Recent Comments

3/8/22, 9:20 PM
Fantstic, awesome, mindblowing! This is one of the best I've ever read. I can't get enough of them. Thank you for sharing yours.
3/8/22, 6:36 PM
my pleasure, I'm glad you liked it
3/8/22, 4:44 PM
This chapter was pretty hot! Loved the scenes where "Jack is not home", mindless and robotic <3
Feb 27, 2022
3/8/22, 4:11 PM
Nice story! Hope there more to come!
3/8/22, 3:26 PM
i live to serve the Virus.
3/8/22, 3:15 PM
more chapters please.
8/4/21, 12:07 PM
humilation will break everytime

3/8/22, 2:42 PM
We all desire to be humiliated! @Cock lover
3/8/22, 2:31 PM
Always love coming back to this. So hot.
3/8/22, 12:49 PM
Wow! This story is incredibly erotic! Can't wait to read the other chapters!
3/8/22, 11:56 AM
Fantastic story, best I have read in a very long time. All my favorite themes rolled into one. Please consider writing more like this Blufman1. Many thanks! Will
3/5/22, 10:34 PM
oooooooh yes! I love Azure the Skunk, can't wait to see where it goes

3/6/22, 2:40 AM
@ForgottenCradle Thank you very much, but I'm afraid this is a oneshot. I just wanted to write something to go with this commission I got of Azure and me https://twitter.com/RealRainyatsu/status/1499807907726036997/photo/1

Ben
3/8/22, 10:01 AM
@Daddy Hyperion Hmmm....are you sure it's a one shot story? I shot three times ;) hehe...just a joke. Hot story!
3/7/22, 10:10 PM
This story has been hitting me so hard in my gender fluidity and I'm so emotional about it and all the characters. I want Brett to decide he loves being a breeder and i want him to be with liam and i want them to escape to Liam's home country and gender swap at will but everything you write is perfect so even if that's not what happens I'm sure I'll love it

3/7/22, 10:13 PM
also i really hope he gets fucked by

3/7/22, 10:14 PM
by Jonas*

3/8/22, 9:42 AM
@Tyrol Glad you are enjoying the story in the way you are. I have to say I loved writing these characters. Thanks for taking the time to feedback.
3/7/22, 11:03 PM
Your writing is absolutely fantastic man. Where have you been? I will likely read just about anything you write at this point. There is suspense, erotica, love, sex, the whole lot! Not sure how you're cranking in these long chapters but please keep going! I can't wait to read more!

3/8/22, 9:19 AM
@randy7869 Hi Randy glad you are enjoying the story. As for cranking out the long chapters. The story is written and has been for a few weeks. Each week my collab partner (LloydIrving) Helps me edit one section and then I publish it. So far that cadence is working. We may slip at some point but fingers crossed.
Aug 13, 2021
Anonymous
3/8/22, 7:20 AM
if you write another chapter i'd love to see a hot older stud (like a cop/marine/etc) made into a slutty pussy bitch. made to wear slutty panties, cock-cage, pussy plug, etc. maybe some sph (small penis humiliation) too
3/4/22, 8:16 PM
I loved reading this. It felt natural to read... I was almost tempted to pull out my own credit card when the story asked for it. ;)

3/7/22, 11:08 PM
@must obey muscle Everybody monetizes now! It annoys the hell out of me. Please make sure to buy my novel on [Amazon](https://www.amazon.com/dp/B09RVDXR7M/ref=tmm_pap_swatch_0?_encoding=UTF8&qid=1643810153&sr=1-2).

3/8/22, 6:12 AM
@absman420 Yes Austin... I obey ;)
3/8/22, 5:05 AM
Loving it so far, can't wait to see what Brody and his dad get
3/8/22, 4:11 AM
issue as mentioned above yeah but damn man. this story is such q cool and hot idea.cant wait for the next update!
3/3/22, 1:57 PM
Absolutely awesome story. I really loved the more "real world" and autobiographical style you used here as well as the sense of levity through. It was a nice change to read a story where the person getting hypnotised was a willing participant and to have a happy ending was pleaseantly refreshing. Here's hoping you do decide to add that extra scene at the end and that you might write more stories in this style in the future.

3/7/22, 11:06 PM
> @phillipsm as well as the sense of levity through > Humor is a hard element in erotica. Laugh out loud moments tend to break the mood, so a lot of times I satisfy myself with the "knowing nod" kind of joke. Glad you felt I succeeded.
3/7/22, 6:01 PM
Excellent installment and absolutely love Robin working his ass for all those in his mind who are admiring it!!
3/7/22, 5:57 PM
Love it!! The prefect takedown for the perfect hero. Looking forward to all 5 parts!! Especially ove how Robin's mind is slowly coming around/controlled to what his body obviously wants!!
3/7/22, 11:02 AM
so so hot🔥

3/7/22, 5:39 PM
Hell yeah! Glad you enjoyed. I might make a couple more one-shots like this in the future, mostly on the side of sadism/roughness but with a heavy dash of romance. @slut
3/7/22, 11:33 AM
so hot. next time some post orgasm torture pls.🥵

3/7/22, 5:38 PM
I'll have to read up on that! I know basically what to do but have to learn how to write it well, heh. Could be fun to write a one-shot of that ilk, though. (By the way, if you're on a bit of a spree of my stories, check out [Pheromones and the Boys Who Don't Want Them](https://www.gaykinkystories.com/story/show/10003599)! It doesn't have my name on it for now, so you can't see it on my story list, and don't tell anybody I sent you, but after P&FB you might be into this one too.) I'm really glad you enjoyed! This was one of my favourite one-shots to write. @slut
3/7/22, 12:20 AM
I, too, would have liked for this to be stretched out a bit. I responded *very* strongly (sproiiiiing!) to the descriptions of the music's effects, and of the lure of, and satiation of, Elliot's deep need for fatherly love and approval (oh God can I relate). But the actual submission happened too fast for my taste. When Mr. Masters said “That’s it, kid. Give me a little resistance. Make me work for it.”, I expected that to mean more than just the spotting! I also like to see a little more self-awareness of the changes taking place, but I realize that doesn't fit a Himbo theme. Speaking of, why in the world does Elliot think himbos are a myth? I guess he defines the word in the hypno kink context, but most people wouldn't - and there are plenty of real life himbos around, in my gym anyway! I'm usually ***all about*** muscle growth through hard work in a gym, and guys conditioned to be *all in* about it, but in this case it seemed to be a pretty pointless addition. I'm guessing it's more of a holdover from whichever other stories people are referring to in the comments. 😋 And I'm looking forward to reading them, when I find out who wrote this! If I haven't already read them. I know I'm writing a lot more critical things than positive, but I loved this story. Ultimately I think it just suffered from having to be self-contained and short to fit into the challenge framework.

3/7/22, 5:29 PM
@meatheadosis Thanks for the feedback. I agree that the submission could have been longer, but the easy, unaware shift in his thinking didn't match up well with active resistance. I was thinking about making a second chapter, but that's against contest rules, and Elliot's submission seemed like a solid enough ending point. The real issue is that it isn't a standalone story. The line about building muscles and brains is to indicate that Elliot isn't just a plaything, Mr Masters wants to build on what is already there.
3/6/22, 5:44 PM
This is amazingly hot! My favorite part of this series is that Dick doesn't really *do* anything wrong per se. He let the girl choose him lol. It's just pettiness and I'm onboard. I love it! Look forward to the next part.

Kyle Cicero
3/7/22, 1:09 PM
There's a lot to be said for pettiness isn't there. :-)@Some Guy
3/6/22, 9:38 PM
love this, huge fan. you can choose to keep this as chapters of a single story on this site, it makes reading the chapters easier as they are published

Kyle Cicero
3/7/22, 1:09 PM
I'm glad you're enjoying my stories. I am aware of that option but chose not to do it.@eastbay
Anonymous
3/7/22, 10:00 AM
I liked this a lot! Looking forward to more!
Anonymous
3/7/22, 7:16 AM
hot. love it when a cocky jock has a tiny dick. I hope you write more chapters
3/7/22, 12:41 AM
Great start. Looking forward to more.
3/6/22, 9:13 PM
Loving it, but man this emotional roller coaster isn't good for my heart.

3/6/22, 9:17 PM
@Kods Oh dear it only gets worse before it gets better. Brace yourself.
3/6/22, 8:51 PM
So who raises Thomas and Brett's baby?

3/6/22, 9:14 PM
@Cutlerfan Well the question is answered in later chapters and in some detail. Most children of unpaired breeders are auctioned off. This will not be the case for Thomas and Brett's child.