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1/26/22, 12:09 AM
A great start!
1/24/22, 3:12 AM
Another amazingly hot chapter! Thank you for spending time with Jack's transformation instead of rushing to their dad. That being said, I look forward to the changes to the dominating daddy in your next chapter. Great work!

Alex Lu
1/24/22, 11:44 PM
@Hypnoguy67 time For David to become daddy Big Dave the reeking patriarch of this foot funk lover family nursing his nursing boys on his foul stink

1/25/22, 12:20 AM
@Alex Lu That would be so hot!

1/25/22, 12:39 PM
@Hypnoguy67 Thank you! Ha, people are really REALLY eager to read about David xD

1/25/22, 11:21 PM
@FKH19 we want Nates dreams of a rank stinking filthy DOM DADDY to come true and as he gully commits to be feet loving filth crazed DADDY BOY and foot slave to his boyfriend (how seems to know more then he lets on he is not supriesed of his changes and he was very on point with jack and nate in the gym)
1/25/22, 9:29 AM
Thanks for a very enjoyable story. It's almost like attending the training course myself.

1/25/22, 10:25 PM
@boi98229 Thank you! Great to have you on board.
1/25/22, 9:34 PM
I will basically read anything with your name on it, at this point! There's a real tenderness and sweetness to this pair and what they're doing for each other. They really do seem to balance each other out a bit. I'll look forward to the conclusion!
Anonymous
1/25/22, 9:33 PM
Amazing! This series is my favorite.
1/25/22, 3:47 PM
Great job, very hot!

1/25/22, 9:32 PM
@Some Guy thanks!
Jonanator
1/25/22, 1:54 PM
So hot. Can't wait for more. Great job on revising this story.

1/25/22, 9:32 PM
@Jonanator thanks man!
Art
1/25/22, 7:45 PM
Stimle, Still on of your best. I remember reading all of this back in the O'Melissokomos days. A lot of your great stories are still there. Please keep up the great work.!
1/25/22, 3:28 PM
This is a very good idea! Needing to honor all the deals he makes and making himself more likely to agree to a deal could lead to many interesting possibilities. I can't wait for part 3!
1/25/22, 2:20 PM
fuuuuck feels like I caught it just reading this. great work
1/6/22, 5:38 AM
This is my first time writing on this site. English is my secondary language. This is an experimental post since I'm a bit uncertain of what kind of stories people write here. Personally, I like to write stories that are often way off reality because in that way I could focus on writing fantasy. I accept both positive and negative comments.

1/25/22, 2:16 PM
@darkfantasy i think this is a very good first story! lots of stuff you can build on looking forward to a part two!
1/25/22, 2:14 PM
Agree with Evan 100%. This has become my most favorite series ever.
Jonanator
1/25/22, 2:06 PM
Can't wait for more.
Kyle Cicero
1/25/22, 12:09 PM
damn hot

1/25/22, 12:44 PM
@Kyle Cicero thanks man!
Evan
1/25/22, 12:43 PM
another great chapter. You really don't need to apologize. I'm looking this and I'm always just a little disappointed to reach the end of a chapter. Thank you for writing so much and praying so often. Seeing a new chapter always makes me a happy boi. And while I will selfishly always want more, take care of yourself. We don't want you to burn out, and want you to keep loving to write. As always, i look forward to seeing where your have planned to go with this series.
1/23/22, 8:30 PM
You're right, I was expecting a chapter where David would succumb, but it was so nice getting a development chapter instead and exploring the dynamics as they change. Thank you so much for writing this, I can't wait to see what else you come up with. As an aside too, it's so nice reading about an NB Femboy character in a story, since that's what I am, idk just nice to be represented. Thank you <3

1/25/22, 12:38 PM
@HypnoticPrey Thank you, that's what I thought! Would be good to have a 'Jack episode' and focus on developing the characters, instead of just rushing into talking about the next character. And thank you so much. Comments like this are why I work to have good representation in my stories. I'm so happy that you enjoy reading about Tom - I've said it before, but they are just such a joy to write. It *is* nice to be represented, and I will always strive to make sure everyone feels seen. <3
1/23/22, 8:47 AM
Fantastic chapter. I can't help but wonder how Josh will react to his bud's new interests! Jack seemed almost hypnotic in this chapter, but maybe I'm reading too much into it. And a fifth chapter too! Amazing!

1/25/22, 12:34 PM
@Norismo Thank you! No no please keep reading into it, I love hearing different ideas and theories from people :) And yes, I'm thinking the story will continue for a number of parts yet!
1/25/22, 8:28 AM
Verrrry hot!

1/25/22, 9:08 AM
@stimle thanks bud!
Ben
1/25/22, 8:14 AM
Love this series ❤ pushes so many buttons of mine 🔥 🔥 🔥
Evan
1/25/22, 6:18 AM
Another awesome Jack Parker chapter. The plot thickens!
Jul 9, 2020
1/25/22, 5:16 AM
'Deep SEATED fear'...
Evan
1/21/22, 10:30 PM
"and gives him a piece of his mind." That's something to worry about in a hypnosis story. :D Thanks for another great chapter. This took a few turns I hadn't expected but loved it all. The submission, the pack is a nice parallel for their brotherly bond. I'm also admiring your setup. The stars becoming rings of colour, we've seen indicates close to oblivion so seeing that mentioned again here shows us how close Luke is getting to the edge if he wants to fight. And the PING suggests he fell. And a second ping is new, and interesting. For the record, I liked the love that Luke has for Felix and its cause of his apprehension. I also liked the love between the three of them and taking that further. A mix of love and submission and service.

1/22/22, 4:56 AM
@Evan Im glad you seem to be liking my story so far. It's good my rambling at seems to be at least somewhat coherent. I'm going to try and experiment a bit so the sex doesnt feel repetitive, but The escalation is will likely remain in place. As for Luke. I hope I'm presenting his character well enough showing his understanding of love and other people. The poor boi doesn't really know what love is and is just discovering there are different kinds out there.

Evan
1/23/22, 11:25 PM
@hypnoslut I read the next chapter and love what you've done to break up the sex and keeping escalation. Great job. Luke really has had a rough life and needs some help finding his way. Another comment here didn't enjoy his "change" to bottom which I understand. I loved it and also the fact that it's not a change so much as what Luke wants but his internalised homophobia from his parents is stopping him from being fully himself and enjoying it. While a lot of stories "inflict" bottoming on people, this is maybe a little of that from Tommy's point of view, being the alpha, this feels a lot more like trying to heal Tommy and make him a better boi for himself and others.

1/25/22, 4:43 AM
@Evan Appreciate it. I get people not liking my story. Its weird and theres no accounting for sexual preference. That said Im glad some are liking it. I should say. Luke has been brainwashed to accepting a few things. But yea, He was always a bottom. He just needed to be fucked into realizing it
SlutForHypno
1/25/22, 4:40 AM
Ahhhhh! I did not expect to get that Dark I'm so sorry. In all honestly. I don't feel too bad about this chapter being longer since I interlaced Sex Scenes in there so the pacing isnt too back ended. Because I keep adding stuff that makes these chapters longer. From now on if they get too long, the uploads will be every other day. I don't want to get burned out before I feel done with this series. In case anybody is wondering, This specific story doesn't have too much longer to go. I have about 13 or 14 chapters in all planned and unless I get an insane idea (or put a chapter I have planned for a complimentary story inbetween some of the last ones.). Speaking of Side series. I do have some ideas for a complimentary side story in mind that should work and will focus on the rest of the cast. That said The uploading will probably gradually slow down after that. This takes alot of time to write these chapters, but it has made me realize how much I like writing and want to see what I can do. that said, Ill say this at the end as well, but I made this a community piece for a reason. I did not make this dumpster fire of a series to be some IP in hopes of publication lol. If you guys wanna take the premise and run wild go for it. Next Chapter: Luke and Spencer make up and decide to become partners in crime.
Evan
1/25/22, 2:38 AM
Cool bit of story. I enjoyed this. The concept is fun to make guys unable to resistt becoming gooners.
Evan
1/25/22, 2:36 AM
These demon contracts will really change the game. They've proven they can't cooperate and as time goes on they become more depraved rather than less. If they succeed, they will get a fragment of demonic power. Future challenges will be harder or easier with being able to dominate, drug brothers, warp reality, affect desire, and transform them at will, depending on the character. Fun and chaos.
Rubber_Lover14
1/25/22, 1:53 AM
This is one of the hottest stories ive ever read. Not gonna lie, i wish there was a part two. i can imagine stevie becoming hsi friends little slave. but since it seems this is one of your older works from the comments ive read, i guess that will remain a dream 😔 anyways, fantastic story!
1/25/22, 1:00 AM
Another exciting episode. Loving where you're going with this.
Anonymous
1/25/22, 12:30 AM
I'd also love to see more!
1/24/22, 11:58 PM
As the original authour of the first Donnie series and the commissioner of this rewrite, I can't say how much i love the work you've done. To those of you reading this story, be ready because Jack has exceeded my wildest hopes when i first commissioned him to write this story ;-)