Recent Comments

Anonymous
9/13/18, 9:32 PM
god i love this story. i would love for you to do another with mariposa . d:-)
Subboy93
9/13/18, 5:13 PM
Moooorrrrrreeeeee
Sep 10, 2018
9/13/18, 1:38 PM
Hi Chris, sorry to read that there will be no second part ........ but hope you reconsider 😀😀😀😀
9/12/18, 10:40 PM
Thanks guys for your comments! Glad this first part has caught some of your interests. I'm still working on the rest of the story, hopefully I can work out the second part in not too long away. Thanks!
biguynj
9/12/18, 3:59 PM
Always good to see a writer revisit a work and continue.  Really enjoy this story
Anonymous
9/12/18, 12:05 PM
Hopping for the part 2, it's already to long of awaiting
9/12/18, 5:21 AM
@Darmani Zach was still within the bounds of the house when David's wish was made, which had dramatically more pronounced effects as seen in Jake and Brendan. Combine with Brendan's earlier wish for someone both he and Jake would love are doing double duty on our corrupt policeman.
9/12/18, 1:12 AM
nerd here. what wish, if any had this effect on Zach? and why the others? David more or less made sense. he is in the slurry house so its 'easier to have sex' with him.
Boston Satyr
9/12/18, 12:53 AM
I'm hoping the genie becomes more sadistic & cruel, manipulating the men into more & more twisted wishes.
Bmax
9/12/18, 12:42 AM
Great to see that your back Tomozco. Love this first installment and can't wait to see where this goes as our "hero" (victim?) loses control and becomes a puppet to who ever is calling the shots and reporgramming him. I hope we won't have to wait too long for the next installment. thanks.