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CandyDarky
7/24/21, 4:40 AM
This ending was amazing! I loved every chapter but this ending was just the best. I had a lot of fun following these stories. You are incredibly talented!
7/24/21, 3:59 AM
Story starts off a little confusing, first has the narrator meeting Sean 1-2 years ago, then says he had developed a crush over the course of many years, but once it gets going, it gets good.
7/24/21, 3:55 AM
Fantastic and hope to read more
7/22/21, 8:05 PM
Fun and sexy quick read! Just curious though, they started selling the hats out to their customers, so did those people somewhat fell under the gear's control then (perhaps at a lighter level)? Great to know that you'll have more coming! Looking forward to see what other groups/professions you have on mind for a uniform change! Others have already mentioned the uniformed civil services and sports teams, but maybe also an office, high-end restaurant/clubhouse (waiters), scout, male college dorm, frat, men's choir, church congregation, etc... Will you just continue to leave the plot as the uniforms being sent to the subjects as "mystery deliveries", or will you consider revealing the "ultimate mastermind" behind it?

7/23/21, 1:50 AM
@tomozco Thanks, I'm glad you're enjoying. There's at least one in your suggestions that's in the works, but more ideas for uniforms are always welcome. For revealing the mastermind at the end, I will say definitely maybe. There's at least a few more organisations in need of an update first. As for the hats, well. Short answer, yes. Long answer, yes with more to come.

7/23/21, 2:48 PM
@TickledPink I'll look forward to the upcoming installments for more answers and surprises then! I'll throw in one more uniform suggestion (if not already in your plans): what about the delivery guys actually delivering the uniforms to those unsuspecting subjects...? ;)

7/24/21, 3:00 AM
Cheers @tomozco, there's definitely too many package delivery double entendres to avoid the deliverymen forever.
7/23/21, 7:21 AM
Wonderful, as always. Hoping to see a handyman or window-washer. Cable guy! I'm trying to think of every porno character. Ooh, a potter! Lifeguard! IT guys! I would say mailman but that might end up revealing too much about the mysterious man too quickly. I'm hooked.

7/24/21, 2:58 AM
Thanks @Norismo! There's definitely some uniform suggestions there I've never even considered. As for the mailmen, I mean, sexy mailman is a classic.
7/24/21, 12:21 AM
This story is truly exciting so far, very fresh takes, and a bit of a slow burn, but still extremely sexy. I hope that when Sam is truly remade into some kind of hypersexualized iteration of himself, that you spend a few chapters with some extended sex scenes and antics. The slow build up is very sexy, but the narrative focus with Sam keeps us from getting exciting scenes like Kevin getting pounded out by Gabe. Once that flips I'm hoping you can add more sexual content to compliment the excellent writing and concept.

7/24/21, 12:32 AM
Thanks! There are enough small changes that have built up to a critical mass at this point. Expect more action in future chapters! @brium
7/23/21, 11:53 PM
also, if you're taking requests, would love to see some exploration of straight men have big sensitive nipples and pecs. Tease. ;)

7/24/21, 12:17 AM
Glad you like the story! I'm not taking requests as such, but obviously people are free to share ideas! I have some nipple play in one of my other stories, [Pan-Galactic Human Fan Club] @gotacoolname
7/24/21, 12:15 AM
Loved it!
7/23/21, 11:39 PM
I love when redneck is more than bad hygiene and bad education, its believing in a way of life and negating others.

7/23/21, 11:49 PM
@Orc-Br I've found myself struggling with some of the redneck fetish stuff lately, because it tends to lean a bit too much on stereotype and caricature. This one is by no means perfect on that front, but I'm trying to present it as something a bit more than Duck Dynasty, but sexy. I think it's the outlaw and outsider angle that I find most attractive myself. This story is just for fun of course, not too serious, but definitely something I've been thinking about in my stories as of late.
7/23/21, 12:40 PM
*author releases third chapter after all the positive feedback and all the encouragement despite not having any intention to make more than 2 chapters and not originally having any plan for how the story would continue.* *readers go off and write essays criticising his throw away fictional porn for not being woke and pc enough, that this 10 minute stroke and choke is not showing enough ethical responsibility about issues he would've never even though about when he was concentrating on what makes him horny and what he thinks people will like.* "Hey. How come DoubleCream never posts? The authors I always like go away. There's never anything good being posted." My friends, I give you the people on the Internet.

7/23/21, 11:21 PM
@James Heller Great reply. DoubleCream wrote a great third chapter.

7/23/21, 11:44 PM
@JuniorNeedsaButtSpanking Agreed!!