Recent Comments

9/9/25, 10:22 AM
I agree with BlindSeer0's comment wholeheartedly. What I will say though is that reading this story kinda feels like being edged. What I mean by that is that the writing is so good at keeping me intrigued about what's gonna happen, that I'm like getting hyped for future story beats that might not even happen. At the same time, the erotica part has taken a back seat to the story, which is fine of course, but it definitely leaves me wanting more 🤭 I can definitely relate to Ollie, wanting to squish some big ol' pecs

9/10/25, 9:16 AM
@[ThomBaws](/user/show/908711) Oh, gosh, that's some lovely praise. I am, hahah, quite familiar with edging for long periods, but this is my first time writing a slow-burn. I prefer quick, down-to-business relationships like Ollie and Mo's. That, of course, only happened because I felt behooved to force some erotica into the first chapter. I intend to stick with it nonetheless and show how such a relationship can be done healthily. I'm debating compressing the next two chapters into one as I don't want to drag things out _too_ much. Plus, there's no point in forcing incident to mark time. It's a journal; sometimes there's nothing to really say! Besides... I have big plans for October. Halloween is going to be very entertaining! Ah, but I've said too much already! I relate to Ollie, too. Most musclemen around here are straight, and I can't exactly go up to a dude and go, "Hey, can I grope your chest for my own sexual gratification? It won't be weird, I promise!" Always glad to see your comments, BTW. I look forward to them.
9/10/25, 7:23 AM
Very nice indeed! But a little more descriptive process of Tony's downfall would've been a blast I think. Anyway I long to read about the next step...
Sep 3, 2025
9/10/25, 7:14 AM
This was better than I expected or could imagined. If this is an actual story series, I cannot wait what the next part will look like! Great job.
9/10/25, 6:12 AM
Original idea, beautiful pacing, and delectable description! What's not to love about this story?! Well perhaps one thing. I tend to take some moral issue with plots involving non-consensual enslavement. Still, in this case consent was freely given by Lord Warrington so i suppose that counts for something. Even more relevant to my own personal acceptance of this enslavement plot was the degree to which it ramped up my own libido and pleasure-filled mind. I could literally feel myself relax into mindlessness unaware of anything except the throbbing of my hard cock, my twitching boi-snatch, my swelling aching testicles ...and of course the whispering instructions on how to assemble ear bud cases.
9/10/25, 6:12 AM
A hot story and an interesting setup
Anonymous
9/10/25, 5:12 AM
I want to become a clown
9/10/25, 3:50 AM
Wow that was stellar! Loved Cedric's character throughout.
Bottom Jock
9/10/25, 3:18 AM
Loved the entire chapter! Wow that really scratched my bi-gay cuck itch! I'm in love with Noah's big 10 incher!
9/9/25, 9:12 PM
Fantastic idea! This approach of what it would be entering puberty in this fictional world is very interesting, because it's practically what is happening to the main character, just faster.

9/10/25, 1:42 AM
@[NayarLeng](/user/show/10045868) Exactly, bro, glad we see eye to eye on this :wink:
9/10/25, 1:34 AM
5-star story!