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11/21/25, 4:16 AM
Can't wait for more
11/20/25, 6:37 PM
It's good that you know where you're taking your story. I hope you'll have interesting characters, not cardboard cutouts. The main character is engaging so far, and I hope he'll continue to reveal more and more sides of himself as a person.

Nico's Beef Co
11/20/25, 7:13 PM
@[Zander-1](/user/show/10015044) I hope to deliver on that. It will be slower series with some chapters being light on sexual scenes to set up everything.

11/20/25, 9:26 PM
@Nico's Beef Co I'm not against sex scenes; in fact, I'm actually for them. The main thing is that everything is well written, so the reader can easily visualize everything. I'd also like to see at least one or two intelligent characters who aren't dumb and act intelligently, just like the protagonist. For example, if the protagonist wants to enslave someone and control them, they'll realize something's wrong with our protagonist and will act suspiciously and very cautiously, conducting an investigation and even learning that they have the ability to control people. I'd like to see not only future victims for the protagonist's harem but also more resourceful characters who can escape or resist once they learn who our protagonist is and what abilities he possesses.

Nico's Beef Co
11/21/25, 3:46 AM
@[Zander-1](/user/show/10015044) Yes, I like my characters to have their own agendas and goals. It makes it easier to write longer stories as well. I'm not a big fan of characters getting easily sway or dommed. I want them to resist and sway until the big breaking moment.
11/21/25, 3:45 AM
It seems interesting, but I'd like more character development, which unfortunately wasn't the case in the first book. Who is Owen? Who is Y? What are their goals? How did this start? Can anyone with some sense of humor stop them? And why do the characters sometimes behave so stupidly? There are still a lot of questions, but I hope the answers will appear in the next chapters.
Anonymous
11/21/25, 2:00 AM
Great work as always!
Mark
11/21/25, 1:49 AM
Can't wait for the next part!
11/20/25, 11:29 PM
May not be converted but definitely have me thinking how it would feel, Prostate orgasm is one of my biggest curiosities sir
11/17/25, 6:44 AM
Wonderful stuff. I've never read such a developed, specific reprogramming of the POV, plus orcs! It's also nice and long, original, edited well... Thanks and know that this is my new favorite by far :) Just curious, how did you develop this story? You just sat down and wrote it, or you knew some aspects that you wanted to include and just made them work together? I write bits but I can never flesh out ideas to this degree.

11/20/25, 8:56 PM
@[speaktothemanagerwithin](/user/show/10066984) I’m very glad you enjoyed the story! Having the development complicated specifically feels nice, because I’ve been working hard on making things flow nicely. As for how I’d develop it, I’d say the latter thing you said is accurate. I have some ideas that I know I’m going to include and I find the most natural progression for them throughout the story.
11/20/25, 8:37 PM
Incredible. Thank you Sir. 😊
11/20/25, 7:58 PM
Your skill of world building, when the focus is just two characters is crazy good. We have slang like “the howl” and literature that exists, which makes everything feel more alive. Awesome story.
Anonymous
11/20/25, 7:41 PM
This is one of my all-time favorites. So hot!