story.
1/25/21, 3:17 AM
More! please please please!!!
Anonymous
1/25/21, 2:44 AM
its so interesting wheres moareeee
Jan 24, 2021
1/25/21, 2:01 AM
not exactly a classic but need full things by Steven King i always thought would be a good story to adapt
1/25/21, 12:07 AM
do you accept suggestions? what about some guy making his college's wrestling team (coaches included) gay as he wishes for them to accept and understand him for who he is
1/24/21, 8:12 PM
so good! I especially like the changing of Leos wardrobe to be more preppy! would love to see more of that in the next installment.
Jonanator
1/24/21, 6:08 PM
Can't wait for more.
1/24/21, 5:55 PM
The mid-story shift in narrators threw me for a second, but otherwise, I thought this was extremely hot. I loved how you depicted the various residents of the dorm under the Sandman's hypnotic control and triggering each other.
1/24/21, 5:17 PM
Sweetest thing i've read on here; wish there was more :)
Jan 24, 2021
1/24/21, 3:52 PM
i agree the story is well written. Just need to be more of a character development
1/24/21, 3:33 PM
Fantastic story. Loved the detail and descriptions. Super erotic!
1/24/21, 2:53 PM
Hey @MCBrain, I'm thinking of writing a similar story to this (thanks for the inspiration!), but in a different vein - would you want me to run it by you as a Community Series when it's done, or would you prefer I just leave an homage in the introduction?
Jan 24, 2021
1/24/21, 2:02 PM
Some of the image links don't work, but I thought the story itself was great. I just wish it were about twice as long, to give us more character development and more build-up to Jack's transformation into a cockslut like his teammates.
1/24/21, 10:41 AM
hot second part of the story. i appreciated the happier ending and everyone finding their person!
1/24/21, 10:06 AM
another great chapter!! i feel like it you couldve gone into more detail about the edging and events like in your other stories which make it really hot. overall great and cant wait to see whats next
Anonymous
1/24/21, 9:51 AM
excellent thanks