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1/16/26, 1:06 AM
Thank you so much for not abandoning the story. I enjoyed this chapter, as did the entire series. It was interesting to watch the fall of the last Price. I expect to see more interesting characters and plot twists; you're a master at this. It will be interesting to see if a character emerges who can resist Domenico's plans and thwart him without falling under his spell? Will there be a clever and cunning hero?

1/19/26, 6:42 AM
@[Zander-1](/user/show/10015044) I would never abandon it, I absolutely love the story and you guys for supporting me writing something that means a lot to me, I even have a planned sequel for this once it ends! I was just very much occupied with life and struggling with this particular chapter, but don't worry, what's next will be out much faster than it took me to finish this one! I will say we are in for a lot of sex, and more weird mindfuckery both for Domenico's slaves and Domenico himself.
1/12/26, 1:50 AM
A masterpiece. It's a shame the story is published so rarely. I'd love to know what happened in the prologue related to the incident and who was able to successfully confront Domenico. I'll be looking forward to the continuation.

1/19/26, 6:39 AM
@[Zander-1](/user/show/10015044) Ah the incident. Don't worry about it, you'll see. I will say, it will probably surprise you how things end up for him! But I'm very thrilled about this story and already working on what's next for it!
1/19/26, 5:19 AM
Sure do wish we get to see The Crucible
1/18/26, 12:28 PM
Goodness, the mindscape in this chapter has more layers going on than Inception. And Cameron wanting to copy himself into Joe! Its getting hard to keep up with how many different versions of him there are at this point. Henry is reduced to Hank's dog once again and Joe very nearly succumbs to the same fate, though he seemed to quite enjoy that prospect. Is there anyone in the SDF that wouldn't be happier as a caged and collared pup? When this situation all blows over I think Nick might just find himself handling a whole pack of super pups to help them all let off some steam between missions.

1/18/26, 3:01 PM
@[phillipsm](/user/show/919402) Would Nick even mind that? Nah, of course he wouldn't! The next chapter is a continuation of this one, stuff that was meant to be dealt with here, but,... well,... y'know,... I ran out of space :3 Maybe we'll see how this whole fight wraps up and what that means for our tail-wagging heroes?

1/19/26, 2:30 AM
@[Blazargus](/user/show/10012784) Oh yes I'm sure Nick would be very happy with that outcome. I sincerely hope the forces of good with triumph over their sinister foes and wayward allies. Simultaneously trying to manifest at least one ending where they all remain tail-wagging supers, preferably with a nicer master though.
Anonymous
1/19/26, 12:47 AM
Is there a sequel or another chapter?
Willie Cici
1/18/26, 9:59 PM
I'm loving this series.
1/18/26, 8:55 PM
No head shave?!

1/18/26, 9:49 PM
@[Meister](/user/show/958190) good suggestion. Haven't told Ray's story yet.
1/18/26, 8:25 PM
Loving this story, can’t wait for Luke to be humiliated further.
1/18/26, 8:13 PM
This is a great story
1/17/26, 4:34 PM
This is very hot. I think it’s funny. The hottest idea in this is Seductra winning, taking over the whole world, and everyone being ok with it now that she’s won, and the mental gymnastics to rationalize her winning as being best for everyone. I loved it.

1/18/26, 7:57 PM
@[MonsterMash62](/user/show/3332) I absolutely agree!