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Mar 5, 2017
3/17/24, 6:17 AM
great story. Really hot progression.
3/17/24, 5:19 AM
When are we going to get "The New Game: Level 4"? I want to find out what happens to Haley.

3/17/24, 5:43 AM
@[Dash Cranston](/user/show/916934) Hopefully in the summer months. I have been on a little hiatus, but do wish to wrap this sires up
3/17/24, 5:35 AM
Your stories always manage to put a big smile on my face, Charlie! Capable of both being entertaining and incredibly hot! Your casual style of writing is really delivering in droves here, keep up the amazing work and keep those big booties coming! :wink:
3/10/24, 9:00 AM
This chapter did not disappoint! Love how it started in Yusuf's house and got some "behind the scenes" of how he lives (and setting up the possibility of future installments with the other inventions :) i would love to see every one of those inventions used in different stories/spinoffs). Sounds like John and Pete's friends will make an appearance ("say whatever you need to to get them here")! So excited for this, and to see what Yusuf will make them into. Also excited to see how the void in Pops' heart will be fixed. Is he going to forget his wife? Or assume a different role within the (new) Berger clan? I said this as a joke before (that Eddie might end up ad the family dog, if Yusuf was feeling sadistic), but I kind of am curious to see how far the gloves can take things. Seems like they can supernaturally increase cum production (beyond normal human limits)...could they handle ftm/mtf transformations? Transformations into different species? Inanimate? Again, hoping Eddie gets to share in the fun in the end, but would love to dive deeper into the lore of the gloves. And after all the changes are made, will Yusuf use the Reality Distorter to make all of his changes normal? Assuming they are permanent, how would everyone not affected by the gloves (i.e., Hank, the neighbor) deal with the Bergers' transformations? Again, not trying to influence your writing, and I really hope these posts aren't annoying 🙈 this is one of my favorite stories on the site (even with only 3 chapters posted), and it's really engaging to organize my thoughts like this. BTW, how did the surgery go? Hope you are well!

3/12/24, 3:25 AM
@[Redtrojan1987](/user/show/1770116) Thank you so much for the kind words!! Not annoying in the slightest <3 and the LASIK went perfectly! Just on a steady rotation of eye drops for a month :P But waking up to a not blurry world is lovely!

3/17/24, 4:37 AM
@The Author (name hidden due to challenge) Good, I'm so glad the surgery went well! I hope I can reach out when author names are revealed :)
Anonymous
3/17/24, 3:27 AM
Great installment! like always, how you create characters and show us their inner machinations is phenomenal. Loving how the gears in Monty’s mind are slowly moving lol
Mar 16, 2024
3/17/24, 2:29 AM
You’ve done it again. Another favorite.

3/17/24, 3:10 AM
@[Beaner](/user/show/2654278) Thank you! ✨
Anonymous
3/17/24, 1:49 AM
Loving this series!!
3/17/24, 1:20 AM
Amazing!!! I want more
3/17/24, 12:17 AM
Can't wait for the next story !!!!!
3/17/24, 12:05 AM
Whoosh... bang! That's me falling over in amazement... or maybe a horny stupor. What a seduction!!! The dialogue, the mental games, the physical manipulation... you made it all seem real and plausible. Fantastic job!
3/12/24, 9:59 PM
This was a fun ride! Only advice I’d give you is to make sure you split paragraphs up when a different person talks. Dialogue can get confusing when everything‘s in the same paragraph.

3/16/24, 8:50 PM
@[Hargoni](/user/show/912212) Thank you a lot for a good tip. This story will definitely continue and I will pay attention to your advice.
Mar 15, 2024
3/16/24, 7:08 PM
Great filthy story mmm! 😋
3/14/24, 5:18 PM
Are you fucking kidding me? Another ball out of the park! So smoldering at the front and fevered at the back. Nice job buddy!

3/14/24, 5:24 PM
@[StrongDom](/user/show/10048249) Thanks SD! Glad you are enjoying my work.

3/15/24, 11:34 PM
@[JockTopper](/user/show/10015286) Am I ever. You so get it.

3/16/24, 5:29 PM
@[StrongDom](/user/show/10048249) Thanks SD. I really appreciate when you guys reach out to tell me you like my writing.
3/16/24, 4:47 PM
You manage to continue to create new twists to this ongoing story....Keep it intense & twisted!
3/16/24, 1:12 PM
Super hot.
3/16/24, 1:08 PM
As long as 1) there is no violence and brutality towards and acted on superman and 2) that he was NOT secretly gay or bisexual before this all began and 3) he does NOT become effeminate but just submissive, then I'm all in on this story and hopefully many more chapters to cum!...
3/16/24, 1:04 PM
I too thought that that superman scene with lex luthor in the 78 movie was hot even homoerotic! When luthor (gene hackman) put the kryptonite chain around superman's (reeves) neck, instead of acting pain and feeling pain, Reeve's superman acted practically orgasmic in pleasure with the moaning! Then seeing hackman's luthor almost lovingly grabbing him by the arm and calmly and seductively leading him away towards that pool before he throws him in? Quite homoerotic it all was even when I was little watching this for the first time. I actually still all these decades later, masturbate to this scene in slow motion and pause on my DVD of it....Helped that Reeves was so so handsome and his superman outfit was always bulging and made of "tights" material.. I too miss the yahoo superman erotic stories group! Thankfully most of the stories are available elsewhere online..... My personal favorite is the greatest story ever written, a true saga, that being "SUPERMAN SUCKS"... 13 chapters with each chapter average 20 pages of incredible sexy dirty wicked erotic hot scenes after scenes and realistic dialogue too.. Other great stories from that site were "superman harem slave", "13", "the definition of torture", "the strange dealings of superman" and so on. Sadly, some of these stories were never completed for various reasons... But it's great that they are available on various websites and thankfully I managed to save the stories that are not longer around. I wish those great authors would start writing superman stories again. Favorite non superman stories authors are the likes of Kyle Cicero!
3/16/24, 12:45 PM
Jack! You have done it again. Anxious to learn more about Johnny Football and his subservience
3/16/24, 10:57 AM
This is insanely hot! This story just keeps getting better and better. The next chapter promises so much more corruption, and I can't wait to see Yusuf's final perverted masterpiece.
Anonymous
3/16/24, 1:19 AM
mmm… CUM-union… plus loved the ending of this chapter… can’t wait to see what happens to Rodney and his dad next!!!

3/16/24, 1:29 AM
@Anonymous Re: CUM-union. Can I confess to trying to get as many Christian puns as I can into the manuscript? Forgive me. It’s a sickness. As for the subplots, I’m honing them down. Right now there’s less than ten. I think. I might even tie it all up in one big bow. Let’s see…

Anonymous
3/16/24, 2:32 AM
@[absman420](/user/show/162063) do NOT apologise for any of your writing… it is another brilliant chapter… and I’m all for the puns… love the various sub plots… the more the merrier (I say that not the one having to write them)… they stand by themselves and together… Smoky and Greg was insanely hot… overall magnificent!!!

3/16/24, 10:50 AM
@Anonymous I’ve always been a subplot whore, and I can juggle quite a number. Often times, it’s the subplots that give us forward motion. Coming into this story, I “knew” the senator plot (since changed) and the six new characters. I didn’t know what I was going to do with the Budds until I did it. Now it’s become my favorite part.
Oct 31, 2023
Papaya
3/16/24, 10:37 AM
I was half-expecting Theo to turn out to be a siren or a merman! But such a sweet story! Enjoyed it very much. ❤️
Anonymous
3/16/24, 9:43 AM
Very hot story. Hoping Juan gets to see more of the island or even the hotel staff 😉
3/16/24, 8:46 AM
Seriously Charlie such good fucking work here. Damn
3/16/24, 8:13 AM
oh interesting it was a dream sequence. So Johnny was always into Sammy. looking forward to what happens next
Mar 15, 2024
3/16/24, 8:05 AM
Excellent - I was right there.
3/16/24, 12:45 AM
I was hoping Jax's thoughts would change the Doc into a huge muscle himbo and helper to Jax and Alex. An incredible series. Very well written.

3/16/24, 7:49 AM
@[Cutlerfan](/user/show/14171) I nearly got to write that section but completely ran out of time before the final submission based on my limited availability that week. The rock of desire was not placed under any protective vessel which of course means that doc is currently being radiated with desire energy, and his submissive muscle man may have his own desires directed toward doc
3/16/24, 4:40 AM
Awww I hope Monty gets a cuddle soon T-T maybe later when he hasn't been an ass lol
3/15/24, 12:37 PM
its so good. so very good. I think he should be compelled to really enjoy his smells and desire them. anyways, i am enjoying a LOT.

3/16/24, 1:23 AM
@[MChicago](/user/show/10024403) Thanks for appreciating the story. I haven't thought of smells but I might incorporate them. You can't truly say you love your owner if you don't love their scent!