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3/10/23, 10:08 AM
I welcome all new additions to this story series. It is one of my all time favourites. Happy to see it's revival.
Anonymous
3/10/23, 9:53 AM
I'm...honestly surprised we got a Master Myriad POV. I mean, on the one hand, he's an absolutely *enthralling* character and I've been dying to get into his head since a couple of chapters ago. On the other hand, I feel like it's almost an unwritten rule of drone fiction that Master is unimpeachable, unattainable, incomprehensible -- more than a mere man; a living god. I think you've done a beautiful job of giving him just a few humanizing qualities without losing that deliciously dark edge that makes everyone tremble with, uh...let's say fear. And speaking of fear, I find it interesting that the League's very fear that Myriad is some kind of totally inhuman monster not only serves as justification for their own misdeeds, but also distracts them from what really makes him dangerous -- namely, his subtler schemes such as his infiltration of city hall. An infiltration helped, no doubt, by Myriad's abilities, but one that could conceivably have been carried out by anyone with enough patience, cunning, and natural charisma. It all dovetails so wonderfully with other themes and questions posed by the story thus far. But, I'm sure some of that is just a happy coincidence, right? Nobody could write such fiendishly clever erotica that makes you contemplate the nature of good and evil while you wank! You'd have to be some kind of diabolical mastermind...
3/10/23, 9:42 AM
I really like the premise. Great Story as usual.
3/10/23, 9:16 AM
Amazing job! Well written and a great story. Even stuff I’m not into I enjoyed reading. good show.
3/10/23, 9:11 AM
I gotta go with 1 here. Of the encounters he's had, demons are by far the best of the best. And there's always the chance if he hangs around too long, other incubi will come across them.
3/10/23, 8:34 AM
Oooo I like where this is going. Can’t wait to see more! Hopefully Ryan’s dad gets a piece of that sweet ass soon.
3/10/23, 8:07 AM
Just incredible. Such an imaginative story! So well written! Perfectly paced! So hot! Great characters! I especially loved Arjay. He’s very different from other characters I’ve read about here. That really turned me on! I’d love to read more about his adventures before and after this story. Every chapter was a winner and got me rock hard. I came four times while reading this story. (I read a chapter or two a night.) And it all adds up to something very well crafted, sexy and fun! You are a very talented writer.
Sebastián Apollo
3/10/23, 6:55 AM
I have to concur with the other commenters, this was _really_ good! Not only in terms of representation (which was really great to see), but just in the writing and characterization of Brook and Carter and their banter. Brilliant work, great job!
3/10/23, 6:51 AM
Simply an amazing first chapter. Can’t wait for more!
3/10/23, 5:51 AM
I am SO GLAD to see that Jamie's rent situation has been handled. there were literally no other pressing issues other than that, and now it's handled, so I'm sure things will be fine from here on out! jokes aside, this was a great chapter! I think doing asmaler interlude bits here was a great choice for the pacing
3/10/23, 5:46 AM
I hope you are going to continue this story because it’s very hot!!!
3/10/23, 2:47 AM
Another great chapter, Neon Demon. It's not quite as horny as the Prologue or Chapter 3, but it has its moments. The balance of exposition to continued mystery is exquisite. Plots and counterplots! Oh my! I love the way you confirmed the "heroes'" villainy, out of their own mouths. And told us what Cerberus probably was, without quite telling us for sure. That gets me really rooting for Master. You also confirmed my suspicion that the phone chip was a setup for politicians Master wanted to take down. Dylan's conversion scene was superb, and wonderfully ambiguous. If left completely to his own will, would he still have accepted the offer? And I'm loving the hints that DS-005/Dusk is carrying a bit of a torch for his Boom Boy. Now that I've read though it, I'm going to read it again, and really savor it. Because another thing about really good writing is that it rewards your rereading it with details and insights you missed on the first read.

3/10/23, 3:12 AM
@[copsboy64](/user/show/910425) hey if you get in touch with Neon Demon, we've actually been talking stuff so if you want to set up that discord, well, lets just say that the lore is FAR more fleshed out than what the stories seem someone's been working HARD in worldbuilding

3/10/23, 4:07 AM
@[temporaryhotsaucetofu](/user/show/10034005) OK. How do I do that?

3/10/23, 4:10 AM
@[copsboy64](/user/show/910425) im not sure if im allowed to link stuff directly on GSS, but if you click on his profile, it should pop up his twitter. his twitter bio has a link and has his Discord contacts, highly reccomend talking to him he said that he really liked us 2 theorizing o_O and yeahs!

3/10/23, 5:32 AM
@[temporaryhotsaucetofu](/user/show/10034005) Cool. I'll give in a shot. I'd love chatting directly with our super creative author.
3/10/23, 5:04 AM
He swallows that load and accepts his place!!
3/10/23, 4:38 AM
Curious how it will end. Will max get turned back? Will he still want a master?
3/10/23, 3:21 AM
for one, the Superpower/magic system is incredibly and intricately thorough and thought out. there's like drawbacks for abusing or even using power, something that I don't see often being discussed, and that could be really interesting down the line. the checks and balances used makes the Superpowers incredibly "realistic" in a way that animates it and makes it so ground in reality
3/9/23, 6:36 PM
So happy you brought this amazing story to this site!! Excited to see more of your work too. 🥰

benedick543
3/10/23, 3:54 AM
@[EdIam](/user/show/17145) Thanks for introducing me to this platform! I'm working on other stories in the series as well!
3/10/23, 3:51 AM
This is one of the best stories I’ve ever read here! I have to say it’s AMAZING to see representation from a group that almost never shows up on the site, and you manage to make that representation part of the story. Add the incredible descriptions, perfect pace of the masturbation scene, and the genuine love between the two guys, and you have a fantastic tale. Well done! :D
3/10/23, 2:24 AM
Somehow the fact that these guys are dirt poor and living in a garage just feels perfect. you really nailed the setting here. And of course the sex is just dynamite.
3/10/23, 1:10 AM
FIRST ALSO HELLO FELLOW INSOMNIACS :wink:
3/10/23, 1:00 AM
Excellent story, always love hair growth, especially facial hair. The pic was perfect and made him even hotter. Definitely needs to be continued. I would also suggest trying more length and a more detailed transformation.
3/10/23, 1:00 AM
Would it be possible to get another, say, thousand chapters of this? It's really fucking great
3/9/23, 11:11 PM
You've written a lot of great stories over the years, but this is one of my favorites!
Mar 9, 2023
3/9/23, 10:54 PM
i loved all the references to smelling the man-smell. I was taking huge breaths and trying to imagine. THANK YOU for your colorful writing style. I loved this story.
3/9/23, 10:15 PM
I think this is my most favorite chapter :grin:
Nov 30, 2021
3/9/23, 9:58 PM
it was a good story MORE please
3/9/23, 7:25 PM
Well, that was just... _fun_.
Aug 21, 2021
SuperHero_Guy
3/9/23, 7:06 PM
This super Irish ABDL Kinkster wants a Dad just like that, sculpt me like Marc and regress me into the baby I deserve to be. Loved the story, and fantasize this becoming me. No choices No decisions No responsibilities EVER
3/9/23, 7:02 PM
That was beautiful and hot and amazing all at once. Whew!
3/9/23, 6:10 PM
I definitely caught the Altered Carbon influence, and well done on that (I loved watching the series); I personally am not huge on chastity, so the end threw me a bit, but every moment up until then was incredibly hot to me, and I'm sure that kink works on tons of folks, so I certainly don't dock you for it. Very, very well-written.
SocalDracon6
3/9/23, 3:46 PM
Read it 10 years ago and read it again this week (It took me a week to get through it because I came so many times in between) Still one of the hottest fuc*** stories Ive enjoyed. Thanks

3/9/23, 6:09 PM
@SocalDracon6 I'm happy to hear that. For me, this story isn't so much "strokeable" as it is "thought fodder for later stroking" -- I always found this chapter to be more thought-provoking than out and out horny. Glad it had that effect on you -- even after all this time.