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5/21/23, 9:07 PM
Oh wow , so many men doing butt stuff. Oh to be a fly on the wall to see them in action. That post credit scene at the end. It is like an all connected universe to your stories? Time to check out the rest then.

5/21/23, 9:40 PM
@[DJeiKier](/user/show/10021357) Mallory and Gary come from my series Domination, which I wrote in January 1999.
Anonymous
5/21/23, 8:49 PM
If anyone heard anything a minute ago, that was just the sound of my heart breaking into a million tiny pieces when Lex killed Gunnar, no big deal.

5/21/23, 9:05 PM
@Anonymous Lex is a complete asshole.
5/21/23, 5:49 PM
Tell us more about Brad. Will he become the doctor's slave, give up his ass?
5/21/23, 5:34 PM
The control over the workers is very erotic. Control is always the the biggest turn on to me. Great story
bbRyan
4/12/23, 4:23 AM
@Plymouth58 hope the next chapter is getting close! 🙂

5/18/23, 1:41 AM
@bbRyan Hello. I found the chapter 14 very complicated and terribly long even by my standars. There was a lot going on, and I made the mistake of breaking up the narrative dedicating time to T-Bone's, Chuy's, Terry's and Kyle's point of view, which made the chapter impossibly long and very slow. I like the slow pace, but I thought "no way, the readers are going to get bored with all of this." Chuy's part was especially long and departed a bit too far away from the main plot, I'm almost considering it for a separate story. I have already started to compress and discard what was not so important. It worries me that maybe some readers find the chapter slow in the end and a bit detouring of the plot, but there's an amount of reasons for the good of the story, so I'm doing my best to make it pay off well in the end.

Anonymous
5/21/23, 3:30 PM
@[Plymouth58](/user/show/1353762) sounds great! Ya, I think readers would be turned off by too long of a story and one that doesn't have a good focus. I hope there are some pay offs though throughout the story, even if it is long, for those of us that want to see Rayner further destroyed permanently. So, I hope there is a clear progression for him that he's continuing down a declining path.
5/21/23, 2:54 PM
Dang. always love your stories. honestly number one reason to come to this site.
5/21/23, 2:47 PM
Hot, hilarious, compelling and well written, great character development (and a lot of good foreshadowing about Freddy's latest wish, specifically). Overall 10/10,Thank you for this series.
5/21/23, 6:56 AM
Could I suggest a "No Sex" tag for this series?

5/21/23, 1:10 PM
@[Hypnothrill](/user/show/37386) Thanks for reading my work; the tag has been added.
5/21/23, 9:26 AM
Preppy, proper, obedient transformations are a fave. Can't wait for more!
5/21/23, 9:12 AM
I thought this was a clever read. It's good to know that in '23 there is still more to this story out there.
Moe
5/21/23, 8:41 AM
Read this hours ago and I’m still thinking about it. Just absolutely fantastic work that really sticks with you. I’ve been invested in this series since the first chapter and I can’t wait to see how it concludes, keep up the great work. I don’t know if I’ve ever felt such sympathy for a character on this website as I do Freddy, so here’s hoping for a happy ending for him.
5/21/23, 7:18 AM
Great introduction. Hopefully there will be more chapters. There must be more ways Paul can learn to show Clay proper respect. Maybe he can also help some more of his coworkers find the right way.
5/21/23, 7:13 AM
Great start! I can't wait to see what Clay's second set of suggestions for Paul and Anton will be!
5/21/23, 6:05 AM
Wow. The master at work. Got so excited to see this series had a new chapter and this was totally stellar. Super hot use of the mind control kink, braided beautifully with a kind of heartbreaking crash into reality for Freddy. We also got a peek into why Uri is the way he is. I laughed, I cried, I got hard. Thanks for sharing your talents with us.
Martin
5/20/23, 10:52 PM
I'm devastated. Now I really know how much class and depth a mind-control smut story can have. I'll never even be able to come into the same ballpark, much less hope to write anything that could stand its ground next to a story like this. I'll never write another story unless you promise to get down to the level of us mortal authors!

5/21/23, 3:24 AM
@[Martin](/user/show/125990) I feel this too. Very much.
5/21/23, 1:09 AM
Soo this was mostly hot and sexy, though I have to admit I'm not a fan of the end. Anyway, focusing on thr rest, yeah hot. The way the two agents were made good was hot. And so was all the bits of sex. Nicely done. Hot story.

5/21/23, 1:15 AM
@[Heru Kane](/user/show/56823) You've already mentioned in the past you didn't like links to my other stories, so that's ok. I thought I'd distract you with all the rimming. You still noticed. :)

5/21/23, 1:59 AM
@[Mafisto](/user/show/600927) Oh don't get me wrong, I totally noticed and focused on all the rimming and butt stuff. I noticed it, loved it, and was grateful for it! So thanks!
5/21/23, 12:39 AM
Honestly, it’s stories like these that keep me coming back to this site. Uri trapping Freddie in a himbo haze was so twisted and hot. Can’t wait for the final installment. Bravo!
Jonanator
5/20/23, 11:21 PM
Interesting. Hope there is more.

Majin Charles
5/21/23, 12:30 AM
@Jonanator there may be! thanks :)
Anonymous
5/13/23, 3:01 PM
This happened on Captain planet; I remember it well.

Ascrwlus
5/13/23, 5:32 PM
@Anonymous Yep. Took inspiration from it. Loved that episode, though not seen in some time. Kwame should have been converted like the rest.

5/20/23, 10:07 AM
@Ascrwlus Which episode is that?

Anonymous
5/20/23, 12:23 PM
@[Allan Weiss](/user/show/472888) Utopia. On rewatch, it's nowhere near as good as I remember... I recall Wheeler getting camo pants and chonky leather boots... The actual aesthetic is way more glam than I recall...

Ascrwlus
5/21/23, 12:24 AM
@Anonymous That is usually the case. Same with The Traitor episode of G. I. Joe. Hot concept, but meh viewing.
5/20/23, 11:46 PM
Good story, highly fun and sexy. Even without there being sex. Oh to be Clay and have some good boys. Good story! Very fun
5/20/23, 10:28 AM
If Jake has any sense, he will comply but I suspect that is not what you plan for him. Eventually I do hope Matt becomes his master even if he still is a slave and Jake will get to love sucking Matt's cock and taking it in his ass and eating Matt's cum. Thank you this entertaining story and I hope you continue it for a very long time.

5/20/23, 10:35 PM
@[br6205](/user/show/10027864) Thank you, mate. We’ll have to see if Jake can widen up and understand his place.
5/20/23, 10:15 PM
I love these! Hope you continue writing them :)
5/20/23, 10:12 PM
Another great chapter. I am pretty confident that Matt wants both revenge and Jake. Hopefully he does becomes Jake's master; he knows how to give and take. For Jake, it feels like it could still go either way, accepting his new place or fighting it. It will be interesting what twists that brings. And for Callum, a jock turned rubber gimp pup is awesome! A muscled alpha jock now on all fours in black rubber is the best! The pills in his system is a clever sadistic twist over caging him too. Definitely hope to read more of him too. I wonder if there is anything left of Callum in there?
Martin
5/20/23, 8:32 PM
I just came around reading this. Every series of yours is really, I mean **really** special. This chapter is starting so disturbing and hard to read, something you'd not expect on a site like this. And then it turns into a fairy tale, creating a background for the previous chapters. And an *amazing* sex scene at the end. I'm afraid so many people won't ever make it to the end of your story, as they might be discouraged by the first 2 thirds of the story. Most people are looking to wank here, and I'm afraid your stories are like lost gems around here. I'm so happy that you post the stories on our sites and I can only hope that they'll find the audience and appreciation they deserve. I'm looking forward to the followup chapters!

CasualWanderer82
5/20/23, 8:46 PM
@[Martin](/user/show/125990) Your words mean more than you think...thank you for this. I doubt myself sometimes, thinking that maybe my work and style just isn't tailored for this genre. But feedback like yours gives me encouragement to keep going. I'm humbled. Truly.
5/20/23, 8:19 PM
I’ll start by commenting, hoping I haven’t before, on how much Nu’s writing has improved. There is so much character development in this story, and it’s so well done. I love Linden’s Throne, but this story is so much smoother and the character beats tug so much harder on the right part of my feels. I love the character development in this story as a whole, but especially this chapter in particular. Freddy working through his feelings and figuring himself out, and confronting his feelings and the things he’s been ignoring, is great and relatable. And it was satisfying to see Freddy confront some truths about himself. I’ve been waiting for that and wanting it for a few chapters at least now. Reminds me of an argument between two married characters on Succession recently. It was really cathartic. Besides the Freddy of it all, Uri revealing some really big shit about himself, and not reflecting on it at all, is also great. And then Uri, in predictable Uri fashion, makes a stupid wish that eliminates even the possibility of Freddy actually even proving that he likes Uri. So now he didn’t get what he really wanted and was scared to ask for, and he’s made his own prophecy true, because how is Freddy going to forgive this? Pretending that Nu didn’t have a happy ending in mind. Speaking of happy endings… Freddy having his agency taken away wasn’t horrifying to me because a) it was really hot b) he finds it really hot and doesn’t have enough time to dwell on it because of the pheromones and c) I’m confident that Nu has a happy ending in mind and that’s what Freddy’s wish is going to result in. Bryant being there is going to change things. Bryant being a room mate now is going to change things. I actually love character assassination stories. It’s a guilty pleasure, but only works for me if I know the character’s destroyed can reclaim their identity, or if the characters are so shallow that I don’t care about them. In this story, Nu balanced things perfectly so that I care about Freddy and it felt like maybe he’s fucked (being not fucked) but I’m so confident that his wish at the end will change things for all of them in a positive way that I’m not bothered at all by Freddy’s sudden change into a himbo. Ok, besides all of that, or partially because of it, it was an incredibly hot chapter again. Freddy getting checked out by guys when walking around in the Tom of Finland outfit is hot. Then him getting turned on thinking about it and jerking off in the changing room, is hot. Then getting turned into a fuck machine stud top, is hot. Even his reaction to Bryant showing up and trying to be honest with Bryant but unable to stop himself from being happy and excited about fucking Uri some more, is hot. I’m very eager to read the next and final chapter. I am deliberately not guessing at what Freddy’s wish was, so that I’m surprised by it. I’m excited to see how all 3 of the roommates end up. I’m also not saying I expect more, but I am excited to think that this might not be the last thing that Nu writes and that he’ll still write more stories as good as or better than this. I’m am very happy this was continued and done so well. I am interested in anything Nu writes but this is definitely my favorite so far.
Swizz
5/20/23, 7:55 PM
Nice start! Very intrigued to see where this leads.
5/20/23, 2:35 PM
Like the slow burn. Almost like edging since we know the premise this story is based. Keep going.

5/20/23, 7:16 PM
@[TexMuscle](/user/show/10002223) Thank you for the support; this is a slow tempo section in the musical score that is this story. But I definitely wanted to put in the potential bond between Matthew and Eric as it will be something that comes up later in the story.
5/20/23, 7:09 PM
I can only echo what everyone else has said; you came in with a very good introduction to you and your writing. I thoroughly enjoyed it and look forward to seeing what comes next.
5/20/23, 6:46 PM
What a great start! Would’ve not have guessed this is just your first story given level of detail and slow buildup.
Anonymous
5/20/23, 6:44 PM
good story with focus on hypnosis. Let us see more