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5/9/22, 8:54 AM
oh NICE,I've been waiting for this! the plot thiccens...
Anteros-antaeus
5/9/22, 8:45 AM
What a perfectly barded tale. I’m left wondering as to the deeper meanings of the contexts and symbolism. I will keep it to mind and think more on it. I have something for you. Well deserved. 🏵 Anteros-sephiii. Ling guam. In terre pret at io nes flux idus.. Beth rosa tannis in invernus. Ling Guam est mutt abilis per est.
Mar 13, 2021
5/9/22, 5:52 AM
Yeah this is probably my favorite story on the site. I keep coming back to it again and again. I love how Steven keeps confirming that this is Diego’s permanent new reality.
Anonymous
5/9/22, 4:33 AM
So nice to see an update for this story! Can't wait to see what happens next.
5/9/22, 3:38 AM
Sexy series so far. Love the siblims and the planning. Im happy he doesnt want to ruin lives but only have fun and such. I do hope he tops the dudes he controls and such!
SlutForHypno
5/8/22, 3:30 PM
Damn, Good chapter...Finally glad to see Tim become the slut he was meant to be. Now they can both pleasure Donnie together

5/9/22, 3:31 AM
@SlutForHypno lol glad you liked it
Anonymous
5/9/22, 3:14 AM
Loving it!!!!!
5/9/22, 1:01 AM
this story is really well written and you definitely set up a nice slow build plot! I know it hasn't updated in awhile, but I really wanted to comment your writing
slavethruhypno@yahoo.com
5/9/22, 12:45 AM
Glad this is not carefree puppy play, but a human taking on canine behavior characteristics. The way a human dog should be! Hot story!
5/9/22, 12:39 AM
So Good! Great development and nice surprises. The avatars falling in love just like that was so sweet and perfect. And the plot then thickens and I can't wait for the next chapter.
5/9/22, 12:34 AM
A great ending loved it
5/9/22, 12:22 AM
Love that they are transformed to hipsters
5/8/22, 10:29 PM
I'm excited for this new series! 😃 Lots of good looking characters whose lives will be eventually affected by Norman's discovery. Can't wait to see how this unravels.

5/8/22, 11:47 PM
@Piko I'll try to get ahead on this one. I have a lot already written but it's just rough drafts. I'm already working on Chapter 2.
Clinton J.
5/8/22, 10:28 PM
The control is the best thing. I'm excited to see how much control he has over these men.

5/8/22, 11:46 PM
@Clinton J. The control will evolve over the course of the series. Thank you for your comment.
5/8/22, 11:12 PM
You may never see this, but this remains my single favorite story on this site, and I still hope every single time I log on that there will somehow, miraculously, be another chapter.
rwriter51
5/8/22, 10:53 PM
Blackmailing a Parker? This could end up very badly for Joe the RA. Another excellent chapter. I always look forward to the adventures Sammy and his brothers get up to.
5/8/22, 8:33 PM
The extra mile includes being blond, waxed smooth, and never being involved with women again. Might even mean developing some feminine traits if his own.
slavethruhypno@yahoo.com
5/8/22, 8:14 PM
Wow! Great story! Always good when a male is reduced to his most base animal nature, needing to do nothing other than obey, make himself an object men's most carnal lust and obsess on draining male cock! No benefit in protesting and none in fighting what he needs and will eventually want to become. Hot! Wanked throughout the whole thing!
5/8/22, 8:06 PM
This story is still amazing. You are such an great writer!! Even inspiring me to work on writing and alternate “Jafar wins story”, so thank you! Looking forward to seeing your next awesome piece 👍👍
5/8/22, 7:29 AM
I love the way you write, I can see it all like I was watching Stanley Kubrick's 2001: A Space Odyssey. Congratulations, this is one of the most intriguing stories I've ever read and I can't wait to see more.

5/8/22, 6:37 PM
@Papa Werebear Thanks man! I really appreciate your feedback!
5/8/22, 6:12 PM
Jack, you have done it again. That Sammy is TOPS literally. John is discovered. Will his secret get out? Will he be used by others? Only Jack Parker knows!!! I know he will share with his loyal fans when he is ready.
5/8/22, 8:19 AM
Really fun playful story. Even though I loved the customer service report format for this, I did think it made it hard for the story to generate much erotic heat. But not every story has to aim directly for the groin--some can aim for the brain and funnybone instead!

5/8/22, 5:30 PM
@Hypnothrill Thanks for reading!
5/8/22, 4:14 PM
Your stories have been favorites of mine for a long time. There are only a handful of authors writing longer multi-chapter stories in this genre. Whether this one ends up being 2-3 chapters or 10, excited to see where you go next.

5/8/22, 5:10 PM
@RJ1001 Thanks for your comment. There is a lot of WIP (work in progress) all around in my output, but I'm trying to at least write multi-chapter stories now where it is clear to me how and when they will end to do a satisfying story arc. So I'll try to finish a few of these story arcs soon.
Anonymous
5/8/22, 1:07 PM
Good first chapter. I want to see how the field affects all of the men in Norman’s life!

5/8/22, 5:08 PM
Thanks for your comment, you can be sure all those men will be affected and more.
5/8/22, 6:43 AM
Hot but a bit rushed in the end, was hoping for a bit slower transformation. But I really enjoyed the mpreg in the end, too.

5/8/22, 4:35 PM
@Essex Thank you for the response! I will admit that when I get close to an ending I get a bit excited.
5/8/22, 3:17 PM
A part of me REALLY wanted Sam AND his two muscle tower friends to get fucked stupid by Mr.Taylor lol
5/2/22, 5:12 AM
Hmmm I need more

David
5/8/22, 2:44 PM
@Princeazrael me too
Wren
5/8/22, 10:02 AM
I love this series so much! Poor Tommy, he's been sooo hot so I hope he does better next time (if there is a next time!)

5/8/22, 2:12 PM
@Wren We ain't done with Tommy :)
5/8/22, 9:19 AM
I liked it, especially once the machine started affecting the Perkins men. A lot of the set-up got me thinking about how I've been reading your stories for about 25 years now, and they so often feature the same basic central character, a lonely closeted man. (Norman reminds me a lot of Gary from "Domination," for instance). I feel like I used to identify and sympathize with that character a lot more than I do now. But I don't want to be too harsh on Norman, because I can tell he's your avatar in the story; in fact, there were a couple of places where you slipped into the 1st person!

5/8/22, 1:06 PM
@Hypnothrill Thanks for your comment. Your theory about the avatar is interesting but it is not the case. Even when I started writing these stories, I was already out and far from lonely. The places where I slipped into the 1st person were due to the source material being from 10 different stories - some of them were in first person, and I missed a few spots. I think the reason for the similarity for the main characters comes from my liking to explore a sort of variant of coming of age story, with the character coming of age sexually late in the game from the events of the mind control power. It might be dated a bit, because unlike what young activists are trying to convince everyone of, rampant, really hateful homophobia is now very rare, and having a complex gender or orientation is now a sort of fashion. Still, I enjoy the blandness of those characters, the fact that they have a lot to gain from the power in their character arc, and the twist on the hero's journey. They're still all different, you'll see Norman has much more of a mean streak than Gary, but your comment got me thinking about an interesting area for exploration in future stories.
Anonymous
5/8/22, 12:50 PM
Please write another chapter! It’s been too long and we need some resolution for the cliffhanger.