Recent Comments

1/22/24, 11:50 AM
Love the story so far and hope to see more
1/22/24, 11:39 AM
Great beginning. I hope you can keep the story going on account of rules
1/22/24, 10:49 AM
did yo sometime go more into hypno / brainwash until mindless drone ? Clay and jeff need to be turn into mindless drone ... in 3th part (if yo still writting)
1/22/24, 8:23 AM
Pleaae continue!
1/22/24, 7:43 AM
Well done! Loved reading it!!!
1/22/24, 7:35 AM
Great start - looking forward to the next chapter.
1/22/24, 7:18 AM
A brilliant third chapter. Superb writing - I feel as though I'm in Daddy's dungeon too. Can't wait to see if there is another chapter to the story.
1/22/24, 6:30 AM
Nice start. Look forward to more.
1/22/24, 12:22 AM
Bookmarked this story a while ago to finish it when I had time, and damn its hot. I love the reality-shifting obliviousness and how the frat boy is pulled in with his arrogance and then enjoyment. Great story.

1/22/24, 6:21 AM
@[Naedre](/user/show/931338) Oh yeah, figuring out how to draw the frat boy in was one of my favourite parts of the process, even though I was really worried it wouldn’t work, lol. I’m glad you found it hot! Thanks for reading, I’m happy you saw what I was doing.
1/11/24, 12:21 AM
As always Soren, another great story that breaths life and character into your world that you have beautifully crafted! How you wrote such a fun and lighthearted, yet incredibly precise and sexy, story based off a single gif is beyond me, I continue to be envious of your writing abilities! Keep up the great work and I can't wait to see what else you have planned!

1/22/24, 6:18 AM
@[Franco Apollo](/user/show/10029736) I’m still shocked that I was able to get all this out of one GIF at all. I knew I had to write _something_, or else I’d die, but what? Took a lot of brainstorming to get to this point. But as long as I captured the essential hotness and vibe of the source material, I’m happy. Thanks for reading!!
1/10/24, 11:32 PM
I think that that was one of my favourite skullfucking scenes put to digital paper - well done! And righteous spreading of gayness via reality change is always gonna be my cup of tea, so good work all round!

1/22/24, 6:17 AM
@[kuro](/user/show/10001473) I just love me a skullfucking. I’m glad I pulled it off for you! I love when a bottom is enthusiastic about getting his face wrecked, and I had extra fun with the mid-game consent check before things got even harder.
1/10/24, 8:00 PM
Hot! Fascinating reality change. Sexy times here.

1/22/24, 6:09 AM
@[Heru Kane](/user/show/56823) I’m glad you enjoyed it! I was really digging the idea of someone who undergoes a reality change and yet ends up a dom top on the other side, and I’m glad the change didn’t affect your enjoyment of Evan’s POV. That, and the fact that the reality change isn’t even what made Evan gay, explicitly, just that the openness it induced made him totally down to explore his gay side. It’s honestly a damn indirect way to make someone gay… but the Priapist managed a lot with a little by bringing the whole frat along with Evan.
1/10/24, 7:31 PM
Enjoyed the reality shifting aspects. The characters have just enough a feeling of wrongness to add a frisson of uncertainty before they get onboard with the new world. The descriptions were also great. Enough details about appearances, sensations, and emotions without getting too purple prose. Looks like the frat is going to save money by skipping protein shakes with Evan around, though they might be forced into a bulking phase if Braden's distended abs are evidence of Evan's new normal output. :laughing:

1/22/24, 6:06 AM
@[johnclark](/user/show/1014143) I’m a big fan of the ‘gradual adjustment to a new reality’ kind of vibe—I feel that drawing it out and giving the characters multiple chances to reflect consciously or subconsciously about the change in their world makes it feel more realistic, if “realistic” is really a word that I can use for this kind of thing. And I wouldn’t be surprised if you were right about the bulking phase—after everyone gets a taste of Evan’s loads, they might all start getting that rugby body Evan craves so much… thanks for reading and commenting! I‘m glad you saw what I was going for.
1/22/24, 5:51 AM
This is such a clever way to do a transformation story! Funny AND hot!
11/25/23, 6:25 AM
hope we get part 2 soon. I'm normally not one for multi-part stories but this is intriguing.

11/25/23, 6:56 AM
@[ReMinder](/user/show/109502) Thanks so much. Now the pressure is on.

1/22/24, 5:44 AM
@[ReMinder](/user/show/109502) I'm curious -- why aren't you normally one for multi-part stories and do you believe this series has fallen into the pattern that you do not like to see in other multi-series stories?
1/22/24, 3:42 AM
The ending definitely kept me wanting more. Nice story man
HypnoMutt
1/22/24, 3:32 AM
Stunning and exciting. Instant classic.
1/22/24, 3:32 AM
I really enjoyed the story. It was really hot. Now that it's been a few years, I'd love to read a sequel to it. Maybe Jake becomes shorter and fatter once he's in college after Adam gains some of the weight back. Every time he reaches out to Jake he ruins him more.
Jan 20, 2024
1/22/24, 3:08 AM
I'd love to see where this goes
KhrizzzToePhur
1/22/24, 2:54 AM
So fucking horny throughout the entire story. I like premise with the jock. Currently creating a cum-filled collection of underwear. Everytime I put them on I loose myself to lust a little more. 😈 Keep em cumming 💦

1/22/24, 2:57 AM
@KhrizzzToePhur Glad you enjoyed my story 💦💦
1/22/24, 2:01 AM
Can't get enough. I need more. So sexy.
1/22/24, 12:53 AM
Excellent rubber drone story. I love the idea. Makes me so horny every time.
Anonymous
1/21/24, 10:44 PM
No! Please I need more. This is one of the most fun and hot stories I've read!
Jan 17, 2024
1/20/24, 11:06 PM
One of the best tobacco based TF stories I have read. You made gars and all seem very transformative.

1/20/24, 11:50 PM
@[Cutlerfan](/user/show/14171) Thank you! High praise, especially with the many great stories out there.

1/21/24, 8:42 PM
@[nolecub](/user/show/608227) I loved the idea that no one was forced to change. Many stories force changes on the person with no choice. I've read other stories about masculinization but there was less focus on the tobacco and more on bearishness, muscle, and hairiness. I love those but I haven't read a story before that made me happy for the guy to end up a tobacco user.

1/21/24, 10:32 PM
@[Cutlerfan](/user/show/14171) There is some subversion and subterfuge. His friend and the recruiter didn't tell him he would become addicted to nicotine simply by entering the gym - literally because of the environment. So he did have to decide to embrace that over time...and he does struggle with the realization. But yes, he was given the opportunity to choose the rest of his path based on his experiences.
1/21/24, 10:12 PM
Terrific story -- great angle.
1/21/24, 4:48 PM
What an unexpected pleasure, Absman! Excited to see all of these disparate characters come together and interact. Nice to get a light-hearted offering from you after the emotional rollercoaster of The Implant. And since nobody else is saying it: I understood that reference! ;)

1/21/24, 6:56 PM
@[ParadoxBear](/user/show/10002417) You mean the A CHORUS LINE reference? -- thank you, sly bear.

1/21/24, 10:08 PM
@[absman420](/user/show/162063) Is there a single showtunes gay who *doesn't* have the opening of A CHORUS LINE seared into his mind?
Oct 10, 2018
1/21/24, 9:41 PM
Nice material.....
1/20/24, 9:59 PM
Oh, this is going to be good.

1/20/24, 10:29 PM
@[MeddlerIncs](/user/show/913480) no pressure...

1/21/24, 9:13 PM
@[absman420](/user/show/162063) Knowing you, there will be plenty of 'pressure' later on. [chuckles richly]
1/21/24, 8:59 PM
Like Martin, I liked reading the story. Made me hard, too. (Thanks.)