Recent Comments

Anonymous
4/7/16, 10:45 PM
Loved this!!!! You're writing and the changes are awesome...very hot!!!
Anonymous
4/7/16, 10:34 PM
Hot concept, hot execution, tons of potential for follow-ups. Love the black and blue ink. :p
Anonymous
4/7/16, 10:22 PM
Amazing story! Loved the race transformation!! Very hot! Can't wait to read future works!!!!
Anonymous
4/7/16, 10:22 PM
Amazing story! Loved the race transformation!! Very hot! Can't wait to read future works!!!!
Anonymous
4/7/16, 9:56 PM
That was one of the best stories I've read in a while. If only my contributions to this site were as well-developed and well-written. I'm envious. Great story!!!
Anonymous
4/7/16, 9:22 PM
Excellent story!!
Lenny
4/7/16, 9:12 PM
thanks Tattcub
Anonymous
4/7/16, 8:59 PM
Thank /you/ for the horny read. Really like the implications of the ending. I sure would partake in the "poison"!
Anonymous
4/7/16, 7:59 PM
That was very hot!
Viridian
4/7/16, 7:25 PM
I liked this. The writing has a nice flow to it and the idea is fun, but precisely because it was good it made me want more. With something like three times the current length you could have really gotten into their heads and made us feel the changes, making the characters more like people and less like clay being shaped. Also, the change from the guy being transformed into a potent and aware reality shifter seemed a bit hurried. Overall, a good story. Thank you.