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9/3/22, 10:42 AM
Wow! That's hot! Love all the kinky stuffs John tried with Sam. Looking forward to Chapter 2 with more kinky stuffs for Sam. Public exhibitionism, sexy clothes, cum control, trigger word for him to be extra horny and leak precum etc.
Iriefal
9/3/22, 10:14 AM
Haha😂😂😂
Anonymous
9/3/22, 9:30 AM
I actually really enjoyed how he turned into a bully :)
9/3/22, 8:55 AM
This has become my favorite chapter so far! Freddy's prostate experience to his bluff with Uri and then the completion of that wish in the end - wow! The way you described Freddy's point of view in the final scene felt hot and realistic and a bit romantic too with the kissing and light domination and manhandling he was giving Uri.
9/3/22, 6:26 AM
Chapter 1 has only been posted and I'm already craving part 2 - hot stuff :drooling_face: :smiling_imp: :fire:
zan
9/2/22, 10:07 PM
great chapter! i like the world you've built and the choices our characters are making so far. looking forward to chapter 2.

9/3/22, 5:57 AM
Couldn’t agree more @zan
9/3/22, 5:38 AM
Woah so sexy. Don’t keep us waiting too long for more chapters. Scalding hot.
9/3/22, 5:20 AM
What an unexpected chapter. You keep coming up with amazing new and different ways to show Tanners corrupting influence. I love it. When I first read the summary I expected that Tanner would influence the debate itself making the debate teams discuss unsuitable subjects like sex, masturbation, exhibitionisme, male body appreciation, Farther-son relations and so on. With Tanners help the debate teams could have reached some interesting conclusions that would have had the assembly agree on quite disturbing behaviours. So I was surprised to see the story pick up at the end of the debate. But the ritual was a fun addition. I am a little bit sad that it was just forgotten. I am generally not a big fan of the "When I snap my fingers you will forget everything that has happened". I think I would have been much hotter if everyone in the room would just consider this the normal way to end a debate. Or at least that the mantras the teacher repeated will stick with him and form his personality. He will think of himself as the master of debate and exposure without remembering the actual ritual. But on the other hand I do love the part between Jiang and Aidan at the end, where the other guy just completely accepts that of course they are gonna forget as soon as the leave the room and that Jiang is the weird one for not understanding that. It is so deliciously absurd. Please keep up the good work. Every week that goes by without a new chapter is agony.
9/2/22, 8:18 PM
Love it. Can wait to see what Eli’s psychological punishment is! I love that they are in Aware Mode. If I were Vince, I would make them describe everything they’re thinking and feeling about how humiliated and digested they get! All the while being respectful of course!

9/3/22, 5:19 AM
@Coq au Vin, I’m glad you liked it! No spoilers, but I will say that great minds think alike ;). Stay tuned for Eli’s punishment!
Anonymous
9/1/22, 11:34 PM
I'm so glad you're continuing this series. This story is so hot and the way you write the hypnosis part is always so good.

Angell Kitty
9/3/22, 5:01 AM
Thank you very much. I take great care of the hypnosis part and try to make it the best. It's the reason why it takes me so long to publish these stories, besides the language is another obstacle, but I thank you for your support and I will continue. :grin:
9/2/22, 4:14 PM
I am so intrigued what will happen in the next chapter! This series is such a wild ride

9/3/22, 4:57 AM
@Norismo, I’m glad your enjoying it so far :heart: thanks so much!
9/2/22, 12:27 PM
Great chapter. Well written and with such imagination in the torture.

9/3/22, 4:55 AM
@Nephilim, thank you! I had a lot of fun writing it so I’m glad it came out so well.
9/3/22, 4:51 AM
Love it! Please continue ^ ^
9/3/22, 3:48 AM
So very hot. Yet such a tease. Waiting impatiently for more!
9/3/22, 3:37 AM
This was interesting and sexy. I look forward to seeing what happens next. I like our the controller is out pov. I do hope he remains dominant and I hope he is a top too, we need more stories like that! Good start! Sexy setup.
Dickslave
9/3/22, 2:13 AM
Nooooo. You were one of my favorite authors. I’m sad to see you go
Anonymous
8/24/22, 6:49 PM
Really excited for another part

8/29/22, 11:55 PM
thanks! people keep stealing my shit so i'm just not gonna write for the internet anymore. sorry to disappoint. but in the third part Riley would have shown up dressed up as his femboy self, all schoolgirl'ed up! and, of course, hot sex and blowjobs.

8/30/22, 12:01 AM
It's a shame too i was working to the most incredible mindfuck ending for this story

Wakeup
9/2/22, 4:55 PM
@Daisy I. B. de Melcker People stole your story? That really sucks. Shame we won’t see the third part, sounds like it would of been a good one!

9/3/22, 1:11 AM
Awww no 😭 @Daisy I. B. de Melcker
Anonymous
9/3/22, 12:55 AM
You know, I think you should try to limit Snooze more of a mild trance than an instant hypnosis state. The Changr app already does so much and Snooze being like that rn will make the app a bit less powerful than it ought to be.
Jake
9/3/22, 12:04 AM
Love this so far! I really like how John is starting off slow with Sam and making sam comfortable. I really love when the subject isnt aware of the changes, and the way you did it is so hot
9/2/22, 11:55 PM
Excellent! This boy will be fun to see transformed and trained for sure! Also love the hint at what is to come with mention of 2026 being in a cock cage. Sounds like the easy pleasure may not last forever for the new boys
9/2/22, 11:52 PM
Fantastic start
Iriefal
9/2/22, 11:21 PM
Nice idea. I am loving it, just please describe more how main character looks like (Personally I like smaller dominant, so if you can, pls make him small cute nerd with dominant bone in his body. Ps, dominant not top, you can be bottom but still dominant, but that is just a small thing, I myself am switch in both)
9/2/22, 10:36 PM
Goddamn I am loving this story... I've shot twice every chapter so far!!!!
9/2/22, 10:17 PM
Great job, really liking the start. Looking forward to part 2.
EJG
9/2/22, 9:43 PM
Damned,this was hot stuff. Tanner is so perverted and bad,he's so good. Nothing hotter than dark,''bad'' and perverted beating goodie goodie wholesome hero,every little once in a while
9/2/22, 7:17 PM
Subscribed to this story, got the email of a new chapter, dropped everything to read it, hard as a rock and cumming in seconds. This is one of my favorite stories here. Kudos!!!! Can’t wait for more!!!

9/2/22, 9:23 PM
@EdIam thanks, man :) It’s nice to have fans of this twisted little tale.
Martin
9/2/22, 9:05 PM
That's really fun and hot to read! I really look forward to read more chapters! One technical request though: If something is wrong with a submissed story, please don't resubmit, but EDIT the already uploaded story! There is this huge blue Edit button on the top you can use to change all aspects of your stories.
9/2/22, 8:57 PM
Great chapter--I'm so glad to see you continuing this! The one thing I'd love to see more of is corruption of the men who get changed by the ooze. I think it would have been cool to see more of Flint going from being a straight arrow cop to becoming more wicked (like wanting to convert his partner or Ren).
9/2/22, 8:55 PM
This was so frakking hot! I loved the scene with Harry and Gordy! Well done!
9/2/22, 8:40 PM
Your English is great. I wanted to tell you before I got further & will write comments on the story when I finish.