Recent Comments

2/21/24, 1:32 PM
This story got me hard and kept me going, although it felt a little surreal/ dreamy in the middle. I wish I knew a little more about Kyle's connection to the Jockroom (if any) and then, why the narrator was transformed?
2/19/24, 12:51 AM
I did think this was very fun. You might want to get your stuff proof read though because there were a few goofs, "I walk around him, a powerful cock emerges above the buttocks and the back is also flawless and beautiful." But then you go on to detail that he has his impressively large dick right in the front where you'd expect it to be.

2/21/24, 11:36 AM
@[Nocturne13](/user/show/263497) Hello Nocturne, i'm sorry, but my Proof reader ist Not available at the Moment, so the next revise will be better. I'm sorry.
R P
2/21/24, 5:05 AM
Fuck, this is somehow even hotter than the previous chapters. I’m torn between hoping Alan comes out on top, and hoping James gets what he’s been craving…
R P
2/21/24, 4:54 AM
Super hot setup! Can’t wait to to see Eric taken down 😈
2/21/24, 1:19 AM
Very hot! Very sexy. (I do think they should still go to classes and stuff. Why recruit college students if you remove the college part. Get them educated and then get them jobs and get the benefits of them serving.) Anyway the app and sexy tomes are great. Love the rimming!
2/20/24, 11:13 PM
teen wolf
2/20/24, 10:55 PM
Great story! Really hit all my buttons!
Anonymous
2/20/24, 12:02 PM
so, did you know there was a 1978 movie "The Norseman" and it was vikings? and Lee Majors, The Six Million Dollar Man, was in it hairy with a pencil mustache? or was this a coincidence? ;)

2/20/24, 8:29 PM
@Anonymous I didn't know, but somewhere in the back of my mind someone must have been saying, “fantasize, Marge, fantasize about Lee Majors…”
Mind bender
2/20/24, 1:09 PM
HAHA ensnared by his own lamp, I love that. Randy and Tim's part was 🔥🔥🔥

2/20/24, 8:11 PM
@Mind bender The original author of this story seemed to have a great knack for comical twists. If only he had came up with a better ending…
Anonymous
2/20/24, 6:11 PM
Spectacular
2/20/24, 5:05 PM
Absolutely mind blowing. The series keeps getting better. Good job!
2/20/24, 4:20 PM
This is getting really good. Fuck yeah.
2/20/24, 6:28 AM
So glad to see the story finally takiing a turn and developing in the heroes succeeding again. Finally, its building up momentum again in a positive way and making things complex without being redundant. Excited to see further development and the strength and experience of the heroes continue to gain them some solid wins. Theyre much needed and appreciated by this reader.

2/20/24, 3:13 PM
@[musclejunky](/user/show/10019676) :sweat_smile: You _might_ want to avert your eyes from the next mini-chapter,... ah ha haha,.. (You'll see what I mean when it drops.) Don't worry, things are going to move forwards from here as we work towards a proper showdown!
Frank
2/19/24, 12:57 AM
WOW… your command of the appropriate words without ever turning to cliches is amazing! The way you build the story and take us slowly, luxuriously, into the moment and the feelings, is fucking ART! I can and will read you over and over again because it’s so good! I’ve only read a couple of great writers here that can blend both the concept and the mood and the right amount of reality and eroticism, you are at the TOP of your game! I hope you feel it and keep writing… I’m hooked!

2/20/24, 2:11 PM
@Frank Thanks Chief. Glad to hear my world has rocked yours. There's more to come....much more. -JT
Subby Tubby
2/3/24, 3:15 AM
Mere joy in written form giving visual imagery! Cannot wait for the Alpha to return from His weekend away. To have His best buddy over for a Guy's Night watching a game being served by the faggot nude with a clit cage and apron on. After several beers becoming the urinal which introduces the first servitude to the buddy. Afterall, what Alpha doesn't want to show His power by presenting a display of it... The final stage - the faggot moving in as the final chapter into its "room" in the corner of the garage and 24/7 availability with total servitude of ownership even a glory hole for His buddies to drop over day or night! My mind just goes like this! So vivid is your imagination as a writer so inspiring...

2/20/24, 2:10 PM
@Subby Tubby Glad you enjoyed it. More on the way.
2/20/24, 11:12 AM
Great story supernatural next
2/20/24, 7:23 AM
Hell yeah! This is a great freaking setup with Eric! 😈
2/20/24, 7:13 AM
B... the challenge must be met
2/18/24, 1:25 PM
B. We make him addicted instead to wearing the suit and ruining his orgasms

2/20/24, 7:13 AM
@[Allan Weiss](/user/show/472888) This... make addicted so that he cums back every night for the challenge
HungKinkBot
2/7/24, 6:52 PM
I want him to resist temptation - B - see what trouble he gets into - for a while. Maybe he eventually closes it. Maybe eventually the owner closes it. Maybe he gets taken out of it by another gear head who wants to swap gear at a party. Maybe the zipper refuses to close because he's not the right occupant. Maybe before he's driven mad, maybe after. All sorts of ways of playing this out for a bit...

2/20/24, 7:01 AM
@HungKinkBot Ooooo... i am loving the possibilities
2/20/24, 6:59 AM
The rubber faggot must close the zipper... he must complete the encasement and becum...
2/20/24, 6:44 AM
Sorry, it took me a while. Now both variants are online. I hope you'll enjoy each way
2/20/24, 4:43 AM
Wow. This series is unbelievably hot. Every chapter is amazing. You are creating a classic!
moovoyager
2/20/24, 4:37 AM
More of this, please!! This is so unbelievably hot. I can’t stop reading it.
2/20/24, 4:33 AM
Things get more interesting. Loving it
2/20/24, 3:40 AM
Wonderful story. It's in my favorites list now.
Mind bender
2/20/24, 3:06 AM
Randy scene was hotttttt. I like the shift in his taste and his personality as he succumbs to the wishes effects. Love it ❤️
2/20/24, 2:58 AM
This is just too good.