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Swizzington
1/7/20, 12:28 AM
Also, I'm not sure if you'll see this message, LongtimeFan, but could you possibly shoot me an email? My address is at the top of the page. I want to ask you about something in private.
Swizzington
1/7/20, 12:20 AM
I'm hoping to get *The Further Adventures of a Mind Controller* finished in the first quarter of 2020. I'm like 7 chapters in right now. But no promises :-)
1/7/20, 12:12 AM
A very good story; you drew me in and had me hooked. I look forward to seeing the story continue, but the ending made me want to write my own continuation as do a number of stories on the site. That's a testament to your writing and the strength of it; I hope I can draw upon it to make something that can sit in the ball park of the world that you've created.
Anonymous
1/6/20, 11:57 PM
Any ideas when we can expect the next installment?
Good boy
1/6/20, 11:56 PM
praise be Master Todd i want to obey him
1/6/20, 11:51 PM
Also... I just remember... i keep thinking on joe mind "liberation"... if the chess pieces nathan fix where from joe side, that means he restore his original personality... but what happen with Todd's pieces??? When joe took one, a new treat was added to his personality... so i guess since nathan doesn't know that... that means joe was still with all the extra treats todd add to him (like adoration to todd, submissiveness and the others)?
1/6/20, 11:41 PM
I think I don't have a lot to say but thank you! This story was a wonderful experience ^ ^ I feel sorry about the cock shrink of joe and nathan... but besides that it was an amazing series :D I keep an eye on the next series ^ ^
Swizzington
1/6/20, 11:39 PM
He is the main character in my next story.
Anonymous
1/6/20, 11:19 PM
Sorry am I missing something or is Mr. Zeiss a character I should know about?
Swizzington
1/6/20, 11:04 PM
I did try to make it seem like Dylan wasn't too happy about doing what he did to Nathan; an extension of his comments in the real world just before that. But maybe I missed the mark. He wasn't pleased about it, but he had no choice but to obey. Being snarky or showing a lack of enthusiasm is much easier than actually disobeying. Z, Zeiss' escape will be showcased in the sequel. The timelines of the two stories overlap in the middle :-)