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3/23/21, 10:33 PM
It was so hooooooooot, love it, and now we got a Rhino? One of my fav species to be zonked and fucked with Lions, Bears, Bulls, Horses and Gorillas :P I would love to see what more would you do or how is the little dragon to control them at least a bit without being under hypno musk :3
3/23/21, 10:31 PM
Plz write more
3/23/21, 10:21 PM
I'm gonna give the opposite opinion. The piss raping is super hot but the final chapter as a whole felt lazy and convenient compared with the setup. Would've liked a little bit more body horror and tension to the finale.
3/23/21, 9:10 PM
love this series! very hot! i enjoy how mean spirited it is too adds an extra element. i could read about sam being treated like a whore all day long. i was thinking something that could be extra fun is if he had a friend who tried to come to his rescue and either was turned into a whore too or couldnt resist the pills effects on sam and ended up humiliating sam the most out of everyone.
3/23/21, 8:50 PM
yeah...no.
Robodrone
3/23/21, 8:34 PM
A blue pill of a different kind! And do i have a candidate i want to use them on, oh man! My half brother, an otherwise useless male chauvinist homophobic right wing pig person. We are the opposite in almost every way, EXCEPT we look and are built so much alike people think we have the same mother instead of the same father. I would *love* to look down into his blue eyes and see my own face sucking on the end of my own dick, or watching our dick fucking our boy pussy! "Look up at me Mark! Look UP! Remember when you called me a faggot in my wrestling singlet? But you couldnt take your eyes off my cycling tights? Well, look how you turned out big brother! And where youve turned up!" Love this series!
3/23/21, 8:33 PM
Wasn't what I was expecting reading the second chapter first, but this is pretty hot and creative! Really enjoying this story!
3/23/21, 8:10 PM
Chapter 2, heh? Well this is promising and surprinsingly easy to understand without having read first part. Only one phrase implied lore. I am really interested in the story. Oh, looked what you wrote already. There is the first chapter. Going to comment on it.
3/23/21, 7:53 PM
Oh, man. This was hot. I loved that Liam wanted to "change" and that "any change" was hot. Would love to see more description of other ways he got changed as well as a continuation. Really, really loved it.
Anonymous
3/23/21, 7:43 PM
Well, as I talked with Math_Reez in a private conversation, one of the idea I had during writing WAS that Elijah had been hypnotized. I didn't go with it because I couldn't find a way for th story to solve this issues and be credible. A scene I didn't write for time constraint was that Elijah asked his parents to take off those "childish things" while he wasn't there. Elijah wouldn't have known how to explain his new world-view over phone/letters with Jacob which is why he didn't talk with his friends much. Ah, someone who got that Elijah started hypnotizing after the bar. Not everyone got it. Honestly, rather than writing a sequel chapter, I think I will write an "extended cut" which add scenes explaining what was going on. One day. Probably not soon, I want to focus on other stories I already have. But it should solve the rough problem. Yeah! Someone else who wonders about mutual hypnosis! Albeit, I precise immediately, Elijah hasn't realized he was hypnotized and fought back. He just learned hypnosis and decided to have a great master, twisting the subconscious orders he received. Your phrases is worded in a way where I wonder if you got the former impression rather than the later... A community story could be nice, if I know some want to write about it.
3/23/21, 7:41 PM
loved it!
3/23/21, 6:40 PM
I personally don't mind the final conversion method for Ben. Though I would echo a bit some of the other comments that it was a bit too easy and too quick compared to the gradual transformation of the other two. I also think that approach could open a totally separate conversion storyline based on the watersports play. But other than that, the overall story is another standard high quality product of yours once again, so thumbs up to it in general! I'll sure be looking forward to a sequel of this! With the premise of a tainted well and a planned B&B, I can see many possibilities where this could go... ;)
3/23/21, 6:12 PM
There was a mixup with formatting, this is chapter two of a story lol
Art
3/23/21, 6:09 PM
This begs for a continuation. Would be extremely hot having the rugby team controlled by the swim team. the part about "Kent mid fucked me and I mind fucked him" was confusing. Perhaps a little back story would be in order before continuing.
Oct 16, 2006
3/23/21, 5:42 PM
I hadn't really thought about it. What would you want to see happen to poor TB?
3/23/21, 5:10 PM
Great story - I would love to be taken unawares like that...
3/23/21, 5:08 PM
love the premise, a change of awareness is always diabolically hot. i just wish there was more build up and it was longer lol. awesome story!
3/23/21, 4:39 PM
This was/IS SO hot! love it!
Diz
3/23/21, 4:29 PM
Oooo I like. These kinda of aware changes are so hot to read
3/23/21, 4:04 PM
I would love to be one of the boys on the stage
3/23/21, 4:02 PM
Fun story! I was just a little confused by Henry's admission that "Kent mindfucked me and I mindfucked him."
Anonymous
3/23/21, 3:54 PM
Really enjoyed this! Hope you write more of it.
3/23/21, 3:50 PM
As others have said, the conversion method is not for me; watersports just aren't my thing. It's still a very well-written story, though, and the complete change in Ben's personality is stunning! And finally, I give you credit for being unafraid to try new kinks and tricks, Hypnothrill; "Dreamland Towers" comes to mind as another different avenue for you. That takes courage as an author, and you certainly have it! :)
3/23/21, 3:31 PM
That's a fair critique. I knew that this short concluding chapter was going to seem like an anticlimax to some readers, and so I debated on whether to just break the story up into two parts (as I already had this ending written when I posted Part 2). But I felt like the story divided naturally by days, and I liked leaving the readers in suspense at the end of Day 2.
nyan
3/23/21, 3:19 PM
This is funny as fuck i need more
3/23/21, 3:04 PM
yeah I agree, i was really excited after the first 2 chapters, this came out of nowhere and went real quick. Shame
3/23/21, 3:02 PM
that was....wayyy too abrupt after the first two amazing set up.
Anonymous
3/23/21, 2:44 PM
totally hot!!!
3/23/21, 1:15 PM
Is this a repost? or just the first time this has been posted here / i read this elsewhere. Either way, great read.
3/23/21, 12:57 PM
I'll echo previous sentiments and say the final method of conversion is not to my tastes but I appreciate the variation you put into that aspect of your stories and I did like it as a somewhat accelerated method of converting Ben, compared to the more gradual change that his step-family went through. Regardless of whether your next story is a sequel to this series, one of your previous series, or something completely new, I'll definitely be checking out whatever it is.