Recent Comments

8/25/18, 8:06 PM
Super story! Please continue!
Aug 23, 2018
Anonymous
8/25/18, 6:18 PM
The tumblr page doesn’t exist when you copy it and paste into tumblr. Ahh such a shame.
Mark
8/25/18, 4:43 PM
Brillliant!
8/25/18, 1:37 PM
Thanks Martin much appreciated I used my phone to add it. Couldn't embedd it into the text
Martin
8/25/18, 1:10 PM
Kane, I've edited your link to use "proper" markdown. I hope you don't mind.
Anonymous
8/25/18, 12:04 PM
Next chapter please <3
Anonymous
8/25/18, 9:59 AM
Hm, so the boy who cared about a pizza deliverman's feeling is now whoring his stepdad. As hot as the idea of son fucking father, this change of character is quite rapid, no guilt at all?
Kyle
8/25/18, 9:10 AM
Love this concept. Very much looking forward to other ways Kane's slave status asserts itself. Great work!
Martin
8/25/18, 7:31 AM
Welcome! Quite opposite, I really like the idea that there are women who get excited by reading stories here. I'm sure that there are a few, but you're the first to "out" herself :)
Anonymous
8/25/18, 6:51 AM
Do me a favor: be a writer. Do it now - if you are not a writer already. Someone mentioned Black Mirror, and indeed, your story is THAT good. What a cathartic, shocking ending! Make a softer version, detail a bit more the secondary characters, turn it into a screenplay, get youself an agent and contact a producer asap.