Recent Comments

Anonymous
12/20/15, 6:08 PM
Edlam first I want to say you are a great writer and I am a big fan. But I think we may have pushed you too hard to deliver something quick. To be honest this chapter was just meh for me. I have no problem with the bullying or incest but it's true that this comes off feeling a bit sad. Why are you not having the re-educator being used constantly. The whole premise of this story is based on it and it's almost completely forgotten about in this chapter. Also who cares about that blow job if he wasn't mind controlled to do it. I could read a story about a whiny fag giving a blow job to his brother anywhere it's pretty common. This chapter just seems to go nowhere. Please understand that I really love your work and I'm only giving my humble opinion but this chapter was boring and not sexy and I know you are capable of so much better. Once again I really am a big fan and hope you can appreciate the constructive feedback.
Anonymous
12/20/15, 5:41 PM
I dont mind the incest (and if you add the father, thats awesome) but... all the bully stuff its just too much for me, its really sad...
Anonymous
12/20/15, 4:38 PM
The parental cruelty reactions are too well-written to be hot. :(
Anonymous
12/20/15, 4:29 PM
Totally agree with the comment below. You're the one who must continue "remote control daddy" It has a lot of potential
Anonymous
12/20/15, 4:27 PM
But I think it should be better with the dad as well. We have seen the play of jj and jake too long! We need the father and Eric!!!
Steve10185
12/20/15, 4:15 PM
Please, please stay away from going further on the incest stuff in future chapters. I am really hoping the parents aren't involved in this sexually, it's the fastest way to lose an otherwise great hardon you're giving me! :) So many more avenues to take this without incest.
slavethruhypno@yahoo.com
12/20/15, 4:05 PM
Was good to see Jake's throat get raped -- with Jake so wiling to do the raping himself. Jake will find his salvation (pun intended) when he accepts what so many of us learn to accept -- what filthy little queers we are when faced with a Superior Man.
Anonymous
12/20/15, 3:00 PM
Would love to see Jake turn the tables on Alex. And take control of Alex
Anonymous
12/20/15, 2:57 PM
Oh and you planning on writing the finale of "I love him but..."? Or was the last chapter the finale?
Anonymous
12/20/15, 2:41 PM
Plz reverse the hypnosis on jake and jj. Torture Alex instead